FF : Neapolitan City - Page 64

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

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Thank you so much dear! 🤗🤗I'm so glad that you liked it and you could connect to it this well. ⭐️⭐️

I'll try to update the next chapter as soon as I can.😃😃

h 😳 can't wait to read the next chapter!..stay awesome swty ⭐️

This was another beautiful chapter! I loved it to the bits. From the parts they both know there is something wrong to them being for and with each other was beautifully conveyed. Their dream part was haunting and for some reasons it felt things were falling apart and there was still something (i.e. them both) that was going to make everything alright. This chapter gave me a very different feeling of suffocation because they both were in pain and I felt it. This was really one of the brilliant, brilliantly written work. Update the next chapter soon. It's really exciting to see how you take their journey further. ((hugs))

Very good chapter LM... Their dreams and nightmare... very well depicted... I am at a loss though at guessing what is it that they are yearning for in their relationship? It can't be trust ... So eagerly waiting for the next update😊

wow LM... what a strong portrayal of their feelings and emotions... 👏👏

Originally posted by: MM123456

LM and EH thank you so much for understanding :)


I am missing you both so much 😳 tale care both of you :)

Originally posted by: MM123456

Dear you made sence , this chapter was very realistic :)

I have to Ask if you know when you will update the next one ,because then i know which day to check In ?

Originally posted by: xx_MATSH_xx

h 😳 can't wait to read the next chapter!..stay awesome swty ⭐️

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

This was another beautiful chapter! I loved it to the bits. From the parts they both know there is something wrong to them being for and with each other was beautifully conveyed. Their dream part was haunting and for some reasons it felt things were falling apart and there was still something (i.e. them both) that was going to make everything alright. This chapter gave me a very different feeling of suffocation because they both were in pain and I felt it. This was really one of the brilliant, brilliantly written work. Update the next chapter soon. It's really exciting to see how you take their journey further. ((hugs))

Originally posted by: fan.matsh

Very good chapter LM... Their dreams and nightmare... very well depicted... I am at a loss though at guessing what is it that they are yearning for in their relationship? It can't be trust ... So eagerly waiting for the next update😊

Originally posted by: NidsJ

wow LM... what a strong portrayal of their feelings and emotions... 👏👏

you described everything in so much depth... whole chapter was dedicated to their nightmares and fears attached with it.. and their dreams are really really frightening 😲 coz going through the same trauma every night is much much more torturous than the actual one... 😕 😕

but it's good that finally they disclosed it to each other... it will definitely help in some way or the other.. ⭐️ ⭐️ and now they had also acknowledged their yearnings.. although still trying to figure out the actual urge and emotions... bt I hope they will find out soon and will overcome their fears and all the emotional turmoil which is bothering them... 😊

wonderful writing dear... 👍🏼 waiting for next... update soon... 🤗