Maryada continues ( part 1 - 2 )

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Maryada by ( doitagain )


PART 1

Aditya receives a call from some person Mr.xyz

A voice heard saying to Mr.Aditya whatever happened will remain a secret between you and me but to keep my mouth shut you have to consider our proposal.

Aditya: don't you understand I don't care what ever happens I will not lose my path '.

Mr.XYZ: it's your choice '. better consider it before election campaign

AFTER that hhahahahahahah u know where the power lays.

Aditya gets upset. And gets angry '

Shall I inform about that to mom'

(no I can't she has just come out of it in from same situation I can't make her bare that again)

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DEVYANI 'UTTRA-TARA

Tara what are you eating right now '.

Devyani: give it to me too'

Tara: potato sticks'

Devyani taking some of those in her hands and ate them oh these'

You are eating these'''.

Oh god!!! can't you eat chips .

These sticks are lefts over from company making chips .When they are cutting potatoes.There are some part of the potatoes while cutting are left aside to be thrown out '

These people make others fool .infact only people like you'

Common mausi (aunty) ;) this is there product.

Devyani: product yes!! There waste product.

Tara : mausi she GIGGLES looking towards uttra.

Uttra: didi you are too much'.

Then they laugh together!!

Wow!!! Didi

I never thought we would ever be able to sit like this together again .

Devyani (glaring at uttra) : uttara just forget everything and move on,there is a lot in life to worry about.

Baby cry's

Yes for sure there is a lot in life apart from this. And smiles

Tara: mom till I am not going to hostel I will sleep with mausi.

Tara folding her hands around Devyani's shoulders.

Okay mausi I will

You don't have to ask says Devyani

Uttra: Didi she is not asking, only informing you ( uttra gives a little push on Tara's head.)

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ADITYA ' PRIYA

Priya enters the room seeing Aditya tensed she start talking about her case proceedings

Today I had a case proceedings about that corruption scandal of H group's manager.

It is almost proved that he was forced ( by giving life threat ) to do something which he was not interested to do..

I knew I can do it shubhankar sir told me to have faith on my client even he was wrong to some extent' but I am in my early stage of my career ..

There is a long way to go ..

You will have to first start somewhere.

Hearing all this aditya get even more upset ( hahahaha: it reminds him of that person who just called)

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SJ in the mirror

Flash backs the memory he shares with DJ..

The day where she finally says

DJ: Shubhankar I am sorry I can't.

Life is very big Devyani and this world is very small. You are my first love I can't let it go like this why? Tell me why?

Never !!!

I love you !!! yes I will never forget you nor will make you forget it'

I love challenges and now this is a challenge

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PRECAP:

Uttra remembers RD saying : look at DEVYANI she has moved on '.

Is that Didi really interested in '

She is looking at DJ



Maryada by Wardah ( doitagain) PART 2


DJ and TARA on bed talking while trying to sleep'

Mausi I am confused what should I become ...? from last few days I am here and I am daily going with Priya Bhabi to her firm it really sounds cool.

Mom always talking about her fashion designing but it does not attract me a lot .

However I love the dresses she designs but I am not keen to do .

Aditya bhaia is a politician it's dangerous. And mom says I am a girl I must keep away myself from some issues.

DJ : What make you feel is right .you can always go for it just make sure don't try to impose something on yourself .

Always do things with passion.

Tara : don't you think SJ is really cool . I like him so much. he is like a father figure. Don't you think .he is really a calm person.

DJ thinks about uttra then shakes her head. It can't be possible.

MJ will not agree.

Flash backs where she agrees to MJ that she will also try to find a girl for him.

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Next day at the table Aditya reading newspaper where it was written that

" RD secretary got killed and was found dead in a lift in the same building where is the main office of the party .he was two days back released from jail .and his body was found last night but the police says the dead body is two days old and in the first investigation people in the building says this lift was not in working condition from last 5 days ."

Priya : What happened Aditya do your breakfast.

Aditya : yes chori !!! Have you taken everything I need to take with me to the meeting..?

Priya:" you looked little tensed'?" Show me the newspaper'.

( he hands over her the newspaper and says that RD SECRETARY FOUND DEAD)

Priya also gets tensed because he was found dead in the office building .. so most probably police would make party liable for it.

There is silence '

Aditya leaves the table '

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DJ : UTTRA what you are upto'? Something new'

Uttra : yes didi .. this summer designs ' for local exhibition. Finalizing everything.its exhibition it will be my second venture.

DJ : I Wanted to talk about SJ.

Uttra remembers RD saying : look at DEVYANI "she has moved on '."

Is that didi really interested in '

She is looking at DJ

What happened '.? Uttra

Uttra: you want to talk about his marriage ( expecting that may be Devyani needs advice about her marriage with SJ )

Devyani: Hey how come you know that I am here to talk you about that is there any girl around for consideration'?

Uttra : oh ' okay!!! (she relaxes and says oh GOD what I was thinking)

Devyani : why what happened '?

Uttra : nothing I was thinking there are a lot of girls around me '?

Devyani : yes just like you 'we need a girl who is of his matching and understands him

Uttra: why are you doing all this, I know he is your friend but his mother is there for him she can find one for her ( Devyani feels little uncomfortable )

Don't worry didi I know one girl she is part of team and will be part of event management '.

Okay that's great !!!

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Aditya calls his secretary that arrange for his meeting with RD In the jail.

( only she can help me in this, and I can't share this with anyone else )

PRECAP :

RD in jail '.use your brain Aditya 'after all you are BJ'S son

Aditya leaves angrily'



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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay guys this is the first part i want you to go ahead and read it...
its already a week after maryada and i dont want to miss it i want to remember it forever ...you all are open to give suggestion and even if you want me to add or edit some part do tell ...
wait for part 2 ...



tweet me for any queries

@diakamil

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it going great... while reading i m just imagining each and every scene...looking forward to next chapter...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Damn good effort I must say! I was able to actually visualise every single detail! Please go ahead! Would love to read it as it makes me feel our Maryada has not yet ended. :) Aww... How I miss Maryada and waiting for the clock to strike 11..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting part! Eagerly waiting for the 3rd Part!!! Just a suggestion, instead of posting the newer part above, if it is posted below the first part, it would be easier to read. Hope you don't mind. :)

PS: Does Aditya have anything to do with the murder of RD's secretary?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its going interesting.. Looking forward to ur next chapter..
If ur FF is success i think u can take it to tv if possible.. i am sure everyone here will support
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Posted: 13 years ago
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YOUR SUGGESTION is great but will people be able to know that there is a newer part below it ...
or
any other idea...
hmmm...
and regarding the case you have to watch SBS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@doitagain, Probably you can change the title of the post whenever you post the latest update saying Part 3 updated or something like that... Just a suggestion though. Anyway, waiting for Part 3 :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maybe that's a better idea
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am struggling with audience ...
you guys are too supportive .

do you think FB page would have been able to work in my favour

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