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ShadikaIshVeer thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear LM

Congratulation with 50 chapters They all have been beautiful written and touch of magic and hearttouching words 😳 😳 I feel honoured to be a part of this journey , I have read your other stories before you have written this one , but this one was the first one I read and could comment because I have finally joined IF 😉

You are a truly amazing writer , when I read a part of your story I do believe I am reading a novel and I truly from the bottom of my heart are very fond of your writing but you as well LM 🤗

Coming back to your chapter , once again it was pure magic 😃 😳 😳 The part when Ishani reads the book was very cute and when she said that he is mysterious attractive 😳 😳 God I was blushing more than Ranveer 😳 😳

So Ranveer finally told her , and I am really excited to see Ishani 's reaction 😃

Please update soon dear 🤗 Once again congratulation dear , I am really proud of you 🤗 🤗 Love u dear 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Keep writing , because God knows how many hearts you have won with your writing ❤️
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear LM

First of all hearty congratulations on your 50th chapter !! and they are all beautiful !!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I don't know how you do it but you keep churning out one beauty after another ! So love to read your writing. Your FF is actually one of the few things I come for in this forum !!
🤗🤗🤗

May god bless you and give you more writing inspiration, always !! And hope you complete another 50 very soon !!

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Now to the chapter, such a lovely and emotional one.. Ranveer finally announced their marriage, wooohoo.. !!

I am also sad that Claud and Martin will be leaving them with the kids... How will these two survive without them.. they were such a pillar of support and a great source of love for them ! I hope you find some way to keep them in the story and in same house !!

Finally the truth about Nitin is out.. It was very well written, the whole scene almost appeared in front of my eyes.. how much she would have repented knowing that it was an accident... poor girl.. she has to go through so much always once she realizes her stupidity..
I am so curious to know her reaction after hearing Nitin's name.. Will she get mad at Ranveer ? I suppose she will, at least for some time.. and at her mother too ?

Hope you update soon, can't wait !!
😃😃😃😃😃😃😃



Edited by matsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh girl...this is absolutely lovely & a lot emotional too 😃...loved it & the previous update too where Ranveer handed over the most prized possession to Ishani , their ultimate story rewritten ,just loved that gift yaar , It could not have been more better ....& I really appreciate u for your creativity & imagination👍🏼⭐️⭐️...& by now , I have got to know that you have a great sense of gifts.😳.ha ha...😆😆

& coming back to the story...It was really a good step of Ranveer to make Ishani learn the truth , she had all the right to know it before ,but the circumstances did not allow that 😕...But as it's said "Better late than never " & finally it did happen...😃 But I am more worried now...😲 what will be Ishani's reactions to all this😕😕...Ohh God...can't wait to read the next update...do update it soon dear...😳😃

Note - My hearty congratulations to you for completing 50 chapters of #NeopolitanCity dear...⭐️..You have gracefully written all the chapters which depict the beautiful journey of an eternal love story...& that's IshVeer's story...😳❤️ .It has been a wonderful experience reading the story ..& thank u so much for this lovely ff 🤗🤗🤗...#LongWay to go...cheers...👏

Edited by _priyaa_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was emotional and beautiful update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww,LM
This was such a sweet n emotional chapter
It wad good to see that ranveer finally talked about her dad to ishani, but im just worried that ishs reaction isn't bad...
Btw sorry for late reply , and ya u saw the SBS ishani says that she has promised to go back to shikar 🤢 the CVs are really hellbent on torturing us..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

⭐️ congrats fr 50 chp dear wid evry chp awesome then previous one
Nw dis chp ws awesome one 😊 😛 😃
Loved dere convrstn 😃
U again read my mind I WS xpctng tht u ll speak abt her father in disdis 😳 😲
Ranveer knws ishani more than ishani knws herslf 😛 dis reminds me of old tyms frndshp of dere which is nowhr see nw in serial 😡 😕 [:^(
My martin is a big guy nw job n alal 😳 😆 😛
Tht box ws actually very meaningful in dere relatnshp 😊
Ovral wonderful chp deardear 😊 😉
And ya whnevr dere is mntn of kids ishu baby thnks of herself nly 😉 😉 wht is it haha 😲
Dear dis ff is actually d bst one I HV evr came across thank u so much dear tht u gave us sch beautiful chp hlpng us to bear d crap of cvs 😡
Lots of love
And yes d mandatory line tht waiting fr ur next update eagrly specially ishani's reactn




Thank you so much dear! 🤗🤗 I am so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️



And yeah, we do have a pretty good telepathy now, don't we? 😳😳 And yes, Ranveer certainly knows her more than himself. It's what makes him that adorable and so close to our heart. ⭐️⭐️ The friendship they had then was magical and something that is very rarely seen these days. What is left of their friendship however, breaks my heart.



Martin finally got the breakthrough he had given up for so long. Things are certainly going to change, but then again, as long as they are themselves, they'll remain the same. 😛😛



The box certainly had much more bearing in their life than I let on. 😉😉 And as to why Ishaani always directs that question at herself, why don't you give it a guess? 😆😆



And once again, thank you so much for the way you have showered praises over me ever since your first post. It has truly been overwhelming and has helped me grow as a writer and a person both. ❤️❤️



I'll try to update soon enough, though the updates are going to slack now. 😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





Thank you so much dear! 🤗🤗I am so happy that you liked it.⭐️⭐️



And yeah, we do have a pretty good telepathy now, don't we?😳😳And yes, Ranveer certainly knows her more than himself. It's what makes him that adorable and so close to our heart.⭐️⭐️The friendship they had then was magical and something that is very rarely seen these days. What is left of their friendship however, breaks my heart.



Martin finally got the breakthrough he had given up for so long. Things are certainly going to change, but then again, as long as they are themselves, they'll remain the same.😛😛



The box certainly had much more bearing in their life than I let on.😉😉And as to why Ishaani always directs that question at herself, why don't you give it a guess?😆😆



And once again, thank you so much for the way you have showered praises over me ever since your first post. It has truly been overwhelming and has helped me grow as a writer and a person both.❤️❤️



I'll try to update soon enough, though the updates are going to slack now.😭😭


Omg wht do u mean by dere is more to d box then u let us knw 😲
U always astonish me wid ur hints 😕
And challenge ha regarding ishani and kids connectn I made a guess d day u let out hospital conversation bt I mite b wrng or it may serve as spoiler alert 😉
Jst lyk u and ur ranveer even i love to catch readers unaware of ur amazing updates 😉
And fr praises dear u deserve more than I praise u for dis wonderful ff 😃
And nly sad part is updates are gng to b slack 😭
Edited by dvprt418.py - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456

Dear LM

Congratulation with 50 chapters They all have been beautiful written and touch of magic and hearttouching words 😳 😳 I feel honoured to be a part of this journey , I have read your other stories before you have written this one , but this one was the first one I read and could comment because I have finally joined IF 😉

You are a truly amazing writer , when I read a part of your story I do believe I am reading a novel and I truly from the bottom of my heart are very fond of your writing but you as well LM 🤗

Coming back to your chapter , once again it was pure magic 😃 😳 😳 The part when Ishani reads the book was very cute and when she said that he is mysterious attractive 😳 😳 God I was blushing more than Ranveer 😳 😳

So Ranveer finally told her , and I am really excited to see Ishani 's reaction 😃

Please update soon dear 🤗 Once again congratulation dear , I am really proud of you 🤗 🤗 Love u dear 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

Keep writing , because God knows how many hearts you have won with your writing ❤️





Thank you so much dear! 🤗🤗 I am so glad that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️



MM, I just want to give you a big hug for being a part of this journey, because a thank you will be too formal. ❤️ You have been my major source of encouragement right from the start and you have made this journey for me much more memorable. 😃😃And it's an honour for me that you consider my work that good enough. 😛😛



I am equally as fond of you and your writing, MM, because you have been an inspiration to me, teaching me how one can improve steadily everyday.



Yeah, mysteriously attractive does suit Ranveer now, doesn't it? 😆😆He is a box of surprises, throwing something or the other at Ishaani every now and then. ⭐️⭐️And yes, he finally told her. As to Ishaani's reaction, all I'll say is that it's pretty interesting. 😉😉




I'll try to update as soon as I can. And thank you so much for playing such a lovely part in making this FF what it is. 😳😳 Love you loads. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey LM... heartiest Congratulations to u for this half century... 🤗 🤗 first time in my life I am addicted to something written... was never interested in novels n all but your writing really hooked me... awesome dear... wish this journey continues forever... 🤗 🤗
nice update... their conversation in the beginning was too cute... and ur one liners... "u r too mysteriously attractive"... Goooddd... they r really making me crazy... 🤪 just love them... u r too good in creating these short cute moments... 👏 👏 and martin got a really good position position... it's good to see him getting what he deserves... 👏 👏 and as far as marriage is concerned they are already married in all respects na... but chalo... another celebrations on the way... 😊

finally the secret is revealed to her... he was right... this is the time... u wrote a damn good story... cvs never revealed soo much but u gave a complete description of how he met mota bapuji again n his association with him... ⭐️ ⭐️ it was so meaningful... and their conversation was worth the read... but the biggest surprise for her came at end... what will she do now... I don't think it will be easy for her... seems tough time ahead for her as well as him... 😲 😲 waiting for he reaction... update soon... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Dear LM

First of all hearty congratulations on your 50th chapter !! and they are all beautiful !!
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I don't know how you do it but you keep churning out one beauty after another ! So love to read your writing. Your FF is actually one of the few things I come for in this forum !!
🤗🤗🤗

May god bless you and give you more writing inspiration, always !! And hope you complete another 50 very soon !!

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Now to the chapter, such a lovely and emotional one.. Ranveer finally announced their marriage, wooohoo.. !!

I am also sad that Claud and Martin will be leaving them with the kids... How will these two survive without them.. they were such a pillar of support and a great source of love for them ! I hope you find some way to keep them in the story and in same house !!

Finally the truth about Nitin is out.. It was very well written, the whole scene almost appeared in front of my eyes.. how much she would have repented knowing that it was an accident... poor girl.. she has to go through so much always once she realizes her stupidity..
I am so curious to know her reaction after hearing Nitin's name.. Will she get mad at Ranveer ? I suppose she will, at least for some time.. and at her mother too ?

Hope you update soon, can't wait !!
😃😃😃😃😃😃😃



.
Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗🤗
You have been such a crucial part of this FF right from the time I posted the first chapter up until now. StarStarStarStar Your views have always been something that I greatly value and treasure and I'm glad that this appealed to you so much. 😃😃😃 It's really overwhelming when people tell me how much NC has touched them or how its struck a chord with them and it only pushes me to do better. 😳😳😳
Changes are a part and parcel of life. But coming to Martin and Claudine, don't worry. They still have those six months with Ranveer and Ishaani. 😉😉 I'm not dropping hints, but well, you'll see what I mean eventually. 😆😆 But yes, Martin and Claudine have IshVeer's greatest pillar of strength and the closest thing to a family that they've had, apart from Martha. And no matter how things go, some things never change.
Yes, she did need to know that it was an accident and how her one rash decision ended up nearly killing their relationship. Sadly, Ishaani always has to learn things the hard way. As to what her reaction is going to be, all I'll say is that it's going to be a little interesting, and may or may not be as everyone is expected it. 😕😕
I'll try to update it by either Saturday or Sunday. 😛😛

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