RaghVi TS : Amnesia - (Completed) - Page 2

Originally posted by: chat_3

Aww not a sad ending. I like the parallel flow of present and flashback in the story seamlessly. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Me000w

Welcome to the forum 🤗

Such a poignant, beautiful piece 👏

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks for the feedback! I have not thought of continuing this OS yet hehe😅. But lets see😁💙

Tanvi congratulations on your first os.

this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please

this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with

one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Tanvi congratulations on your first os.

this is a cliffhanger and do consider to continue this please

this os was really good--especially how Pallavi had found someone special to share her life with

one doubt--why didn't Raghav go back to his own house if he found Farhad, Amma and Kirti

Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?😉😆💙💙

Welcome to the forum Tanvi! 🤗

Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya 🥺 Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this ❤️ Very touching!

Do write more 🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

Welcome to the forum Tanvi! 🤗

Par aapne to pehle OS mein hi dil tod diya 🥺 Koi nahi, I love poignant pieces like this ❤️ Very touching!

Do write more 🤗

Will do!😆❤️

Loved this one. Really want to know what happens next. And also how and why he got into an accident in the first place. If he was a rich one, how come his family didn't find him for 6 months. And how did Farhad find them finally.. And why is Farhad calling her Vahini..so many questions..so please don't stop here 🙂

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks a lot! I was thinking of leaving this OS here but now, I'm doubting my decisions hehe😅.

Since I am thinking of continuing it, why not clear your doubts in the next update?😉😆💙💙

Thanks a lot Tanvi🤗

this is beautiful wow

i totally loved this

poor pallavi how heartbroken she will be

please do continue

bye sumi