Raghvi TS: Surprise (part 2 on pg 5) - Page 2

why this abrupt naensafi suddenly😭 we need aftewards... plz write soon n update ... the begining is catchy n we want good finishing touch... chlo chlo do it fast

Amrutha you witch 😡 pallavi is so hurt. And Raghav is pissed now. Can't wait to read next part please update soon

Please continue this. Such an amazing start.

Originally posted by: Mihika

Continue why stop😭

This was getting interesting....and you stopped just there😤

But it was an amazing start👏

Thanks Mihika 🤗

Will post the next part soon don't worry 😆

Originally posted by: xerxes12

I loved this so much❤️..pallavi being the typical girl is worth reading...she has always been this bread winner, mature, rational girl...but Pallavi throwing tantrums, because she somewhere acknowledges that some one is there to entertain them is so much fun...we girls no matter at what age we are ....do these things...

The best thing about your stories are that they are so realistic, I connect to them instantly.

Do write it's second part soon🤗

Let me just say, I always love your comments! ❤️🤗

Yes, I feel Pallavi as a character could be just as layered as Raghu, but very much in contrast with him. And she's a widow! Given the society and the side characters, their story would have a natural tadka even without the unnecessary drama they're going for That's the picture I was envisioning 😛

@bold: I love what you said here ❤️

Thank you 🤗 Btw may I know your name? 😳

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Their relationship here is so beautiful! Would have been a treat to watch them fall in love organically before marriage, be friends first! Love this ❤️ Can't believe this is where you stopped 😆 Continue soon!!

Thank you for the lovely comment! 🤗

The marriage drama is making me think of all the what-ifs that could've been explored 😛 Hence this idea.

Haha, that line was too perfect to not be the ending 😆

Second part should be up in a day or two! 😳

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Wow amazing, lovely story!

Can't wait to read more ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you! ❤️😳

Second part should be up in a day or two 😳

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

Noooo you did not just stop ! Gotta continue !

Loved the OS ❤️

Haha I did just stop there 😆 It would've gotten kinda long otherwise 😛

Next part should be up soon though

Glad you loved it! 😳❤️