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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey MM..
Do me a favor if possible give me summary of this ff.. Vo kya hai na its 48 chapter that will take so much time..i want to read this but...
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Posted: 10 years ago
MM, yes, please do it. I'm already feeling so bad for him. :( He should never go through this hell and he's enduring Ishani's hatred for so goddamned years! Oh, my! His forbearance is definitely one of his greatest qualities. Do update soon. Can't wait for next chapters.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman

Hey MM..
Do me a favor if possible give me summary of this ff.. Vo kya hai na its 48 chapter that will take so much time..i want to read this but...



Hey 😊 Emm , well here Ranveer and Ishani both are in love with eachother from the start , but Ranveer has a mysterious and painful past and he works as a policeofficer 😊 It is about Ishveer 's journey as friends who are afraid to too tell each other 's feelings to lifepartners who have to go through different situations in life 😊

Hope this help , my chapters is not the longest so I don't think it will take that much time 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

MM, yes, please do it. I'm already feeling so bad for him. :( He should never go through this hell and he's enduring Ishani's hatred for so goddamned years! Oh, my! His forbearance is definitely one of his greatest qualities. Do update soon. Can't wait for next chapters.



Every difficulties that came in their life has always made them closer , and as sad as it to think about his situation , equally painful for Ishani 😭 But my Ishveer might be people who sacrifice like in the show . but this two have a brain 😆 Hope this make you feel better 😳
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I finally got around to reading the whole chap. (yes, yes, I know its so late, no excuses for that. ) But seriously, this was SOME chapter!
This is by far the most interesting dynamics about Ranveer and Kailash I've ever read so far. ⭐️⭐️ While everyone prefers to keep Kailash as the good guy and Amba as the screeching owl (well who can blame us, it's self-explanatory why we do that 🤢🤢), you opted to go vice-versa. And so far, it has been a rewarding experience.
There is a strange angst with which you write their relationship that strikes a chord with my heart straight. 😳😳 A son who has seen his father mistreat his mother and nearly kill her has to end up asking for help to the same man years later. The same son has seen the murder of his best friend and lost his other one on the same accord.😕😕 Yet he was willing enough to stand on his doorstep to ask for his help, as long it protected the people he loved. 😭😭
This Ranveer of yours is as self-destructive as the original one, quite a bit more if I may say so, yet he shines out like a black diamond, his darkness giving him a carved beauty. ❤️❤️His soul is untarnished and pure, yet he finds himself drowning in the blackness of his past. 🥺🥺 Its what defines him as a person over here. 😃😃
Kailash on the other hand, was a surprise. 😲😲 As pleasantly surprised as I am that the ruthless and cold, demeaning man within him as died, its too late to make amends. 😒😒 As the saying goes, it's never too late, but sometimes, circumstances weigh heavier than your will. 😔😔 Ranveer may feel pain, remorse and regret for what elapsed between them all those years ago, but the fact remains that Kailash is the reason why Ranveer is what he is. 🤔🤔 It may be good or bad, but the fact stands. 😊😊
And need I say anything about the quote you used about how it feels when all the people you love tend to hate you? 👍🏼👍🏼 This was amongst one of the best quotes I've come across so far, because the quote has a brutality in it, harsh as it is, yet the pain latched alongside makes it all the more real.
MM, you have really stunned me with your ability to write angst, and I must say that your writing has a different edge to it altogether. 🤗🤗👏 Keep writing the way you do and do update the next chapter soon enough! ⭐️⭐️
Love,
LM. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

I finally got around to reading the whole chap. (yes, yes, I know its so late, no excuses for that. ) But seriously, this was SOME chapter!



This is by far the most interesting dynamics about Ranveer and Kailash I've ever read so far. ⭐️⭐️While everyone prefers to keep Kailash as the good guy and Amba as the screeching owl (well who can blame us, it's self-explanatory why we do that 🤢🤢), you opted to go vice-versa. And so far, it has been a rewarding experience.




There is a strange angst with which you write their relationship that strikes a chord with my heart straight. 😳😳A son who has seen his father mistreat his mother and nearly kill her has to end up asking for help to the same man years later. The same son has seen the murder of his best friend and lost his other one on the same accord.😕😕 Yet he was willing enough to stand on his doorstep to ask for his help, as long it protected the people he loved. 😭😭





This Ranveer of yours is as self-destructive as the original one, quite a bit more if I may say so, yet he shines out like a black diamond, his darkness giving him a carved beauty. ❤️❤️His soul is untarnished and pure, yet he finds himself drowning in the blackness of his past. 🥺🥺Its what defines him as a person over here. 😃😃




Kailash on the other hand, was a surprise. 😲😲As pleasantly surprised as I am that the ruthless and cold, demeaning man within him as died, its too late to make amends. 😒😒As the saying goes, it's never too late, but sometimes, circumstances weigh heavier than your will. 😔😔Ranveer may feel pain, remorse and regret for what elapsed between them all those years ago, but the fact remains that Kailash is the reason why Ranveer is what he is.🤔🤔It may be good or bad, but the fact stands. 😊😊





And need I say anything about the quote you used about how it feels when all the people you love tend to hate you? 👍🏼👍🏼This was amongst one of the best quotes I've come across so far, because the quote has a brutality in it, harsh as it is, yet the pain latched alongside makes it all the more real.





MM, you have really stunned me with your ability to write angst, and I must say that your writing has a different edge to it altogether. 🤗🤗👏Keep writing the way you do and do update the next chapter soon enough! ⭐️⭐️




Love,

LM. ❤️



Hi LM 😊

I am glad you got time to read the update 😊 And don't stress or worry about reading or commenting late , because I would not have felt bad even if you had replied a month later 😉

I am really glad you liked the chapter LM , because this was the most emotional challenging chapter to write along with the one Ranveer told Ishani about Ridhima and Akash 😭 And I am glad that this chapter made sense , and was an okey chapter 😳

Yes , the dynamics between Ranveer and Kailash are very different from the show and I glad that you all don't hate me for that 😆 😳 But on a serious note , it was interesting to explore this dynamic and try to pend it down 😳 And I am glad you all did not find it boring , and understood the pain of both the characters 😳 I am very blessed to have readers like you 😳 😳

I am glad that it strokes a chord woth your heart , because Ranveer 's complicated relationship with his father has always been full of angst and pain 😭 If Kailash had only hurt him , Ranveer would have forgiven him without a doubt but he hurt his mother and his best friend and someone he considered a brother and forgiven him for that would be a betrayer to those people 😭

Ranveer is a fighter , but sadly not for himself but for everyone else 😳 As much as it was painful for Ranveer to stand on hose doorsteps , Ranveer would do it hundredth times for protect his loved ones 😳 Like Ranveer said family is difficult but they are worth it 😳 😳

Yes, this Ranveer is forsure more self . destructive here , you understood him very well LM 😉 His past is what breaks him , yet it is what makes him as well 😉 His past hunts him yet it is reminderfr him to never go that way . His beautiful heart and the will to help others came from protecting his mother 😳

Yes , I decide to go with Kailash who turns positive during his years in staying in the cell , but his misdead as to big 😭 as good as it that he changed , he can 't go back in time and change things 😭

All these years Ranveer has remembered pain, hate , anger related to his father , but like you said the facts remains everything Ranveer is today is related to his father 😉

I am glad you liked the quote , and really touched by he fact that is one of the best you have come across 😳 don't if it used before ,but I just wrote what I felt was the common factor between Kailash and Ranveer

Oh dear , I am glad you felt that I was able justify Ranveer and Kailash feelings 😳 Because this was the most emontionally challenging chapter to write along with the one Ranveer tell Ishani about Ridhma and Akash 😊 I will try to update asap dear and thank you for reading the start of chapter before I posted it 😳

Love MM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456



Hey 😊 Emm , well here Ranveer and Ishani both are in love with eachother from the start , but Ranveer has a mysterious and painful past and he works as a policeofficer 😊 It is about Ishveer 's journey as friends who are afraid to too tell each other 's feelings to lifepartners who have to go through different situations in life 😊

Hope this help , my chapters is not the longest so I don't think it will take that much time 😊


Thanks Sweetie!!
Ranveer police offcr..thats interesting..
I have read some chapters and will try to read all only for u.. [:-)]
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


Thanks Sweetie!!
Ranveer police offcr..thats interesting..
I have read some chapters and will try to read all only for u.. [:-)]



Your welcome dear 😳 😳 That 's so sweet of you , hope u like it 😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456



Your welcome dear 😳 😳 That 's so sweet of you , hope u like it 😳 😳


ofcorse
Love u...
Vaise eid kaisi guzri??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanwal4salman


ofcorse
Love u...
Vaise eid kaisi guzri??



Love u too dear ❤️
Alhamdulillah it went well , tumhari eid kaisi guzri ? 😊

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