FF: PALLAVI by Jalebi Jane SEE NOTE PAGE 117 - Page 29

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi

This episode was so adorably cute!

I'm now looking forward to Raghav barging into the Deshmukh saree emporium. This is better than any show... Wow!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Awww Harish also makes an appearance ..I like him.too

I love these interlinking relationships

Plus these female friendships are bae ..

Waiting to see pallu and Kriti bonding 🤪


Do old friends feel J when their bestie makes new ones ?

Love and hugs for updating regularly ❤️ and keeping my mood up in this pandemic .

Thank you for reading and commenting so consistently, Sister.

No jealousy---I feel Pallavi, Krishna and Kirti will be more like The Three Musketeers :-)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mihika

What an amazing mahaepisode. The makers won't give us one but you did. Love you so much🤗

Our Gorilla is too cute😆

Loved it❤️

My pleasure, Sister.

I know---I adore Gorilla. And what I adore more is that RR won't allow 'his' Gorilla to be maligned. hehe

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NESRIA

Thank you for updating❤️

I loved the maha ep

It is amazing how you cloud include elements of the show in your own story and managed to make us always looking forward for the next update

Poor harish pally scold him and raghav mocked him 😆

I love how raghav is always there for hiw people 😉

You are welcome, Sister. Pleased you enjoyed it. I usually write approximately 1000 words a day---and today I managed almost 2000 so I decided to call it MAHA. hehe

Yes---after laughing at poor Harish, Raghav and Farhad went to defend his dignity. What good men they are!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it 🤣🤣🤣

Yay pallu-raghu meeting can't wait


Was re-reading your fanfic khushi ... didn't realise how much I missed your stories ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Foreversonam21

Hi

This episode was so adorably cute!

I'm now looking forward to Raghav barging into the Deshmukh saree emporium. This is better than any show... Wow!

Pleased you enjoyed it, Sister.

And---yes!---tomorrow they finally will meet. No disguises. No pretences.

Just one man and one woman.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I love how you've taken elements from the show and tweaked them to add logic and reduce melodrama. The part where Farhad and Raghav pull Harish's leg was hilarious. I also liked the bond forming between the three girls. Seems like a Raghav-Farhad-Harish vs Pallavi-Krishna-Kirti. I'm also curious about Mrs. Tarabai Raje. Does she have a bigger part here? And who leaked the tape? Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Also fingers crossed, Raghav meets Pallavi properly, without any charade, for the first time soon. Do update soon. Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Loved it 🤣🤣🤣

Yay pallu-raghu meeting can't wait


Was re-reading your fanfic khushi ... didn't realise how much I missed your stories ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you, Sister.

I confess, I still enjoying reading KHUSHI too. I cringe at the writing---I hope I have improved in ten years since---but I love reading it because it was such a joy to write and share. I'm still in touch with some of our Sisterhood. Pleased you are here.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: hapc

I love how you've taken elements from the show and tweaked them to add logic and reduce melodrama. The part where Farhad and Raghav pull Harish's leg was hilarious. I also liked the bond forming between the three girls. Seems like a Raghav-Farhad-Harish vs Pallavi-Krishna-Kirti. I'm also curious about Mrs. Tarabai Raje. Does she have a bigger part here? And who leaked the tape? Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Also fingers crossed, Raghav meets Pallavi properly, without any charade, for the first time soon. Do update soon. Can't wait for the next part!

Thank you, Sister. The truth is that I'm not very fond of creating new plots. I prefer to take a plot and re-vision it with my personal preferences. Which is why writing FFs is perfect for me. I don't have to think of a fresh story; I just have to take a good story and add things I want and remove what I don't want.

Your post just gave me an idea---what do you say to a Gorilla-Krishna pairing?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you, Sister.

I confess, I still enjoying reading KHUSHI too. I cringe at the writing---I hope I have improved in ten years since---but I love reading it because it was such a joy to write and share. I'm still in touch with some of our Sisterhood. Pleased you are here.


If you call that writing cringe then I would say that's not true because the way you portrayed all characters are fabulous...

I'm glad I found you again too... ❤️

Keep writing & slaying

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