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Posted: 8 years ago
Panchali turned back to go but Arjun stopped her." Why you are in such a hurry to go? Spend some time with me and I promise I won't force you to change your stance." Arjun's words made her think. She did not reconcile with his marriages but still he as her husband has the right to ask her time if not her submission. Draupadi walked back and Arjun 's face brightened up. He touched her cheek smoothly and said." See the moonlight on Yamuna waves. Isn't it beautiful? Madhav says his childhood at Brindavan was the best period in his life.He says he lived life freely without any worries responsibilities and expectations."
Panchali asked him curiously." Why didn't he go back to Brindavan? Is Radha his first love? Satya says he still loves Radha madly."
Arjun stared at her beautiful face and answered." Yes she is his first love. Krishnas you know it is impossible to forget our first love."
Panchali turned her face away." Who else will know it better than her? She doesn't want to satisfy his ego by admitting " Yes you are my first love and I can't forget you."
Arjun observed her expression and said in a low voice as if measuring his own words." Madhav still loves Radha the most. But he will never get back to her. Neither does he wish to call her to Dwaraka"

Draupadi asked him curtly." Why? Isn't it his duty to fulfill her love by making her his queen?
Arjun replied firmly." She is his queen. No need to offer her worldly status . She is Prakriti. She lives with nature.not in cities. Madhav never will cause inconvenience to her by calling her over."
Arjun took her hand in his and whispered." You are my first love.I know it. I don't need to prove my love for you." Panchali felt his breath so near on her face and closed her eyes. She knew he is her weakness. He knows that.But she will never forgive him for his colourful affairs especially with Subhadra. He brought her to Indraprasth and she will share Yajnaseni's time with him.

Panchali opened her eyes and found Arjun ardently looking at her with love.The corners of his hazel eyes are reddish indicating his desire for her.Draupadi snatched her hand from his and turned to leave.

Arjun called her in a challenging tone." My father in law is coming tomorrow. He loves me a lot I will complain to him that his daughter is not performing her duty as my wife."
Panchali's face turned red. She knew he will take advantage of her father's love for him.


The caravan started after Sun rise.Arjun is certain that to hunt the wounded tiger not mantras but archery skills are needed.He formed the vyuha with him and Rishi Vyas in the front Dharmaraj with kuru army in the middle and Sahadev with a group of officers at the back. Before they start Sahadev came to Arjun and informed in a low voice." Bhrata these villagers think that their goddess entered the wounded tiger. So they don't want us to hunt that animal."

Arjun knitted his eyebrows.He stated." They are foolish. How could they think like that? Innocent lives are getting lost. You don't bother about them."
Arjun took five of his best archers and stationed them in the front row. Four elephants with drivers were in the next row.The elephants looked tensed up as if sensed that they have to hunt the tiger.
Ved Vyas got into a chariot with two of his desciples. He is chanting mantras continuously making the whole atmosphere charged up.
Arjun took his Gandiv in his hands and fixed the arrow perfectly. His instinct can sense the footstep of the tiger more than anyone else.The silence is smoothening as well as terrifying.But not to him who is used to such kind of adventures.




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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
after long time full update
with ardi
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Originally posted by: bubulswt

superb update

after long time full update
with ardi
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Thanks. ARDI update always offer bliss. Me as a writer you as a reader.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetka

adventurous update...

bYes Arjun is in adventurous mood.
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As expected Arjun's instinct gave him the signal. It is past mid day when Arjun heard a meek but clear rustling sound to his right. He signalled the drivers and let the elephants stop. Ved Vyasa's chariot stopped abruptly.The Rishi sat in Padmasan and silently chanted the mantras.
There is a tense silence all around and even the breathing sounds are suppressed purposefully.Arjun knew if the wounded tiger attacks even the well trained elephants may stumble.
Arjun looked up and observed the birds that stopped twittering.
Within minutes an angry roar is heard . The tiger bounced upon the elephant left to Arjun.

The elephant moved quickly and threw the driver down.It made a round turn and tried to crash into the jungle left side.Immediately Arjun's arrow struck into the haunch of the tiger and wounded it severely. Arjun waited for the beast to strike again. There was an uneasy silence around. The tiger growled again with anger and pain.It again attacked the elephant . This time the elephants in the row broke the line making a gap in between.
The tiger stood shivering observing his prey move away to a safer distance.From where it stood the king and his group of guards are clearly visible . Suddenly the chant of the mantras sounded high. Arjun could not understand why the silence was broken despite his instructions to the sage not to raise his voice at any cost.
The tiger got disturbed and irritated on hearing the mantras.it sprang upon the chariot of Ved Vyas from where the mantras were heard.Arjun's arrow sped fast and caught the tiger in the middle space,in mid leap.
While Ved Vyas looked with astonishment,shouts of praises and applause rose high into the sky." Victory unto the greatest bowman ever,the best archer,the conqueror of Kuru kshetra ...

The dead tiger with its mouth wide open is quite a sight to watch.Ved Vyasa admonished Arjuna" Phalgun why did you shoot the tiger? My mantras would have pacified the wild beast.Why can't you wait for a while?"
Arjun replied firmly" What if the mantras fail to overpower the beast? Isn't it risky? Pardon me but I was guided by my warrior instinct and I shot .I can't take chance"
Sahadev rushed with excitement and hugged Arjun." It was a treat to watch your arrow striking the tiger in mid leap."
Eldest smiled at Arjun and told the sage." You can not expect Arjun to stand still while you are the target of the beast. If you want your mantras to do the trick you should have placed me beside you and sent Arjun to the last row."
Ved Vyas smiled broadly and touched Arjun's head ." What say Archer? Go to the last row now. Still more tigers we may have to face."
Arjun laughed merrily and said." I don't mind at all. My arrow can pierce the target from the last row also. "

Draupadi covered herself with a shawl feeling the warmth against the chilled winds. Her old memories always envelope her especially when Arjun is away from her. She doesn't want to come out of them at all. One of her cherished memory is her father's first visit to Indraprasth.

Drupad fondly caressed her curls and asked." How is my Krishnaa doing in her own kingdom? I feel proud seeing the prosperous Indraprasth the pride of Pandavas."
Panchali touched his feet and said." I am fine Pitasri and too happy to have you here.Finally you are able to visit your daughter's home Even though you came for some one else."

Drupad laughed at her and said." I came to bless you. All these years I didn't feel like coming. Now your family is complete with Arjun's return . He specially sent me message that you are missing me so much .He understood your feelings for your father."
Draupadi widened her eyes.When did she tell him all that? She hardly interacted with him after his arrival with Subhadra
.Draupadi confronted him when she happened to meet him on her way to dining hall." When did I tell you I miss my father? You are a liar."

Arjun made an innocent face and said." What can I do? I very much want my father in law here.You know the reason that is why I took your name.He can not cross his daughter's wish no?"
Panchali muttered under her breath" too clever and smart."

Arjun pulled her to the corner where no one will go except Draupadi as there is goddess Annapurna inside the enclosure who is worshipped before serving food.

Panchali tried to get out of his grip. Arjun told her softly' Don't continue with your sulking queen. You know how precious our time is for both of us. Tonite I will come to meet my father in law in your chamber A discussion on war fare is due on his request. Hope to see your welcoming smile."
Arjun left immediately leaving Panchali in trance.


Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago
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superb update..it was so good...I loved it
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amazing update
ardi part is very cute
adventure time starts again for arjun
loved it
Edited by bubulswt - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetka

superb update..it was so good...I loved it

Thanks. Happy Vijaya Dasami.
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Originally posted by: bubulswt

amazing update

ardi part is very cute
adventure time starts again for arjun
loved it

Happy Vijaya Dasami
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Parvati taunted Mahadev." Your devotee visited our territory again Swami."
Mahadev asked with a smile." Is there anything that is not our territory?"
Parvati smiled back." But still My father's peaks are our cherished abodes. By the way why did Arjun come now? Looks like his Eldest also came . And our Parasar Putr Vyas also.
Siva frowned at the mention of Vyasa and said." I hope he got used to not visiting our Vaaranasi,Kashi again. " Parvati looked with concern. She remembered the long before happened incident.

Vyasa along with his desciples entered sacred Vaaranasi ( Kashi) with a wish to serve Visweswara Mahadev. The jyotirling Kshetr boasts of Mahadev's presence there as he always cherish the place just like his Kailash. Annapurna Parvati serves food at twelve in the afternoon,as per the belief of devotees.
Vyasa along with his devotees roamed in the streets waiting for some house holder to offer him food.No one called him or his desciples. Vyasa got hungry and angry at the same time.He took water from his kamandalu and became ready to curse.
At that moment Vyasa heard the sound of bangles and turned back. He saw a lady before a house signalling him with her hand. The hand is beautiful with red green and yellow bangles.The lady wore a beautiful dark green sary with red border.She has a red bindi on her forehead . Her hair is plaited with flowers hanging down and she wore many ornaments that enhanced her beauty.
Vyasa and his desciples were served food that is too tasty and rich.Opposite to Vyasa sat her husband who is silent but stern. He is tall golden in complexion and has a strikingly beautiful face.He has tripundr three Vibhuti lines on his forehead.

Vyasa got mesmerised on seeing the couple. He ate like never before and wanted to thank his hosts.
Before he could open his mouth the householder raised his hand and said in his thundering voice."

Ved Vyas! You became that arrogant that you attempted to curse Kashi ? Don't you know I love Varanasi like I love Parvati. No one would return from Kashi with hunger. Being a sage you lost your control ? Don't you know Swayam Annapurna my spouse Parvati serves food here?You have set a bad example for others with your behaviour. I punish you for that. Don't ever step into Kashi again"

Parvati remembered the incident and got pity over Vyasa. She cajoled Mahadev" Swami. Now he must have come for a different purpose. Nothing is beyond you Prabhu. Please help them in their endeavour." Mahadev smiled at his kind hearted spouse and assured." Uma, I don't hold any grudge for Vyasa now.I know why they came. They want to take the gold kept by the Brahmin's here for Yudhishtir's Aswamedha."
Parvati questioned him" but your pramathas and pisachas are guarding that treasure."
Shiv Shankar smiled again." Gandiv Dhari Arjun knows how to keep them away. Your brother Narayan already signalled me his dear Parth came along.Above all he is Nar my devotee . He will get what he want without trouble."

Draupadi welcomed Arjun with a smile. She knew her father is observing them both with curiosity.
Arjun smiled back with his usual charm.Drupad blessed them both. His long desired dream got fulfilled how desparate he is to see his daughter as the wife of Arjun!
The discussion on war fare continued seriously. In between Panchali served them cool Badami milk and turned to leave. Arjun pulled her to sit by his side and said." You also take part atleast by being a listener.You like it I swear.Isnt it Pitasri? He asked Drupad who nodded his head in approval.

Sit Krishnaa,if you listen to Arjun you feel how easy it is to take part in war." Drupad boasted.
Draupadi bit her lip in frustration. He knew how to win his father.
Panchali sat quietly listening to his magnetic voice explain vyuhas and methods of archery.she closed her eyes feeling the thrill.
After a while she opened her eyes as some one shook her shoulders. Arjun is gazing into her eyes. Her father must have left for sleep.
Arjun took her face in his hands and protested."You got so bored that you got into sleep? "
Panchali blinked her eyes and looked at his endearing face .The long curvy eye lashes made her wonder how could men have such beautiful lashes.
Arjun bent down and kissed on her eyes. Close your eyes now. They test my self control. I promised you I won't advance without your permission. Still how much do you punish me Krishnaa.Better that I should have stayed in forests Penance is better than this pain I must say."
Panchali enjoyed his sulking and said in a low voice." Go wherever you want. You will entangle yourself with beautiful women."
Arjun laughed throwing his head back. " Promise my queen without your permission I won't proceed now onwards.Women have to wait."
Panchali pushed him away and accused." You are a flirt Arjun,always."



Edited by ltelidevara - 8 years ago

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