RaghVi OS: Dance Of A Lifetime - Page 3

Damn...I had read the actual story you had forwarded to me...and damn there are not just slight but many drastic changes you have done to each character in the plot

This is hot---I am now definitely imagining RaghVi like this and my imagination is running wild

Dude did you really have to include Sulochna, Mandaar and Pooja(Pooh) from K3G🤣

Bur I absolutely fell in LOVE with it

Love you loads

Originally posted by: Lisaxx

Aww...chinmayi...that was litttle rude😂😂

if it weren't for my classes it wouldn't take much time.

now i am free to read so I'll go ahead and do that

You do know what I had meant by that--it was not a rude statement😈

Nobody had told you to pick evening classes--could have joined morning ones with me

Originally posted by: Mihika

Arey Reem I am so sorry .... Hum padhe the ye wala but comment karne se pehle ek dusre thread pe gaye and I dozed off....isiliye comment choot gaya....

I am really sorry dear.

I just loved their passionate horizontal Tango ... Hala ki don't know what it looks like but Tango pata hai so imagining it in that line. Their hot confession is something I am craving to see and I won't hide it either.

All in all a beautiful and amazing OS👏

It's ok Mihika--no need to say sorry

Horizontal tango in an another word for sex

Thank you so much Mihika and I am happy that you liked it❤

Originally posted by: Lisaxx

Damn...I had read the actual story you had forwarded to me...and damn there are not just slight but many drastic changes you have done to each character in the plot

This is hot---I am now definitely imagining RaghVi like this and my imagination is running wild

Dude did you really have to include Sulochna, Mandaar and Pooja(Pooh) from K3G🤣

Bur I absolutely fell in LOVE with it

Love you loads

Is there--I tried to keep the changes to the minimal level

I just read the whole thing again---I did do some drastic change to the characters

Yesss yesss yess----I couldn't think of anyone else

Thank you so much yaar and I am glad you loved it❤❤❤❤

Loves you loads too gurl

I just love how this has been written! The flow is so smooth, and the use of this particular dance form to depict the underlying intimacy or tension between the two is so clever! Then there is Raghav's characterization, in just a few words, we know what he is like. And Pallavi's insecurities. In spite of all these, they give themselves a shot, who knows if it may last a lifetime!

Their chemistry is fire just through some really simple words like when she says his name and lets out a sigh, what follows next is left to the imagination of the reader, but you can definitely feel the spark!

Loved reading this, thanks for sending the PM, I could have missed this!

Wowowowowowwww this was just fire 🔥 could really see Raghvi in those scenes I love the fact that they’re willing to understand each other’s insecurities just like the show now

Great job 👏 thank you for sending to me :))

Why isn’t there a fire react? Anyways that’s what this OS was. Simply fire. We won’t get to see this in the show so we might as well make do with your story. It was so well written and their chemistry was sizzling☺️. Even Sulo was bearable in this 😆. It was very well written. Thanks for the pm.❤️

Originally posted by: Viewpoint

I just love how this has been written! The flow is so smooth, and the use of this particular dance form to depict the underlying intimacy or tension between the two is so clever! Then there is Raghav's characterization, in just a few words, we know what he is like. And Pallavi's insecurities. In spite of all these, they give themselves a shot, who knows if it may last a lifetime!

Their chemistry is fire just through some really simple words like when she says his name and lets out a sigh, what follows next is left to the imagination of the reader, but you can definitely feel the spark!

Loved reading this, thanks for sending the PM, I could have missed this!

Thank you so much and I am glad you loved this❤

There is no words needed between RaghVi to do a conversation---their eyes and actions are enough to convey them

Originally posted by: DivyaaaV

Wowowowowowwww this was just fire 🔥 could really see Raghvi in those scenes I love the fact that they’re willing to understand each other’s insecurities just like the show now

Great job 👏 thank you for sending to me :))

Thank you so much Divya and I am glad you liked this❤

and yes they can understand each other's insecurities and are willing to work on it

Originally posted by: hapc

Why isn’t there a fire react? Anyways that’s what this OS was. Simply fire. We won’t get to see this in the show so we might as well make do with your story. It was so well written and their chemistry was sizzling☺️. Even Sulo was bearable in this 😆. It was very well written. Thanks for the pm.❤️

Fire reaction emoji is not available on IF---we use the phone or laptop emojis for that😆

Yup we definitely cant see this in the show---as this tale is quite modernized to be aired on the show

RaghVi chemistry is always sizzling...

Thank you so much and I am glad you liked this❤