Raghvi FF: On the Edge (7/?) - Updated Pg 12 - Page 9

Loved the update!! ❤️

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They're stuck!!

I wonder how that's gonna turn out 🤔😂

Read both parts together😳

There's something different about the Raghav Pallavi here & I like that. Their conversations seem like good fun too

Love the way you're framing the story. So you say it starts divulging from here on. Looking forward to it

I was disheartened when Pallavi didn't win the contest but then immediately glad that it paved the way for Raghav to come open her eyes, be her mentor & help her realize her worth in the Thankless D-Family. I can never get over the fact how did they even think that a young no-experienced 22yr old girl would be able to run their years old shop with no knowledge of Sarees herself. How do you give up on your responsibilities completely

I can totally see how Pallavi will start getting attached to Raghav. He'll be that spunk she requires to her life right now with the wise jibes & they won't even know when they would start looking forward to it😳

Aha! They're trapped in that small confined space. When has Raghav's phone ever functioned when most needed or in this case the phone knew better about the two😉

Thanks for the Tags❤️

Woah woah another one of superb. U packed off sunny until future for better flow wow. 😆 and made this business partner thing so as to not to go the famous grey lead way. Once again superb. Next comes how you easily showed pallavi's forgiving nature n Raghav's amma's non forgiving nature a contrast. Next u showed that Raghav will never get along with Vijay Deshmukh until both learn to keep ego aside. And I can see how pallavi's blindfold will come down after the partner thing is going to come out in front of Deshmukh family. Fabulous flow. 😃 but I m more interested how both are going to keep their hands with themselves rather than giving into the subtle undercurrent of attraction. 😆☺️ until then will eagerly wait.

Thanks for the update. 🤗

"His dumb glasses off his dumb handsome face."

You included chashmish Raghav and I simply cannot get over that! ❤️

I like the progression of this story - it's very believable and a notch up from the Raghav and Pallavi in the show. I'm loving Raghav's simmered temper so far, he seems to be on the edge (sorry, not sorry, as I've said before, the title is phenomenal) and reels himself back just in time.

The way Raghav studied DSE's finances and in fact, even the deal he struck with Pallavi - what an ace businessman! I have no doubt he can turn the fate of DSE around, I just hope Pallavi follows his lead and doesn't go off on Baba yeh/Baba woh tangents.

I'm also curious to learn more about Pallavi and what makes her tick, what's got her still strung to her ex-in laws.

Thanks for tagging me! Work has been insanely busy and that's led to being behind on lots of forum activity!

Ooooo wow! Things have definitely started getting interesting. I am eagerly waiting for the next update. Thanks for d tag!

Oh my godd

What did just happen!!

Let's just hope it doesn't get awkward 😂😂

WOAH!! 🔥🔥 Fire

He saw it then, the bars of her cage that were of her own making, the unlocked door that lay wide open that she wasn’t yet ready to cross. Yet another contradiction.- Seriously her own cage, this woman is Madd.

The slow buildup with them meeting to discuss about her business setup, Siddhesh already sizing him up, how Pallavi's overall character is what also starts to draw him like a moth to flame - I loved it all🤗

The last line should be - What had she just gotten herself back into?😉

Thanks for the Tag❤️ Nomad Nidhi