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Nachiketj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

👍🏼 v well written...suspense, tension cud feel everything...chala so pedhe ani barfi donhi khayla milala shevti..serial madhun nahi tar atleast tujhya writeups madhun 😊

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dipalimanish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Sayali, khup chhan. Waiting for the next part now

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gs34410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Smiley_23

give me the link... lagech apply karate 😆😉

The title of this article is "Ithe Lekhak Havey Aahet!!" 😊😆

maharashtratimes.indiatimes.com/movie-masti/tv/writers/moviearticleshow/46123292.cms

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Winn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

apratim...visualised every tension gone through every moment by Aditya and his family...masttt...

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Kshiti2014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Awesome Sayali.. every scene asa visualize jhala.. apratim ha shabd sudha kami aahe.. khupach chan.. tension.. suspence.. peda aani barfi.. dil kush kar dita.. juug juug jiyo..

autograph aani photograph milel ka ho Sayali Mam..

Edited by Kshiti2014 - 10 years ago

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Lucky_2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Hey Sayali!

Sorry for the delayed reply .. Currently on an official tour...Read last two Parts in a go ...

It kept my blood pressure on a see-saw mode... Read it during my tea break and the smile on my face at the end made my colleagues curious and anxious ... And I just replied back ... Long story ... (As They are all North Indians & hardly know marathi)

Loved the boy-girl babies jodi.. Rather must admit I wanted the same ...

Please do apply on MT adv. You are a terrific writer ...

Aata Kaay waiting for next & final part...

But I have a small request... If possible do start a new os or as or ff ... It's damn refreshing and fun reading your stories...
& yes i checked the website .. But the basic requirement to protect our stories is to have some publications etc. which is a big problem ... Can you please suggest on the same.

Regards,
Lucky

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

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gs34410

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Nice Ending Sayali 👏
I don't think it was abrupt!!
All good things come to an end eventually so I am both happy and sad!! 😛 😭

Chal atta ek naveen story start kar,then perhaps you can 'market' that as a basis for a new serial 😊

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ameya111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

As always Sayali...lovely! what a cute ending...the last line! So waiting for the next story to begin!!! i mean not on the forum but on whichever channel you choose. Only plz do let us know! All the Best!!!

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: gs34410
Nice Ending Sayali 👏
I don't think it was abrupt!!
All good things come to an end eventually so I am both happy and sad!! 😛 😭

Chal atta ek naveen story start kar,then perhaps you can 'market' that as a basis for a new serial 😊

Dear Geeta...🤗

Thanks a lot for your prompt feedback / praises and wonderful words of encouragement...

you are probably one of the very few readers who has commented on each and every part...

trust me it really means a lot to me and I value each and every word of it...😊

Edited by Smiley_23 - 10 years ago