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Posted: 4 years ago
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So I read the first part yesterday & today the 2nd.


IT WAS AMAZIIING Sama! So Proud of you 🔥🔥😈


Gosh! I loved Pallavi here. Tum toh 'And We Twist' song se zyada Twist derahi ho bas ek 3shot mein


Waitingggggg

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Mindblowing start! Loved it. Plz continue soon and tag me when you update. But, a small doubt. How come there is FBI handling a case in India? Wouldn't it be the CBI? Domestic cases like these are generally handled by the CBI right? Or is it not based in Hyderabad but outside in the US?

Thank You.

I have explained the entire scenario in the recent update. Hope there's no confusion anymore.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: nooriex

Like always, I'm a fan of your works!!

Twist after twist in this one is making me eager for the next update 😆

But I'm kind of worried for RaghVi now...bechara Raghav. I hope Pallu's love for him wasn't fake like Sunny confessed his love was fake for Keerthi. Also Pallu-Sunny bro/sis relation was unexpected but I would like to read about them. I don't like him in the show but gotta admit, them challenging each other is always entertaining like a brother and sister's convo.

It'd be great if you could tag me for the next update ❤️

Thank You.

Things will get cleared more by the last part of this series.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: drnidsur

Omgggggg

This is the one we talked abt and you told you something on your mind🥳

It was amazinggggg🤪

Pallavi being an agent - that was an amazing shot ❤️

Loved it

The suspense is at peak now

Continue sooonnnn🤗❤️

Yes this is the one.

Initially i wasn't too sure how to go about it but then Rie and i were talking about a similar plot thought so i tried.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

OMG!!!!!!!!

Where do I start?

Let's start with an apology for seeing this so late shall we? 😆

Now, weluhgliwhvosibvggrhihgrvugr!!!!!!!!!! SAMA!!!!!

Yeh kaisa surprise hai? Pallavi AHUJA?!!?!

You can't leave me hanging on a cliffhanger like this one!!!😡


🤗🤗🤗 for writing this for me.

No need for an apology.

I am just happy that you liked it and ofcourse thank you soo much for putting such an amazing idea in my mind.

Accept it!!! Pallavi Ahuja has a nice ring to it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

Mai first


How do you do it? You make me scream out of excitement. Every. Single. Time.

You’re such an amazing writer. Talent koot koot ke bhara hai tumme. Ahhhhh SAMA!!!!!!! 🧿🧿🧿🧿

Okay now I see why this was a surprise for me. 😆

I am in LOVE with this version of Pallavi.😍😍🥵 So much sass The attitude and the way she shut up Keerti was 🔥🔥.

Poor Farhad.😂 He was so confused and I’m sure he’ll be mind blown in the next update🤯😁😁


This is for you for being so amazing 😳

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Hayee itni zyada tareef. I am turning into a beetroot now.

I have soo many versions of Pallavi in my mind and this one is from the Top 3.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Niaaa10

Wowwwwwwwwwww Sama 😲

You are such an amazing writer 👏👏

I am screaming what an amazing twist 😎

In first part you shocked me with Pallavi Ahuja now Pallavi Raghav Rao 😲🤣

Pallavi ditched her good for nothing brother, father and FBI? 😲

I am so excitedddddddd for next part

Brilliantly executed 👏🥳😳

I am in love with your writing style

Thanks Niaa.

Yupp that's Pallavi for you. She's a star.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnushkhaA

Will I be too crass if I scream knew it!!!! 🤣🤣🤣 brilliantly executed I must say.. mujhe shak toh hua tha ki this is all kind of a ploy but you were quite convincing. Loved the twist!!! Plz update soon and tag me!

No no i'll gladly accept all the scream!!

I really thought that people will get it in the first part itself

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah! Sama - you made one of our Theories come True to life & how well👏


Can't wait for the concluding part. Is it a 2shot or a 3shot?

So many Twists - bechara Raghav - Serial wala toh Bewda hojaata sabse pehle isske chakkar mein🤪


Finally was able to catch up with some of my Tags this week - glad to have read this. Keep the Tags coming please😳

I love putting our theories to life. Gives me peace.

This was supposed to be a OS but looking at the length and explanation, i made it a 3 shot.


@bold: The Raghav in my stories is never touching alchohol ever again until it's damn necessary and same goes for Pallavi. Never visiting D fam until it's a life and death situation.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: unicornwriter

I love putting our theories to life. Gives me peace.

This was supposed to be a OS but looking at the length and explanation, i made it a 3 shot.


@bold: The Raghav in my stories is never touching alchohol ever again until it's damn necessary and same goes for Pallavi. Never visiting D fam until it's a life and death situation.


Aisehi nahi You're one of my Favourite writers na😉


We give power to our Leads according to their characters not opposite😳

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