Raghvi TS: Surprise (part 2 on pg 5) - Page 4

Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing

Continue soon

Thanks, second part is now up! 😳

Originally posted by: cozy_vibes

arey arey asa kyu rok diya abhi toh bass asli part ane wala tha.. abb jldi update dena bass

😆 aapka asli part aa gaya behen.. part 2 is now up ⭐️

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Amrutha you witch 😡 pallavi is so hurt. And Raghav is pissed now. Can't wait to read next part please update soon

Ma-beti same mitti ke bane hai

Next part is now up, hope it meets your expectations! 😳

Originally posted by: Kavita99

Wow❤️plz update soon ❤️

Thank you!

Part 2 has been updated 😳

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Please continue this. Such an amazing start.

Thank you dear.. part 2 is now up 😳

This Bee.....you are very naughty.....ek kiss bhi nahi hona di🤣

Chata ko bich me le aayi☔

I loved it totally

Awww the end was really sweet !

Loved it ❤️

Kya baat kya baat kya baat!! 👌👌👌

The way he reminded her that this relationship js between the two of them and unless she does NOT let a third person interfere in its functioning, they are gonna be fine, coz he is not the type to pick up everything and run away, is that not what the basis of any relationship is? Without trust, everything has the ability to collapse in a few seconds, so glad she cleared that out. But hope she can leave these insecurities aside someday, even if it might be difficult. Also bhel puri and chhata made me crack up. Such an awesome nod to the Tony-Peter hug-but-not-really-meant-to-be trope..hehehe!!

P.S Could you make it a three part and have her tell off Amruta for being a lil child in the middle of two sensible adults and ask her to keep her nose away from other's lives? Would truly love to read that facet too, might give the story a more full rounded closure. Just a small suggestion if you could spare some time. Keep writing!! 🤭👏

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Raghav is definitely furious at Pallavi for her assumptions on him. quited excited to see how Raghav will make Pallavi face the truth- about his emotions and her beauty.

Raghvi meeting before marriage and them getting into a relationship is definitely a story I would love to know

Like she said, she doesn't need to be made aware of her beauty. She's self-assured that way. In fact, she knows his emotions too, just having a moment of insecurity. She would've sorted out her thoughts in a while, but unfortunately Raghav didn't give her that time 🤪 So yeah, now he's furious. But they love each other, so it'll all work out ❤️

Yes, I'm thinking to keep writing more shots like this. I don't have the time or patience for an actual ff right now, but it could at least be a series of sorts 😛

Thanks for reading and commenting 🤗 Second part is up!

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

so wanting raghav to take away all her insecurities

loved the realistic potrayal.

please do continue

bye sumi

Realistic was my aim, so thank you for saying that ❤️ Part 2 has been updated, hope you like it too 😳