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Week One
The episode starts from Ragu Bhai's party, where Aaliya and Zain are trying to know where is the locker and it's key so they can get back Barkhat Royal's property papers. Luckily Aaliya see the chain with the key in the Don's neck and with the excuse of a dance she is able to get the key and pass it to Zain. While Zain is going to the Don's room he bump in a girl, but he is not able to see the girl's face, even though he thinks that she seems familiar.
Zain gets the property papers and when he comes out from the room he gets to know that there was a police raid😲. Aaliya and Zain search for each other for few minutes and when Zain finds her he drag her at a corner and tells her that he got the paper and that they can get out of the mess, but just when they are going out Zain's eyes fall on Aayat and he gets shocked seeing her there, but he controls his emotions and making an excuse he send Aaliya out with the papers.
Aliya arrives at home while Zain takes Aayat to Baktiyar's apartment after hearing her part of story. Fahad is shattered and scared watching the news about the Police's raid, he knows that his name is going to come out even if Aaliya and Zain had recovered the papers, Aaliya advises Fahad to tell everything to his father and to stop living in a life full of lies. And he does it and Mr. Abdullah forgives him saying that he can see guilt and regret for what he did in his eyes.
In the middle of night Zain receives a phone call from a very scared Aayat and he goes from the house leaving a confused and suspicious Aaliya behind😕. When he reaches the apartment he got to know that Rocky is threatening Aayat with his phone calls and when he calls again Zain answer the call and give him a warning that he will find him and give him a piece of his mind. And he is able to do so with the Police's help and Rocky ends behind the bars
Zain calls Aaliya to tell her that he is leaving for Delhi and when she says with "that escort girl" he says that she belongs to a much respected family and that he is not doing anything wrong, and with that he leaves for Bhopal with Aayat.
Week two
This week starts after the holy event, where Zain managed to put color on Aaliya's face in a very unique way by brushing his color covered cheek with Aaliya's one. Suraiyah and Mr. Abdullah are receiving call after call from their guests, who call to appreciate the way Aaliya has organized the holy event. Suraiyah is irritated with the fact that Aaliya managed to organize a wonderful party without doing mistakes and making fail in this way her plans 😆
Aaliya offers to wash the sheets without knowing that at her sasural they throw the sheets used at the holy and that Suraiyah is planning to do the same once she has finished washing them, in a way to humiliate her😡. But when she goes to hang out the laundry on the pool side she sees Zain swimming, he gets out from the water making Aaliya a little uncomfortable since he was just wearing a pair of boxers☺️, he helps her to hanging the sheet and when he learns that there are other 20 sheets like that, he says her that she can take them to the laundry, but Aaliya refuse saying that she has promised to Mami that she will wash them by herself. Zain takes the sheets and says that he is taking them to the laundry😉.
While going to the laundry a car hits Zain and he fall on the road and the white sheet which was in his hands falls on him, making Aaliya live the worst nightmare of a wife's life, her husband's death. Thanks to Allah Zain is fine, he got away with a fractured arm and few scratches. After sometime the police arrive and Zain is surprised to hear from Aaliya that his accident was not an accident and that the person was actually planning to hurt him. On the same night Aaliya's Mamu makes her realized that between her and Zain there is Mohabbat, the fact is that they are not able recognize it yet.
The Police with the help of Aaliya make a sketch of the person who attempted to kill Zain and when Zain sees it, he is shocked, since the person is none other than Rocky, but he denies knowing him. The sketch falls in Shazia's hands and she recognizes Rocky and takes Suraiyah to the jail to meet her father, since Rocky was in the locker with him😡. From the Chakki wala Suraiyah finds out few things and when later she ponders upon them, she realized that Zain calls just one person Doll and that person is Aayat and she is the only sister that he has. So she invites Aaliya's family to Mumbai in a way to tell them about Aayat's little trip to Mumbai and degrade them.
P.S. I don't have watched the special event of Saturday so I don't know what exactly happened, sorry if I wrote anything wrong.
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😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
BIG COMPLAINT.
and its like a HUGE one.
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Unpardonable variety!!
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How could u CVs
😡
Zain gets a sponge bath...with his T shirt on???
😭*wailsss*😭
🤢🤢🤢This is cheatinggg Cvsss.🤢🤢🤢
Psst... And dont think i dint notice the scene where Zain changes clothes in the room AGAIN n we dint get to see it.😈😒
Now thats off my chest *phewww*😆
Let me get to some serious topics.
I agree the DOP wants the best possible angle for shooting a scene, but you absolutely cannot keep changing the direction of the Qibla every time.
Aaliya going and praying in the dargah, is not correct, but can be ignored because a lot of people DO that. Aaliya handing the Quran-e-Pak to Fahad after opening it's covering without Wudu and without covering her head?🥱🥱🥱
You guys are doing an amazing job with some parts of a modern girl who is religious in her heart and deeply rooted to her Rab. But sometimes, some things take away the positives that you show.
Aaliya offering Namaz-e- Shukrana, her telling Zain "Der saver sabko khuda ki rah pe chalna hi padhta hai." were thoughtful little things which touch your heart.⭐️⭐️
Another strong issue I have is with the pace of the story.
Stop! Smell the roses
Ever heard of the phrase CVs?
Like I have mentioned before, this week was a rollercoaster of emotions and a thoroughly enjoyable and bumpy ride barring a few things.
Emotions were running high and we had a lot of revelations and realizations. We also had a Zaya feast.☺️
However, I would still say that the story needs to be paced a little more slowly. What's the hurry? My personal opinion is that each track is not getting milked to its utmost and you guys are rushing into new ones. The whole of last week was too rushed to fit in the Holi ME.🤓
We all love BeIntehaan and would like to appreciate and enjoy it to the utmost. A little more detailing should go into the story.😕😕
This week the story went haywire in between and I felt that I am watching BeIntehaan Season 2 where Aaliya is the one who isn't ready to accept this marriage and Zain is trying to woo her. When exactly did that happen???
Wasn't Aaliya the one who declared that she is his WIFE and so has all rights by Shariah? So why was she hesitant to call herself his wife?? Zain's transformation back to the flirtatious guy he was before marriage is understandable to some extent. He is slowly getting comfortable with Aaliya and is coming back to his original naughty self. (Or playing a Prem game!)😡
Please keep up the good work and continue giving us BeIntehaan ZayA scenes.
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