ITG's JYRG /General Bhankas...Tidbits, SS, Poems etc

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Welcome to ITG's JYRG Bhankas... 😛
Short stories, Ukhane, Widambans, Poems and Tidbits write ups!


My write ups are inspired by the characters from Julun Yeti Reshimgaathi show on Zee Marathi.
All these characters belong to Channel and JYRG Team.
I have no claim on creating those characters, But the copyright ownership for my write ups posted here is with me !

Happy Reading!!!

Vaachu Anande 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Julun Yeti Ukhane

Aditya:

Bhajit Bhaji Bhendichi
Meghana Mazya Pritichi
ViChitra Mazya Maitrichi

Meghana:

Aditya Maza Shwas Ani Mee Tyache Pran
Tari Karate Me ViChitrala Adityacha Daan
Karan ME Kitee Baai Mahaan

Witchitra:

Radna Maza Dhongi Najar Mazi Vait Ekunach Ahe Me Psycho
Adityache Naav Ghete Me Dadhivalya Manojachee Bayko


Nana:

Sanjeevani mazi morambyachi barani ani me Desayancha Nyayadhish Sarvadnyani
Pan kontahi sankat ala ki sheput ghalun mhanto me Baghu vat pahuya aNi


Mai

Manohar mhanje amachya Nananche satat godave gane hech maze Avadate Kaam
Dwedi madhe mokat mhashi gola karun sunana kamala lavun me karate aram


Archu

Ayata Khana pina roj maherat mhanun agau ludbud karaylayla mala vel milto khara
Satish maza Nandibail ani baki sagale soshik mhanun chalte Mazi Mijas ani Tora


Satish

Sasurvadila ayta rahayla khayla milta mhanun zelato me baykocha heka
Archu mazi ladavleli agau manjar ani me ticha dyambis labaad boka

~~ITG

Edited by ITgirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Honaar Navi Sun Me Julun Yeti Reshimgathichi...

Desais hear the story of ViChitra's current love Babdya..

Mai - ( in all ashru mahapoor, padarane dole pusat)

Kay he Aditya, Atithi devo bhav...he tula shikalvlach nahi ka re amhi... Aplya kade ashrayala alelya ViChitracha tu man modalas Aditya?
Faar motha vishwasghat kelas tu, ticha ani amcha..
Tuzyakadun hi apeksha navhti re..
Ja, tila bike var gheun baher, ticha man ramel..
Tila apanach japayala hava , hooo na?

Nana - ( Nandibaila sarkhi man halvat, In Mai style )

"HOO"

Meghana: (Anandane bharavun)

Ho Aditya, Nana, Mai mhantat te barobare,patatay mala..
Apanach tya phoolpakharala savarayla hava na re?
Me bike saf karun dete thamb..

Aditya - (With guilty mode as if he has done murder..)

Tumhi mhantay te patala mala.
Aajpasun ViChitra hi mazich jababdari ahe..
Vachan dilay me tila

Sagale Desais Anandi samdhani Kautuki expressions ne ekmekankade baghat

Nana-

Chalaaa, Tulach tuzi chuk apanhun samajali he chan zala. Pan mazi ghanamrut pajaychi sandhi hukali..
Aso.. Ata ek kam kar.
Mehetanchya bajuchya 2 kholya rikamya ahet.
Tithe tuza navin sansar thaat, ViChitrala sukhee thev

Mai (Navaryakade ateev kautukane baghat)

Agadee mazya manatla bolalat


Meghana: (lagabagine)

Thamb Aditya, me tya room swacha karun dete tumhala.
Sagala saman lavun dete navin sansarala.


Sagale Desais parat Anandi Samadhani Kautuki espressions ne ekmekankade baghat

Aditya: (looking at Meghana in all appreciation, kautuk, dolyavarchi zulfe bajula ghet, blinking his eyes)

Chalel, tovar me ViChitrala bike var baher chakkar marun anato...


Meghana: (Who takes off her one small mangalsutra and gives it to Aditya)

Aditya, Are ek minute thamb. He ghal ViChitrachya galyat
Mazya galyat 2 ahet na re?
Mag ek ViChitrala ghalu det, ek me


Aditya: (Bharavun, teary eyes, looking at Meghana..)

Meghana, kiti dildar ahes yaar tu, mhanunach tu mala itaki avadates


Sagale Desais parat parat Anandi Samadhani Kautuki espressions ne ekmekankade baghat...


(Hearing this ViChitra who was sitting all the while like galun gelela phoolpakharu, suddenly jumps out of joy from sofa as if she has drank entire tray of energy drink or some drug now is in all smiles, looks into Aditya's eyes with all love and says) :

Aditya, tu mhanalas te agadi patlay mala, Hota asa kadhi kadhi

Sagale Desais parat parat parat Anandi Samadhani Kautuki espressions ne ekmekankade baghat...

Naav ghe g ata VIChitra

ViChitra: ( Adityakade ashalbhutpane baghat, hasat):

Bavalat Desayana ghabaravun sodun ghar, parat yeun kela mag radun kahar

Tya Manoj cha naav naka gheu, samajate swatala me chiknya Adityachi lover

Honaar navin sun mee julun yetee reshimgatheechi...

~~ITG

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Julun Alelya Reshimgaathincha Guntaval Karun Dakhavala Thenga

Anun Thevala Prekshkanchya Mathee Pokharnaara Vichitra Bhunga

Aawara Ata Ha Malikecha Pasaara Naka Gheu Prekshakanshi Panga

Sutu Det Prekshak Ekdache Paahun Adighanachya Balacha Bhonga

Ghasarleli Gadi Ghala Aata Yardat Nahitar Phalaatavar Hoil Danga


~~ITG
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Widamban of original song "Shepativalya Pranyanchi Bharlee Hotee Sabhaa" dedicated to Vichitramay D Gang...

Dhongi Dambhik Desayanchi Bharli Hotee Sabha
Bashkal Nana Hota Sabhapati, Tondachi Vaaf Davdat Ubha

Mitrano, ViChitra bhoot, Vichitra bhoot
Tumha Amha Sarvana Te Ekach Vishayacha Sheput
Ya Vichitra Mhashichya Sheptacha Karuya Kay?

Amit Mhanala,Vichitra Mhashichya Shepatacha Sokshmoksh Havaa
Nana Mhane ViChitra Mhashila Ladkya Kokrachya Madatila Lavaa
Mai Mhanali Hasaven Me ViChitra Mhashila Tumhi Pan Bagha
Meghana Mhane Metar Tumchya Pudhe Tya Mhashichya Madatila

Dhongi Dambhik Desayanchi Bharli Hotee Sabha
Bashkal Nana Hota Sabhapati, Tondachi Vaaf Davdat Ubha

~~ITG
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dadhiwale Chorniya Le Jayenge

Aditya and Meghana in their room sitting and discussing the plan to bring Manoj and ViChitra together...

Aditya ( Full enthu madhe, kapalavar yenari zulfa awarat)
Meghana, apan asa karuyat ka? Manoj alay na tar apan sagale milun magachya veli khelalo tasa music chair kinva asa kahitari khelu yat, pakda pakdi, Jod Sakhali vagaire. Dhamal yeil yaar "

Meghana (Adityache dokyavarche kes hatane viskatat)
"Ae ho re Aditya, solidach dhamal yeil. Jod Sakhali khelu Mhanje Chitra ani Manoj la tya khelat apan ekatra anu shaku. hai na?."

They call everyone out in Aangan to play game..
Everyone Chitra, Manoj Nana, Mai, Archu, Satish, Vijaya, Satish, Rane Kaka, Rane Kaku, Sakshi, Pallav, Mayu all gang gathers outside.

ViChitra is all hopeful that she will get to do Jodi with Aditya and is overjoyed by just thinking of it.
As the game starts She in her thoughts running around looking at Aditya, colloids with Mai and Rane Kaku and falls down. Stumbled Rane Kaku and Mai both fall on her..

Dheegakhali dableli ViChitra (Bembichya dethapasun koklat )
"Aai g mele..Mala vachava"

Mai, Rane Kaku trying to get up both at same time and fall again on her..
Mai jara khajil houn Vichitrachi samjun ghalat "Far lagla nahi na g tula?
Smilingly looking at Meghana, Mai continues..
Tasa me Meghana barobar walk la jate roj tyamule maza 200 gram vajan kami zalay aga"

Nana watching this padzad passively as usual says smilingly " Hooo"

Rane Kaka comes forward, gives support to Rane Kaku to get up from ViChitra and says to crying ViChitra "Ago mazo samanalo Padolas aan shinche tu kityak sotach radataas"

ViChitra hurts her leg is crying loud and trying to get up, limping.
Majoj comes forward to give ViChitra his support.

Aditya tries to console ViChitra Saying " Chitra, aga ashi radu nakos. Hota asa kadhi kadhi, hai na?"

Manoj takes ViChitra to the room.
ViChitra asks him to leave and says " Mala ektila rahu det jara. Me kamat guntavate swatala mhanje dukhanyacha visar padel"

Manoj leaves from there.
Archu get there with all Tray raw material and asks ViChitra to help her and that will make her feel better.
Disappointed and hurt Vichitra sitting on bed, helping Archu making Trays.
All the things like papers, Fevicol, Scissors are all over spread up.

Mayu comes and asks them if she can help them?
Archu is happy as she got one more free goat as helper and happily says, " Ho, ye na, Bas Ethe. Tu Chitra Atyala madat kar""

ViChitra is all fed up and repenting "Che, Nako to Chikna Aditya..Ani Nako ya vedya Desayancha sasurwas.. Me bavlat Meghana thodich ahe swatachi kama dhama sodun kontyahi parkya upatsumbha lokanchi seva karayla? Var hi asali bhavani Kaamchukar Nanand Archu. .
Tya Peksha maza Dadhiwala Vikshipt Manojach bara ahe apla..
Tyachi dadhi tochali tari chalel pan tyachya ghari nidan Raja Rani cha sansar tari asel..""

ViChitra lost in all these thoughts and feels sleepy. She puts her head down on pillow and feels some sticky..
She gets up and shouts loudly..
"Eee, he kay? Maze Kes ka chikatlet?"

Mayu shocked and then looking at ViChitra's messed up hair starts giggling and calls "Aai he bagh na, Chitra Atya la kay zala?""

Archu comes and shouts loudly " Chitra , aga he kay karun thevlas?
Kesana kashala fevicol lavlas? To Trays sathi vapraycha hota na?
Kesana shampoo lavaycha aga..."

Mayu says "Aga mazya hatun fevicol cha daba bed var paDala, tar Chitra atyacha lakshach navta, me sangat hote tar tashich zopali bedvar"

Archu angrily looking at Mayu " Are Deva, ata thamb Chitra. Me baghate. Thamb he kes katrine kapun takayla lagnar."

She picks up scissor and cut ViChitra's messed up hair hurriedly making ViChitra look utmost bizzare ...
ViChitra looks even more horrible than before in that new hairdo and sees herself in mirror and shouts.." Archu vahini, aga kay kelas he mazya kesancha? Ata me kay karu" and starts crying..

Hearing her cry, Aditya comes and sees horrible haircut ViChitra and shouts in shock "Ooohoo"
But then he realizes the situation and starts preaching her.
Aditya ( Dole michkawat, mishkil hasoon):
"Chitra, aga jau det na? Gelele Kes yetil parat. Pan Manoj ekda gela ki nahi yenar parat. To tuzyavar prem karto, ani aga (tyavrunach patata ki) Prem Andhala asta. Khara prem asla na tar To tula asahi avadun gheil"

Manoj enters the room and everyone else except ViChitra leaves from there to give them privacy.

Devasted ViChitra finally hugs Manoj and says..
"Me tuzyabarobar sangen tithe yete, sangen tashi vagate, parat ya Desayancha tond pan baghnar nahi. Pan ata mala ethun gheun chal please."

Manoj gets shock seeing horrible looking ViChitra in her short trimmed hair but recovers and smiles in his beard (as much as he can) and looking at her few left hair says..
"Ho na, Ya Desayancha mhanje na, Rogapeksha, Eelaj bhayankar.
Bagh na, mazya dadhit jast kes ahet tuzya dokyapeksha"
He holds ViChitra's hand, lifts her in his arms and both of them leave D wedi hurriedly thinking of never ever returning back..

There is music plays in the background...
Le Jayenge Le Jayenge, Dadhiwale Chorniya Le Jayenge..

~~ITG

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even if i had read them before, enjoyed reading them once again 👍🏼...keep them coming ITG...yeh dil maange more 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ITgirl.👏
As Vidya said even though I had read these before, it is a pleasure to revisit it again and again!!

JYRG has helped unlock the creativity in so many members, or maybe display their creativity!!
Tum bhi lagi raho👍🏼
Edited by gs34410 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vidya, GS- my ma ma to your posts.

All other creative people, join the party that ITG has started.
Edited by JaniBande - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vidya, GS, Jani Thank you my friends for tolerating and appreciating my bhankas 😛 🤗

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