FF : Neapolitan City - Page 32

What a quick update !! Thank you for the surprise !!

Such an awww chapter.. Poor Martin has too much on his mind.. U depicted his emotions very nicely.. and Ishani supporting him was so awesome.

And our girl is so dashing na like that, din mein tare dikha de !!! Sunny Deol style !! 😃😃
What is the story with this Eva female... tell tell !! 😉

Superb chapter once again !! Love your writing..

Woow such a fast update 😉 Really good job with this forum 🤗

Ishani is such a sweet girl , loved her conservation with Martin 😃 Please update soon and look forward to see Ranveer 's reaction to all of this 😃

Please please update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: matsh

What a quick update !! Thank you for the surprise !!

Such an awww chapter.. Poor Martin has too much on his mind.. U depicted his emotions very nicely.. and Ishani supporting him was so awesome.

And our girl is so dashing na like that, din mein tare dikha de !!! Sunny Deol style !! 😃😃
What is the story with this Eva female... tell tell !! 😉

Superb chapter once again !! Love your writing..

Originally posted by: MM123456

Woow such a fast update 😉 Really good job with this forum 🤗

Ishani is such a sweet girl , loved her conservation with Martin 😃 Please update soon and look forward to see Ranveer 's reaction to all of this 😃

Please please update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

Thank you so much dear!🤗🤗I'm glad that you liked the chapter.😃😃And yeah, Ishaani and Martin 's conversation was something that was pretty much on the spur of the moment for me too.😳😳Ranveer's reaction is certainly going to be interesting.😆😆

I'll try to update as soon as I can.⭐️⭐️

You know I read Your update at School today and yesterday , and I have to thank you because Your story is keeping me positive and sain cause School these days are to much yaar 😕

Can I ask when you will update the NeXT Chapter ? 😃

MM, I'm glad that I could make you sot through a day of school with the chapters. There is no better cmpliment than that for me. 😳😳

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

MM, I'm glad that I could make you sot through a day of school with the chapters. There is no better cmpliment than that for me.😳😳

The next update may be either on Thursday or Friday.😃

Seriously you are an engel for giving us this story and I can 't wait to read the next Chapter 🤗

Beautiful update.👏👏...& i like the metaphors you used to describe Eva's personality...⭐️ the soothing conversation between Ishani & Martin..It's pretty nice.😃..& the way Ishani was trying to explain the reality to Martin & the bonding between Ishani & Martin...just loved it...😃

.But u know what surprised me .😆.. Ishani's smack..😆.😲 😆😆 I literally laughed out when i read that.😆😆..i did not expect that ..it was a real surprise for me.😆😆...Although i'm always against violence , but was happy to see Sunny Deol back.😉😉..ha ha.😆😆.& she did not repent for her behavior...anyways...i just have a suggestion dear..😃.as this story is based on the original plot , i thought it would have been better if Ishani would have realised her mistake..i mean..she suddenly smacked Eva even before she knew it , i can understand her sudden outrage & it's quite obvious , But i guess if Ishani would have felt sorry for her sudden outrage & that punching stuff,it would have been a little better...Her smack literally caused Eva to get unconscious & it was a bit serious... As much as i have understood so far , Ishani is very good at heart & even if she punches anyone , she feels sorry for that , even be it her enemy...It's only a small suggestion from my side...i guess for being ur friend , i can freely share my opinion with u ..😉😉.itna toh haq banta hai na...😆😆😳

& i have a serious complaint..😕..I really missed Ranveer today in this update ...what to do yaar...so addicted to them ...u can understand...😳😆 eagerly waiting for the next update..😳😃

Originally posted by: _priyaa_

Beautiful update.👏👏...& i like the metaphors you used to describe Eva's personality...⭐️ the soothing conversation between Ishani & Martin..It's pretty nice.😃..& the way Ishani was trying to explain the reality to Martin & the bonding between Ishani & Martin...just loved it...😃

.But u know what surprised me .😆.. Ishani's smack..😆.😲 😆😆 I literally laughed out when i read that.😆😆..i did not expect that ..it was a real surprise for me.😆😆...Although i'm always against violence , but was happy to see Sunny Deol back.😉😉..ha ha.😆😆.& she did not repent for her behavior...anyways...i just have a suggestion dear..😃.as this story is based on the original plot , i thought it would have been better if Ishani would have realised her mistake..i mean..she suddenly smacked Eva even before she knew it , i can understand her sudden outrage & it's quite obvious , But i guess if Ishani would have felt sorry for her sudden outrage & that punching stuff,it would have been a little better...Her smack literally caused Eva to get unconscious & it was a bit serious... As much as i have understood so far , Ishani is very good at heart & even if she punches anyone , she feels sorry for that , even be it her enemy...It's only a small suggestion from my side...i guess for being ur friend , i can freely share my opinion with u ..😉😉.itna toh haq banta hai na...😆😆😳

& i have a serious complaint..😕..I really missed Ranveer today in this update ...what to do yaar...so addicted to them ...u can understand...😳😆 eagerly waiting for the next update..😳😃

Originally posted by: MM123456

Seriously you are an engel for giving us this story and I can 't wait to read the next Chapter 🤗

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