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update coming in hour or two hours galz!!!
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CHAPTER NINETEEN

DIWALI HAIN!!

" Krishnaa, come quickly!It's getting dawn! We need to go to centre now!"

"Yup!" and they both left for centre.

" Anyone didn't recognize na!" Dhrisht asked

" Uff Dhrisht! If anyone had seen, then we wouldn't be here alone! Don't ask sarcastic question!" Nilanjana said.

"Haan haan, you both Sakhis always make me buddhuram!"
" See, Dhrisht, we are not in the mood to quarrel! Bana banaya achi khasi shanti nasht kar dia!" Draupadi replied irritatingly. Madhav observed her keenly. He sensed something different in her. Though he knew, can he reveal he knows everything! He can only reveal that when time comes, to parth. He then asked her,
" Sakhi, why are u looking different today?"
" I...I don't know..." And with a mischeivous smile, Nilanjana tip toed to madhav and said everything what hapened today. And an evil loop side curve formed on both their faces.

"Ahhm ahhm,I can smell something sweet! In the air!" draupadi rolled her eyes to both of them.

"Where?? Is there any jalebi?? Or kaaju katli?" Dhrisht asked excitedly. And Nilanjana and Madhav bursted into laugher. And Draupadi's face became red with anger and embarrasment.

" Why you both are making me suspicious? What if Pitashri senses?" Draupadi whispered.

"Arre Maharaj only wants that na! You agree for Swayamvar! Won't you agree now? He asked making his eyebrows dance.

" I..i'll think it later."

" Thank god! At least now you'll think about it! Before you wouldn't bear it's name!"

" Not now, Govind! Let's go to mahal first. We will talk then."
" Hmm... Okay, now enough of laughers, let's go now!" and Maharaj Drupad's army left for Mahal...

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"Well, Bhai, isn't this diwali unique one?" Nakul asked Arjun. Then both were sleeping outside on a handmade bamboo rope bed. Arjun abruptly was looking to the sky and thinking about the whole day's incidents. This was his daily work.

" Hmm... I think so..."
" Sahadev was saying that something may happen within this time. What do you think, what'll happen?"

" Don't know it nakul. We're not omniscient. Let not bother about future.You know, everyone's life is like an unknown play. Each time it gets more intersting. Some parts are happiest, and some dreadest. We don't know what'll happen. Even if we want , we can't change the script of this unique play. Let's leave it on the play's writer. He'll only write what'll be good at last."

"Hmm... So our work is to be the puppet of the puppetier!" And the holder of mor mukut with utmost glaze smirked like a lotus blooming in blue water. The windflew against the morpankh with a chill in it. How magically the morpankh flew!

" Bilkul! We don't have hands of our own. Even if we move it, not by us, but at contribution of the puppetier. But we shouldn't stumble. If we, then the puppetier even can't complete the play! We should be intact on our paths of Dharma."

" Hmm... Okay, so good night now!"

" Good night!"
" Happy Diwali in advance!"

" To you too!" And they both went to a deep sleep.

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NEXT MORNING...

"Shshshhh..." Two shadows passed with manly structure. They had a plate and a spoon.They both tip toed to the room.

" Ghroww... phrush!!" someone was snoaring like kumbhakarna.

" Uff! Why he snoars like that!" And that huge man moved a bit itching his ear vigorously.

" Shshhh!!" another structure rolled it's eyes to the talkative one. And the other shadow put it's finger on it's mouth. And very carefully, they both went to the bed of the big bodied man. And within a moment, it discovered that the sleeping person was bheem and they both were none other than nakul and sahadev.

"dung dung dung dung dung!!!" sahadev patted the plate with spoon jumping and nakul said, "DIWALI HAIN!!!!" And bheem woke up electrifying.

" What is this! Does anyone wake up someone like this!!!"

" No one does, but we do it!" And the twins high-fived. And Arjun made his sleepy entry waking up with all chaos.

" Kya naatak chal raha hain yahan??" Kunti asked with hands in her hips. When she came her face was white with panic, but when she saw, her face turned red with anger. Arjun stood there confused.

"What drama is happening now?"

"Should I break neck of you both's??" Bheem said taking both their necks on his hand and start shaking both of them

"ou..ouch!! It's Diwali Bhrata! Diwali mein thoda bohot chalta hain!!"
" Haan Bhrata!! Leave me!! It all Nakul's plan!" Sahadev pleaded.

"Now don't take your foots back!!" nakul said angrily

"Me taking, really?"
" Ohho, wasn't it your plan to wake bhrata up by banging plate!!"
" So it was also your idea to give Bhrata a shock!!"
" Really!!"
" at first pushed me in trouble now not admitting your idea!!!"
"Oh really!"
" Yes!"

"Okay stop you both now! Enough of your comedy, and get freshened!!" Yudhistira said. And arjun shook his head laughing seeing his brothers' tantrums. Okay, enough you all now, Bheem, wake up quickly and all fresh up!! Go go go!!" Kunti ordered.

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There was essence of celebration in whole panchal. Same was with panchal Mahal. And Panchal Naresh and Dwarka nandan was gearing up for something.

" So which type competition can be given, Vaasudev?"
" What you want?"
" I only want Arjun as my son-in-law. That's it."
" Umm... so if we keep arch..."

" What happened, Vaasudev? Why did you stopped?" Krishna signalled to be quite with finger. He whispered,

" Can you hear any footstep?"

"Yes! Umm... it's Panchali!"
" Hmm... wait... she wants to listen maybe. But we can't reveal it to anyone now. Wait a moment, let me see." And krishna tip-toed same like draupadi. She was hiding behind a curtain near the door. Suddenly she freezed with fear.

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Krishna ti-toed to krishnaa. She was sneaking inside the room and trying to hear the conversation. He nodded his head smiling at her childish nature and slightly tapped her shoulder.

" Tick-tock!"

"Woohh!!Go..Go..Go Govind!! Wha...what were you do...do...doing here?"

Draupadi said in state of shock.
" Hmm... meri billi mujhe hi miao! I should ask this!! What's all this taak-jhaaks?? Haan??" and made his eyebrows dance.

" Th...the...the.. matter.. is..th..that..that..." she stammered.

" What haan?? Why are you peeping inside?"

"i..i..."

"Let her know, Vasudev." A voice said.

"What to know?" draupadi threw her hands in air in confusion and looked at krishna in confused eyes.

" Okay... okay... we'll tell you, but it's not appropriate place to talk. Let's go inside." And another being said," Hmm... something brewing inside this Mahal. Otherwise what's the need of concelling with a raajkumari? It should be informed to Gandhar raaj as quick as possible..."And Shakuni's messenger vulture took letter of that person.


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"Hmm... Essence of swayamvara in Panchal! Wow Pratikami! What a news you brought!" shakuni said with a loop side smile

" What messege mamashri? What type of good news? What to do with us with it?" Dushashana asked

" Uff murkh! Don't you know, Panchal kumari is the most prettiest and mesmerizing woman in trilok!" Duryodhan said while inhaling the air with deep breath.

" Yes! What do my child wants?" Shakuni asked

" That princess!" and they both high-fived.

" Even if I don't win, I have my mitra na? We'll take his help and kidnap that maiden."

" I can do anything for your pleasure, mitra! Just let the swayamvar begin!" Karn tighten his hands

" Well well well children, don't get influenced just by the breeze. Let the wind come fully!" and they laughed and cheered their glass of wine.

TBC...


Ohhkaaayyhhh...

so after looongg time... maybe after one months, i'm gonna update!!😆 sorry for being late galz, but what to do, these exams are jus😡🤢 but i'm all back to write fully power-packed!!!😃😳 Now u all will get update daily!!😃
Edited by aanvi98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
O for the nok-jhoks! Love GoLi for these! Kaash ki kabhi mere saath bhi aisa hota! It was soo beautiful!
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Posted: 9 years ago
So u finally updated 😉 u r a good girl! It was such a sweet update I loved it! 😳 Krishna-Draupadi-Arjuna all are so cute 😆 😳
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

O for the nok-jhoks! Love GoLi for these! Kaash ki kabhi mere saath bhi aisa hota! It was soo beautiful!

thank u pro!!😳 hamare GoLi hai hi itne cute!!😳
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Originally posted by: Mahiima16

So u finally updated 😉 u r a good girl! It was such a sweet update I loved it! 😳 Krishna-Draupadi-Arjuna all are so cute 😆 😳

Haan.. at last... tnx for loving it!!😳mujhe toh laga tha i'll be bashed lyk hell 4 bringing those troublesome foursome...😆 shayad kisine notice nhi ki!!😆 arre three krishnas are always cute!!😳
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Originally posted by: aanvi98


Haan.. at last...tnx for loving it!!😳mujhe toh laga tha i'll be bashed lyk hell 4 bringing those troublesome foursome...😆shayad kisine notice nhi ki!!😆arre three krishnas are always cute!!😳


Arre I noticed them but I try not to comment on them as much as possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
I need to read this from chap 1.. .will comment on each chappie separately !!
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Originally posted by: DramaQueenBride

I need to read this from chap 1.. .will comment on each chappie separately !!

Ohhkaaayy di!!😳 waiting 4 it!!😃😳
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thnx neha!!😃

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