MHRW was good but could have been great. - Page 2

Agree with each and every point of yours

Pallavi or raghav ki friends se lovers banne ki journey kahin nazar nahi aayi pallavi ko after marriage itni jaldi raghav se pyar ho gaya wo bhi raghav ne uske sath jo kiya tha uske baad pallavi ke monologues to kabhi the hi nahi jab ke pallavi ki feelings ko samjhne ke liye ye bahut necessary the pallavi ko raghav se kaise kab pyar hua kuch samjh nahin aya na pallavi ne kabhi khud se qus kiya ke use raghav ke bare me kya feel hota hai kyu hota hai

raghav ki bhi koi inner conflicts nahi dikhayi uski pallavi ke liye feelings ko lekar kab use love realisation hua pata nahi or pallavi ko love realisation ke liye krishna ki zarurat thi kya ? Jab ke pallavi ke actions show karte the ke use apni feelings ka pata hai or jaise hi pallavi ne love confess kiya raghav ne bhi confess kar diya

Or pallavi ki backstory to mystery ban kar hi reh gayi kaise or kyu usne apne bhai ke sath na rehkar d family ke sath rehne ka decision liya kyu wo marriage nahi karna chahti thi I mean uske dubara marriage na karne ka reason d family ki responsibility thi ya wo khud hi nahi karna chahti thi ?

Pallavi ki marriage se pehle kya ambitions thi wo after marriage career banana chahti thi ya sirf d family ko support karne ke liye wo dse me kaam karti thi use saree designing ki knowledge pehle se thi ya after marriage usne sikha kuch nahi bataya makers ne

Or ab raghav se marriage ke baad wo online business kar rahi thi but wo bhi bhool gaye or dse ka kya hua ab pallavi wahan kyu nahi jati smuggling track me use kisi or shop me job karne ki kya zarurat thi pehle to use dse ki chain start karni thi but ab kuch nahi

Kitne qus hain jinka koi ans nahin

You made really great points , thanks for this thread .

1. Lack of attention to Fl's feelings. Pallavi's point of view was never captured on most of the things / tracks, and they miserably failed here. We got Esha, Keerthi , Mandaar , Sunny etc everyone’s POV and monologues, heck they even gave Esha-Raghav unnecessary flashbacks, but they never cared to do that for Pallavi . Shivangi is amazing performer , kudos to her for making Pallavi endearing and relatable otherwise makers were highly unfair towards her . She always got short end of the stick . Shivangi’s screenspace since the very first episode of this track has been ridiculously less. I hope she gets a better project next . Good wishes for her future .
2. Makers Failed to capitalise on a key attraction at the right time, the Pallavi Sawant storyline. They could have easily gone for this after Mandaar instead of the awful Sunki marriage track. They could have shown Raghav and Pallavi feeling conflicted because of identity of her real parents and Sunny adding fuel to fire from outside .
3. Raghav was the centre of attention until the second last week of the show (the last week is dedicated to clowns), and everything revolved around him. However, Raghav was butchered a lot since they failed to keep consistency while writing him, and his guilt not only destroyed him but also hurt Pallavi and their relationship. It was really sad to see Ml's once endearing quality of feeling guilty about his actions being butchered in this way.His guilt now appears to be a joke.
4. There is a lack of positive energy. First and foremost, the festivalw were wrapped up in only 1-2 episodes, (other shows dedicate whole week to it ) with only 2-3 minutes of happy scenes and the remaining dedicated to villain’s stupid plans things. Sunki danced together on Janmashtami, and special celebrations held for RaghVi’s confession but RaghVi didn’t . 🤪🤪
5. We never witnessed a fully choreographed scene, despite the fact that both primary characters are excellent dancers.
6. Raghav and Pallavi eventually ceased having meaningful conversations, which had been the defining feature of their relationship.
7. Giving Negative characters are given far more attention than they deserve, and the protagonists are dumbed as a consequence.
8. Making characters like Keerti and Mans unpleasant and obnoxiousi at random, then whitewashing them in the blink of an eye.

I’m happy Raghav was given importance as ml which is quite rare in itv , but it’s ridiculous how Pallavi always ended up getting shorter end of the stick . It was really unfair to Pallavi and Shivangi .

MHRW was beautiful story with great potential as both of its lead characters had strong attractive traits and SaiShi’s chemistry was amazing , it’s sad that makers failed to recognise that leads were usp and made them side couple , prioritising Sunny and Sunki 👎🏼.

SaiShi have my best wishes for their future projects . Season 2 seems to be far fetched dream but even if we get that I hope it’s with different set of competent makers 😆

Originally posted by: Shakti1604

Sunny has been whitewashed to be whiter than snow white. A character like Sunny should have been booted out but instead he is playing spirit games to get Isha to confess. Helping Raghvi cleanses all his sins apparently!!Leads are former leads. Presently is its Isha shouldering the show. Its a train wreck now. Everyday I for the past 2 weeks especially when I watch the episode I feel this is the worst episode but the next day I am surprised another episode is even more worst!!

Really!! It's more bad than I thought. I mean even sunny helped Raghav in ending Mandar and now this.

I actually am not sure whether Raghav and Pallavi are really the leads. How can they disrespect the very characters who had given their 200% and brought glory to the show. It's injustice, not fair. They are not even giving the Raghav Pallavi centric epis untill the end.

I guess we should be happy that it's ending atleast SaiShi will get to do something more substantial .

You said it. It was the lack of Pallavi perspective for me.

First Sai and Raghav Rao deserve a lot of credit. Credit where it's due. He made it his own. And MHRW team too for pre marriage buildup. Afterwards, it was messy..

Now coming to Shivangi and Pallavi. Pre marriage phase - she is seriously underappreciated for that. She carried the character with the right emotions and grace.

Post marriage - major disappointment. They tried to repair it by showing her smart plans or her attitude as Pallavi Raghav Rao.. But it didn't work for me, didn't feel like OG Pallavi.

Shivangi and Sai tried to accept whatever was given to them without a fuss and delivered the scenes. Some of the scenes clicked with the audience. And I believe they had a lot to do with the efforts of these two more than the writing... Because overall the story didn't make sense..

They played with Pallavi and Deshmukhs whenever they wanted to suit the twists in their storyline..

Pallavi as a character and Shivangi as an actor both deserved better.