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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..kimaya..
Finally read part 5...Very nice..Good going..👏 Will be waiting for the next part 😳

Thank u Kimayaa... Happy to read u r comment...😊

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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dipalimanish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Sayali, really gr8. I dont know how to express it, but you can actually see all this happening (like serial) in front of your eyes. Ur writing is too gud. Hey pl PM me that IMP Part

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JaniBande

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Sayali, already done reading this part. see how eager I am abt your write ups. you are so good with small details about AD MD's life and their understanding with each other. Past references are also interesting.

Apratim as usual. keep writing. i do keep reading the write ups when I feel like it as its such a fresh writing. its a a treat to read this.

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Nachiketj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Nice as always 👏..I liked the disclaimer too 😉

1 imp feedback: if possible dnt make MD to put on excessive weight

Edited by Nachiketj - 10 years ago

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Kshiti2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Hey Sayali.. Once again Amazing and its taking me to dreamworld.. khup Sundar..

Keep it up Girl.. Do PM me the Update.. Eager to read the Next..

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gs34410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Sayaliii👏👏

Kaay mhaNu. No words to express the excitement that you have created with this part😳😳

And you left it off at such a point ki attaa mala tuzhya write up cha next part vaachaychi utsuktaa lagli ahe!!!

Please do PM it if you are not going to post it on forum.

I hope Jitu Bhaiyya incorporates your story/scenes in the serial. 😊

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DiscoDhokla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Sayali!!
Mast as usual!! You capture even minute detail.. wonderful!!

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Lucky_2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Hmm ...

Sayali ... Aapla charan kamal kuthe aahe ... Sash tang Namaskar majha ... Part 6 was simply superb ...

Aata kaay ...

PM chi vaat baghat aahe ... For next part ... Send PM soon

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rupali.patil80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Sayali 🤗,

mazyatarfe tula treat when you will come down to Mumbai 😃

Do I have to request you for PM me that IMPORTANT update?????, keep going girl, do register yourself with Association of Writers as precaution to safeguard your write ups 😊 👍🏼

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