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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ILTHBEB

TL,nice to see ur post again n ur post is the mirror how ishani's character is being destroyed futher in each track frm 1st to till now. Cvs hv given designation the female protagonist to ishani but totally failed to give real assess in her designation.
Whats fun to seen ishveer's romance/scene,ishani's coming back to ranveer whereever in her every step with ranveer there is scratched her promise(despite everything is crystal clear to her) to go back to someone else in future leaving ranveer after using him emotionally! Ranveer is her hubby,her love(she claims) despite it in her mind the priority is her promise that she has given to an out preson which she wl keep as boundary for making distance with ranveer whenever she wl come close to ranveer!



ILTHBEBL, totally agree with you that the charm in those scenes is gone due to this lurking danger of the promise.. Ranveer has also promised Ritika that he will marry her after divorce .. but we all know where it is going since Ritika will get exposed in this track !
But Ishani's promise to Shikhar is so illogical.. In 2 months, has Shikhar really built up so much bharosa that she has to sacrifice her love and Ranveer's bharosa of years ! CVs have really effed up her..

This track could have done much better with they showing some better reasoning for her to come back, she keeping Shikhar in dark, Keeping RV alert that she is faking memory loss and he too pretending that he has bought into the memory loss.. there are so many possibilities.. but nope.. the CVs just dont want to spend effort in writing sensible tracks..




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another weak thing TL, which I forgot to mention in my earlier reply is how does Ranveer believe Shikhar that she thinks of him as husband and loves him ?
Ishani is supposed to have lost memory beyond the jail incident..
Before going to jail, she more than made it clear to Ranveer that she did not love him, she loved Chirag, was living with him only because of Chirag's plan, faked her love for him etc etc.. She even signed the divorce papers..
She did not meet him in jail..😡😡😡

So speaking of that, Ranveer should have expected an Ishani who was hating him assuming that ML was real.. how can she be suddenly be all loving him and mera pati and all that.. They never showed Ranveer thinking about all this or asking all this to Ishani ?? Nor did they showed Ishani or Shikhar thinking about this.. This is just as illogical as that "I want to save Ranveer" epiphany..

I know .. this is effing stupid.. but such blackhole size holes they have in this track !!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mas123

Bcoz of her promise, she is keeping herself away from ranveer. Does it mean that she is ready to sleep with shikhar in future

Idiot she, I wanna bash her like anything

But.. I want to remain positive... Bcoz deep in my heart I do believe that she won't return... Rather she will start ignoring shikhar which will help him in turning obsessive...

i doubt they'd ever go THIS far with her mas. coz if they do, then thats that, Ishaani and the show and IshVeer are dead with no return. so no they wont do the whole sleeping thing... and CP on that, I'm furious at her character right now🥱😆😆 like i kept saying on FB, going by how this show works, i thought its Ishaani's turn to get redeemed and Ranveer's turn to eff up😛🤣🤣 however Ranveer is perfectly fine, Ishaani went for a toss even before being redeemed🥱🥱

and no she wont return, this toh everyone knows😆😆 and CP on that last bit..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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mind blowing post
she has no right to say all those
she is being cruel and heartless
she seems to have double standards now
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant post Tl When she made the promise I was like

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: matsh

TL Res
I have sooo much to say !!

Thanks for the post TL and you got it right on the head !!

This track seems to be just to butcher Ishani more and more as if what they did with her in last track was nt sufficient enough ! She was already shown stupid, mahan, not trusting enough in Ranveer, agreeing for marriage with Shikhar just for mahanata sake ...

Now I thought she came back for Ranveer but no ... exactly as we said, where the hell this "I must save Ranveer" thing came from ?

and what is her plan after Ritika exposing.. Tata Tata bye bye to Ranveer ?
Why the effing save him from Ritika then ? He was better off married to Ritika..

This serial has so much frustrated me that I can't pull my hair enough !

CVs - we are not beggers here just for IshVeer scenes... we expect a sensible story track, yes, you can get away with some stupidities but not so many gaping holes even a five year old can see !!
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Ditto CP on that, I'm getting repetitive yes, but like i replied to mas too, i thought its Ranveer's turn to eff up now looking at how pathetic Ishaani was in the IshKar RitVeer track😆 but nope, Ishaani butchering is still on and Ranveer is still completely fine👏😆😆

I TOLD YOU GUYS!!! i told you🤣🤣 i said na she would've promised to return🥱😆😆 and ditto CP on that, where did it come from, when she never indicated she'll try harming him in any way whatsoever😕😆

Ditto another CP on this bit here.. If she kept away now only and went ahead and married Shi and let him marry Ri, yes he'd live his entire life in a bubble, but he'd at least have his friend with him.. she returned to take away his friend THEN take away his love🥱🥱🥱

yeah like your son🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Greetings TL,
What you have said is from viewers POV...as you know many things...but from character's POV... things are okay..

I can explain...the story writing of matsh is from character pov..each has its pov so the viewer knew what is one character thinking about other and vice versa...but they themself seldom know

So you are bound to be disappointed if you bring your thought towards it ...for any scene to begin with as it will be against your expectation level... since you already know what is going in his or her head...

There are many things i want to say will update it further...

please think in that perspective too...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mint2

TL, I totally agree with u. This promise thing has really taken out all the sense and charm from this track. A track which could be one of a good track of this show, this promise had taken out all its charm. If this promise thing wouldn't be there than Ishani's coming back to Waghela house for the sake of saving Ranveer from Ritika or to take her moms murder revenge from her was fully justificable IMO.

ditto CP, its just to keep the tension in the air nothing else🥱 the entire will she wont she🥱🥱 you know this could COMPLETELY backfire on you people if people start thinking she'll leave again, since no one will even bother with the current track going all, mehhh she's only back for 2-3 days who cares🥱🥱🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ILTHBEB

TL,nice to see ur post again n ur post is the mirror how ishani's character is being destroyed futher in each track frm 1st to till now. Cvs hv given designation the female protagonist to ishani but totally failed to give real assess in her designation.
Whats fun to seen ishveer's romance/scene,ishani's coming back to ranveer whereever in her every step with ranveer there is scratched her promise(despite everything is crystal clear to her) to go back to someone else in future leaving ranveer after using him emotionally! Ranveer is her hubby,her love(she claims) despite it in her mind the priority is her promise that she has given to an out preson which she wl keep as boundary for making distance with ranveer whenever she wl come close to ranveer!

ditto CP On that bit here, I'm one of those who has genuinely defended Ranveer being kicked out and Ishaani's anger coz i got where it came from. she felt cheated by her best friend over the fact that he's been harbouring love in his heart for years for her and disguising it as friendship, but ever since she came out of jail, i cant identify with her AT ALL!!! i have no idea why her brain works the way it does or why she thinks what she does anymore.. and thats just a complete fail on the part of the writers, the fact that people cant even relate to their lead anymore👎🏼

and bang on the 2nd PG too, she claims he's her love, but her promise is more important then that supposed love. she claims to have gone ahead and gotten engaged to Shi for Ranveer, yet she's ready to leave the same Ranveer for Shi... bravo👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: BeEverVectorMan

Greetings TL,

What you have said is from viewers POV...as you know many things...but from character's POV... things are okay..

I can explain...the story writing of matsh is from character pov..each has its pov so the viewer knew what is one character thinking about other and vice versa...but they themself seldom know

So you are bound to be disappointed if you bring your thought towards it ...for any scene to begin with as it will be against your expectation level... since you already know what is going in his or her head...

There are many things i want to say will update it further...

please think in that perspective too...



Really, can you explain what is Ishani's POV here and how she came with the idea that Ritika will harm Ranveer when the lady has been trying hard to make him marry her ??
and also from Ishani's perspective, when she has already told Shikhar that she does not love him, what is the possible reason of going back to him, even after knowing that Ranveer loves her so much and can risk his own life for protecitng her ?

I am really curious to know..

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