Hey MM... βοΈ βοΈ βοΈ
Well I am commenting after 8 to 10 chapters...π π Had been lazy... but now...
First of all congratulations for completing 50 chapters dear...π π U r going great... and I wish that soon we'll celebrate a century also...π€π€
The story progressed so much... the way ranveer sacrificed himself was sad...π he knew the consequences but still went ahead... it was like he saved her life but they both lost their own... π π
But that's over now...π π
really loved the way shikhar made him confess everything... Had it not been like that he could've wasted his entire life wearing that useless faade... they both needed that realization... After all 8 years is a long long time...π π π
And now... What can I say... Love is in the air...π π
their kiss...π³ Her proposal...π His reply to her proposal...π π Him trying to impress her by making pizza... Ishani turning into a tease with an added element of naughtiness (her dialogues was too good..π€ͺ)... wow MM... u r creating beautiful moments and writing everything wonderfully... π π U say that romance is not ur genre... but u r really doing a great job... ππΌ ππΌ
Disha is too sweet here but a new tension is coming up... But now they all r together I think they can face it much easily... π
ur story is really good... Keep writing... π€ π€
Edited by NidsJ - 10 years ago