a sad poem

hi guys,this is a sad poem.i hope u all like it

i look at the pictures of when I was happy
Before I ever knew of the things that you could do
Your love gave me life,
Like my first breath
You picked me up
Took away my pain
Then you must've had your share of me and left
I fell and no one catched me
I'm dying, bleeding
Thinking of what we could've had
There's nothing left to do
I let you inside my soul
You crushed till nothing was left
You gave me my first breath
And you took my last

luv,
geet

that was very good geet👏👏

Hey Geet,

That was simply outstanding---wow!!! True it's sad because it contains deep feelings of separation and heart-ache. One could relate this to both Angad and Kripa, but it suits Angad more--just because he has lost faith in love completely! Once again sweetie that was simply wonderful---thanks for sharing such intense thoughts!

-Love4ever!

thx guys.i m glad u liked it.

thanxx that was such a sad yet sweet poem......thanx 4 posting

Hey Geet, what a lovely poem. Keep it up. N thanx for sharing it with us

it was really very nice.thanx geet 4such a lovely poem

SORRRYYYY IT'S GEET NOT DEEP

VERY SORRY REALLY VERY SORRYY!!!!!!PLZ FORGIVE MEE

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