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Krishna and Arjun together worshipped Sankar Shiv . They made a Mrithika ling under the mango tree and did Abhishek chanting Rudra mantras. Suddenly Ved Vyas appeared there and raised his hand in blessing towards Arjun. Krishna quipped." You can not be partial towards your grandson. I also deserve your blessings."
Ved Vyas folded his hands and admitted." Enough of your taunts Prabhu. I can't do that sin. You are yogiswareswar Narayan Vishnu incarnated on this earth to establish dharma. You fulfilled your purpose . Your soulmate assisted you in wiping off evil. I don't know when I will get the good fortune of seeing you together as Arjun and Krishna before you take your original forms as Nar and Narayan.
I won't disturb your privacy now. If you permit me I will meet you in the morning along with my desciples.

Krishna nodded his head and said." But don't reveal this spot to anyone else. I wish to spend time with Parth. I don't want to be disturbed."

Ved Vyas patted Arjun's back and admitted." You are the most fortunate one Arjun. We all crave to be with him but he desires to be with you."

After Ved Vyas went off the two friends walked by the riverside. Arjun asked Krishna" How is Subhadra Pragati and Pari? Uttara? When will they come back?"

Krishna laughed." They are enjoying so much . Parikshit became so friendly with Vajra,Aniruddh and Usha's son. Bhrata Balaram says they will continue the legacy of Krishna and Arjun. Pragati is learning dance from Usha . Father Vasudev asked me to tell you that he won't send Bhadra so soon. Mata Devaki wept seeing Uttara. She just could not bear to see her a widow."

Arjun's face turned pale." It is my fault. I was not able to save my son. "

Krishna took him close." Did I not tell you? Abhi's purpose is to provide a successor to the throne of Kurus. Also to persuade his reluctant father to fight with full rage. By the way The way you killed Jayathrath got written as a ballad and enacted by your desciple Satyaki. It became an inspiration for aspiring young Yadavs."

Arjun composed himself and said." I can't let Subhadra be at Dwaraka for a longer period. Without her,Pragati and Pari Hastinapur looks cheerless."

Krishna assured him." I will send them as soon as I return back. Now cheer up. Let us enjoy water sports hunting everything we used to. We may not get another chance...

Arjun stared at him and asked." Who is Nar? Why is Ved Vyas calling me so? Even Narad and Pitamah called me so."
Krishna promised." I will tell you before we go back. Now let us go to Satyaa and Krishnaa.


A bit away from the mango grove two temporary kutir type rest houses were constructed for Krishna and Arjun. Krishna's followers arranged everything that is needed while Arjun's officers arranged food for them . Away from the rest houses a simple kutir was built to be used as a kitchen. Food is cooked there by cooks who came from Hastinapur.

Satya and Draupadi sat on the benches outside their rest houses enjoying the cool breeze from the river. Draupadi and Satya wore half white sarees and placed jasmines in their hair. Draupadi leaned back on the soft pillow and expressed her joy." Satya how nice it is to relax in nature's lap. No Royal palace will offer such solace."

Satya agreed and taunted." Looks like your husband's nature worship rubbed on you. Right?

Panchali smiled and asked." Why are you looking different? Is everything fine over there?"

Satyaa nodded her head and said." I don't know my friend. I feel a certain disconnection in him."
Towards you? Panchali questioned with a puzzled look.

No. Not for me but in general. I think he is missing his Parth too much. I fought with him. Blamed him for getting addicted to his friend.He just smiled and brushed it off. These two are just too much. What do you say?Satya asked.

Panchali nodded in approval." Arjun also behaves the same. Suddenly he will get into desperation and confess " I miss Madhav." It takes lot of effort on my part to bring him back to normalcy."

Testing times for you Sakhi. But surely Parth would recover from my thoughts with your sincere efforts After all you are the love of his life." Krishna teased Draupadi.

And Satya Ofcourse would not rest till Madhav forgets me and gets drenched in her love." Arjun taunted Satyaa

Satyaa and Draupadi looked at each other and said in one voice." Where were you till now?

Arjun told Satyaa." We want to be with each other without intrusion from you.

Krishna tried to appease Satya ' Nothing like that. We are telling Ved Vyas not to publicise our whereabouts.Just four of us. No one else is allowed here."

Four of them ate tasty food and then went to the river side in moon light. Satya walked fast winking at Panchali. Krishna understood and caught up with her indicating Arjun to be with Draupadi.

Satya turned to Krishna and asked Swami I see you smile the way used to . You love Arjun more than me. " Krishna took her close and confessed." Believe me Satyaa. You are my inspiration and energy. I always cherish the time spent together. Don't compare with Parth."
Satya looked into his lotus eyes that are filled with love and said." Swami. Till I breathe my last I want to be your most loved one. Am I greedy?

Krishna confessed " No Satyaa you are not greedy. your love for me will be celebrated by lovers of all generations. Whenever your name is mentioned people will identify you as my most loved queen.


Away from them Arjun is silently watching his wife who is enjoying every moment spent there with him. Panchali looked so relaxed and laid back. He is swallowing the unparalleled beauty of his fire born that got doubled due to her happiness .He moved closer and kissed her nose ring that is shining on her cute nose. Panchali pushed him with inhibition looking around.

Arjun pulled her towards him and said." Enjoy the moment Krishnaa. Let us love each other like never before."
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amazing update after long time Arjun and Madahv spend some time together
and Arjun and satya teasing part was superb loved it
more ardi part is coming waiting for that
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amazing update after long time Arjun and Madahv spend some time together

and Arjun and satya teasing part was superb loved it
more ardi part is coming waiting for that

thank you for your good words. ARDI moments will follow
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Draupadi smiled at him. She always feels his poetic touch in such exclusive occasions. His expression gratifies her body and soul and she will get mesmarised as usual. Arjun tried to trace her thoughts." Where did you go ? shall I guess? May be the first flush of our romance after my return from pilgrimage?
Panchali bit her lip and answered boldly" Not at all. I did not reminisce any phase . Believe me. "

Arjun understood her intention . She is in her pretence mood. He became serious and said" Seriously? Fine. I believe you. But I would then like to remind you some of our cosy moments . Since you look forgetful I need to get practical. Shall I?"

Panchali's face turned red. He is impossible. She muttered under her breath.

What is going on?" Satya's voice is heard from behind. Krishna playfully teased Draupadi." You know Sakhi I am taking your husband again to roam in the moonlight. I hope you won't mind."

Panchali protested." Why did you include us in this trip? You both should have met and enjoyed."

Satya supported Panchali." Not fair Swami. What shall we do now" She questioned.

Arjun suggested with a smile." Go to the rest house and take rest. That would be better for your health."

Krishna assured the ladies that they will be back within a brief while."

Krishna and Arjun walked together after escorting their wives to the rest houses. After a while they stopped and sat gazing deep into the waters. Krishna asked Arjun." Still brooding over Kunti Bua's exile plans ?"

Arjun nodded in approval." Why should she do so? Sahadev says she wants to punish herself for what happened to Karna. Is he her only son? What about us five who were deprived of her presence for thirteen years? She is not thinking of Pragati even."

Krishna tried to explain." Parth the kuru tradition she wants to follow. Don't you remember your great grand mother Satyavathi went to forest with your grand mothers Ambika and Ambalika. They died there and reached heaven. It is the custom Vaana Prasth they are taking up."

Arjun still did not reconcile. He said." But all through her life she suffered except when we stayed at Indraprasth. She can meditate in Hastinapur if she wants. "

Krishna said " Bua wants to serve Gandhari and she is right. This phase is meant for self realisation.She will admit her lapses before her conscience and get relief."

Arjun lamented." Mata can not get the satisfaction of relieving her burden. Karna was no more. So she can't ask forgiveness. Krishnaa frankly told her she can't support her decision to devide her among us. So till the end she will suffer. That will be more painful than living in forest."

Krishna said." Parth she should not be blamed for Karna's plight. She was unmarried So she did what she thought is better. As for Panchali's forgiveness,you know her I know her. She sacrificed herself to let your mother and Eldest's decision happen only to be your wife for atleast a short period. Kunti Bua should be thankful to her but should not expect Panchali to say yes it is fine to be the wife of five."

Arjun took Krishna's hand into his." I know Madhav but my mother doesn't understand what she is expecting ."

Krishna pressed his hand and assured." Parth she will realise. Penance and meditation certainly helps a person develop detachment insight and right understanding. By the time you visit her in the forest Bua will change her outlook. She will tell Panchali she is right."

Arjun saw a ray of hope in Krishna's words. He thanked his Madhav heartfully. Krishna quipped." Now let us go back otherwise Satyaa and Krishnaa will shut the doors on our face. By the way you both still look so passionately in love with each other. I am impressed."

Arjun retorted." Shall I say the same for you and Satyaa? You remained as obsessed with her as before."
Krishna laughed and admitted." Ofcourse I am. But Satyaa feels I am obsessed with you"

Arjun shrugged his shoulders." What is new in that?


Panchali did not open her eyes sensing him get inside. Just a while ago she and Satyaa went to their rest houses as they thought the two friends may not come early.

Arjun approached her and understood. He tried to kiss her eyelashes but Panchali turned to other direction. He then caressed her back that has the jasmines hanging from her hair. Panchali moved away not giving him access . Arjun smiled and lied down He said." Looks like she slept. Must be tired."

Arjun closed his eyes and waited. Panchali got up and side glanced He looked like he got into sleep already.She sighed and tried to take away her Pallu end that went under his hand. Suddenly she found herself captive in his arms. Arjun kept her on his heart and asked." Feigning sleep? Yajnaseni can sleep without waiting for her Arjun?

Panchali sulked" Why should I wait for you? You came here to enjoy with your Madhav.You can have your time. Satya and me won't disturb you now onwards. Go ahead."

Arjun laughed at her sulking." Sure. I want to go ahead and drench myself in your love."
Panchali kept silent. She knew it is not easy to win him in words.


Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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beautiful update di 😳 loved ParAv's Conversation
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Amazing update love the way Arjun teasing his krishnaa
Love the way krishna said Kunti should thankful to panchli and
should not expect her to be happy with her decisions
waiting for the part when kunti will realized her mistakes
Drupadi showing her Anger in a cute way love it

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