OS: What's on the menu? - Page 2

Wow Yaar! This was just WONDERFUL ♥️

Certain scenes & lines I loved -

'He also felt terrible that he was nothing like Don Corleone and made a mental note of reading all Mario Puzo novels for tips on how to be a good Don.' 🤣

....Lord knows we all need him to read it from the last few episodes!

'His business was going well but it came with stress and several troubles with the tax man.' - the portrayal of how a simple hobby helps a Don to unwind.

Their drives & talks shared🥰

Chewing Fetish 😆 - True, everything's going haywire nowadays!

'While his brain and heart spoke to each other about taxes and humanity, his dish was ready. Thank God for hands that have mastered recipes like muscle memory, for the brain and heart always messes up in the most crucial time. ' - I so agree with these lines, has happened so many times

Loved the last line

Thank you for the distinction! I will be writing more light hearted stuff 😊

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

The result is declared...❤️ you got distinction🥳👏👏👏👏... such a sweet n simple and totally offbeat ... loved reading it ... keep working on such varieties you are doing exceptionally good in this❤️

I love Raghav and his tax situation. I had to write it down 😆Bechare ko CUSHTOMS mein bohot problems hote hai.

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Lovely piece. Raghav's self talk regarding taxes was fun 🤣

Thanks Mihika ❤️

hahaha eat dosa tomorrow dear, mumma is the don of the house. Always.

I love a domesticated Raghu.

Originally posted by: Mihika

This so utterly butterfly cute...❤️

Oh no I want to eat Dosa now😒

Mumma maaregi.... breakfast is already done ....

Aaj I will soak rice and dal....yes kal khayenge

Comeing back to the OS.

It was lovely.. Raghav cooking....being afraid of Pallavi .... And his excitement....his disappointment at learning he is not a good DON....wow...too good

Loved it dear🤗

Thank you!

I also enjoyed writing the end. Just drop a bomb and end it ❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

I so loved it and enjoyed this as much!!

The chef Raghav and her doing MBA!

But the ending had my heart where he cried not seeing her result but thr name it had written over it!!!

Amazing story!!!!

Please keep writing!!

Thanks Reem ❤️

I like a scared Raghav once in a while. he's too cute 😆

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I just loved the inner monlogue of Raghav--so he got a chewing fetish😆, loved that reference to Godfather, and don of the house is Pallavi👏

on cue music--Jai Shivaji--Raghav's inner self sweating but he tries to maintain his composure🤣

Really loved how it ended--although she registered herself as Sawant-she later changed into to Rao--and the last note by Raghav to Pallavi had my heart--it was so simple and cute story

Thank you!

Can we have Raghav read The Godfather please??? Are the makers listening? It will be like bada don meets chota don!

We don't get to see his business stress and it's important to understand that a man's got stress other than his house drama 😆(though he created all this drama, but still)😆

Raghav and tax - My favorite topic 🤣

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow Yaar! This was just WONDERFUL ♥️

Certain scenes & lines I loved -

'He also felt terrible that he was nothing like Don Corleone and made a mental note of reading all Mario Puzo novels for tips on how to be a good Don.' 🤣

....Lord knows we all need him to read it from the last few episodes!

'His business was going well but it came with stress and several troubles with the tax man.' - the portrayal of how a simple hobby helps a Don to unwind.

Their drives & talks shared🥰

Chewing Fetish 😆 - True, everything's going haywire nowadays!

'While his brain and heart spoke to each other about taxes and humanity, his dish was ready. Thank God for hands that have mastered recipes like muscle memory, for the brain and heart always messes up in the most crucial time. ' - I so agree with these lines, has happened so many times

Loved the last line

Wonderful OS, very well written!! 👏

Chalo, both are learning new skills and progressing life..me likeyyy!! 😳

The report card thing was also damn sweet! ❤️

If I may ask, what did he cook? 😛

Keep writing!! 👍🏼

Thank you!

What did he cook? So when I was writing this, I was craving chinese so I imagined nice chinese food and went to bed dreaming of food 🤣Nothing to do with marathi dishes 😆

Originally posted by: Me000w

Wonderful OS, very well written!! 👏

Chalo, both are learning new skills and progressing life..me likeyyy!! 😳

The report card thing was also damn sweet! ❤️

If I may ask, what did he cook? 😛

Keep writing!! 👍🏼