Good serial but some suggestions

I have been watching the show I feel it has the soul to make it big if they take immence care.There are a couple of things which i feel can be taken care of -

1)They started with ordinary production values to make it look authentic,ordinary jobs,ordinary clothes,small simple family,simple moments,a bhajan kirtan singer cannot be richer but now since they have stoped striking the ambiance and background consistently,i.e the culture and its enviouronment like the name of the place,people,specific professions like people may be related to apple farming,or tea or tattu riders or pashmina shawl workers etc now it seems they are like any other well off filmy family 'yet' so non glamourous,suddenly authenticity starts looking like low production value...every frame should tell you the reason for that look,Heer's train journey,not knowing to eat with fork,Shravan's failure,need of money,getting photo clicked and sending to Omi are the moments which anybody can relate with...it has to be continued

Also Omi's struggle in Pakistan should have been more dramatic,they just wasted a twist in the story,which could have pulled the attention of the people,struggle with terrorists and Omi heer love story should have been highlighted,may be they could have shown a night in between where there could have been a song of Omi in the Jungle thinking about heer but they could not establish that beauty of love....this portion just got over in haste,should have been shot in a USP way.....

Heer should be made to look more glamourous as in ...beautiful,she has been shown too ordinary to be the main girl,even her entry was not so impressive,although she is doing a good job

Story was far more Dilwale Dulhaniya kind of a way initially but now it is very evident they are shooting it in the same places as any other serial no new and interesting locations are shown as in gul gulshan gulfam,rather than doing all the scenes indoors they should try to shoot them in beautiful backdrops like their exterior gardens,or terraces or lake side or temples,story of jammu kashmir makes you imagine of beautiful locations

Sudhir Pandey and Darshan Dave are being wasted, this setup looks small for their image

They just miss the moments which could have created hysteria,their execution kills the beautiful moments concieved,although good story,screenplay and dialogues,bad direction and editing most of the time.

They have to understand that they have to make every episode eventful,people can very easily make out the difference between build up and lack of storical events(drag)

So to sum up, the first thing they need to do is better production values and more happenings in a week,and keep up the intensity and temptation of the show atleast for more than six months to make loyal viewers, else any show now a days goes down the drain even before starting properly.After months has come a show with a soul...it will really come up like a sudden storm IF they work really hard.

Very well said. This ordinary story everybody can relate to. They can make this into a beautiful serial. They should have shown more or Heer and Omi's love story before they made them apart. I am liking it right now. They are making it too much into what sushma wants to do right now. They should make more emphasis on Omi and Heer and after learning he is Sushma's son how he reacts to it. beautiful dialougs excellent cast but they have to make more out of it then they are doing. In five days the story just does not move much forward. I agree with you that they should have made Omi think of Heer too.

Reena very well analized.Also I feel Sushmas character should not be black as she is also a mother,she should not become a balaji wamp,its very irritating to watch just another wamp,she should be a women who is not troubling Heer for fun,that makes her cheap,when they have a very genuine reason that she is worried about her son,she is convinced with whatever she is doing...this makes her a stronger character...
Also the kind of character Omi is they will have to create more difficult situations for him to solve once he comes back home,else for Omi doing kitchen politics and solving household problems demean his strength...

I feel the same way. And I also think that Omi should come back to his Heer.

I am not sure about this mangleek thing but what sushma is doing is not right. She is deliberately being mean to Heer. Now that Heer have left the house, let us see what else they have in store for us. It could have been a beautiful love story instead it has turned into a sad story. I hope it becomes as promising as it was shown in the beginning. Omi and Heer created a magic, and I hope the creatives keep that going. I am sure if Omi and Heer do not get togather, they will loose viewership. I watch this show for Yashpal, Bhooshan, Sharavan, Omi and for heer. They are the best characters I have seen and I have seen lot of serials. It hope it stays that way.