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Posted: 20 years ago
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HI , how r u? ye aap sabke liye hai.mujhe achchi lagi to maine post kar di. I hope aap sabko bhi achichi lagegi. nahi lagi to sorry.

The Tree

When my son is in his bed

And he is fast asleep

I quietly go upstairs

And into his room I creep.

I look at my beautiful child

And as I touch his golden hair

My tears they flow so gently

Knowing autism and the world out here.

I also question me at times

As his mother, am I good?

Is there something I've forgotten?

Am I doing all I could?

I will never take things for granted

knowing life is never what it seems

When I ask myself if he's happiest

Carried away by the sweetest dreams.

Then I take a glance out of the window

And look at our graceful tree

I watch as it sways in the wind

Mesmerised- that could be me

I think of all the different leaves

The colours as they fall

It has meaning , it has beauty

My tree - so proud and tall.

In a storm the twigs may break

(As in life will be frustration)

And yet the tree still stands

Only through its strong foundation.

I've noticed my tears have stopped

My whole being is much clamer

Knowing I've been given a gift

Understanding more about nature.

So when at times I feel unsure

Or have the need to question me

I'll remember my roots; my strength

I'll remember my special tree.

I hope aap logo ko ye pasand aaye, mujhe mere friend ne di to maine post kar di. i know ye kyph se related nahi hai phir bhi.Love u.😊

Take care

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow....its gr8...ur very talented 👏 👏 👏
Edited by lil miz - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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my god u wrote all this.... its absolutely brilliant.... u have talent and i really loved these lines......

My tree - so proud and tall.

In a storm the twigs may break

(As in life will be frustration)

And yet the tree still stands

Only through its strong foundation.

I've noticed my tears have stopped

My whole being is much clamer

Knowing I've been given a gift

Understanding more about nature.

So when at times I feel unsure

Or have the need to question me

I'll remember my roots; my strength

I'll remember my special tree.

very touching😳


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Posted: 20 years ago
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Maine nahi likhi, ye mujhe mere friend ne di hai,main itani talented nahi hoon ok , anywayz thank god ke aapko achichi lagi.

Take care & love u😊

Edited by diya_snow - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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WILL SOME ONE PLEASE PLEASE POST TODAY'S PICS OF KYPH 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Namu,
I finally found the poem and I thought that it was very touching..............A big huggie to ur frnd.....and who told u that ur not talented...Ur dii thinks that u r very very talented.....my special sis... 😳 Take Care and njoy Christmas....and keep posting such interesting msgs esp poems(esp for people like me who cant manage out two lines which rhyme 😆 😆 😆 ) honey.....

Take Care..

Luv....Ur Diii 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanku diyu ...Its such a beautiful poem ...Glad u decided to stay back 😃 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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soooooo good if only i could write like that maybe id get better grades 4 english class

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