Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16)

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Yagya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Adbhut, darling!! It is an understatement though!! Every word was chosen perfectly!! It was never the fault of Draupadi in anything that happened!! Her every step was blamed by people!! Was it a Yagyaseni's fault at being dishonored any where? Was it Panchali's fault to have five husbands? was it Krishnaa's fault to maintain a pure relationship with Krishna? Was it Mahabharartii's fault to ask for justice which we take as Kurukshetra? Was it really Agnijyotsna's fault to be beautiful?Was it Yojanagandha's fault to attract people? Was it really Samragini's fault to be proud of herself? sensible answer to every question here is no!! But people continue to defame her!! Everyone is sympathized on but Draupadi lacks even a simple respect that no girl is named after her!! People glorify Arjun, bheem, karna and even durydhan than why do they defame Draupadi!! I always feel my life is so similar to Yagyaseni( not vastra haran!!) and this part really felt as if my life was reflected in it!! Loved the name Krishnaa you used here!! Please use my name too( yagyaseni)Please PM me once you update it as it would give me the gift of the day!! Lovely again!!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

If I tell you that this was brilliant then it would be an understatement of epic proportions!! This was way and above that!

Draupadi for me is no less than an enigma; a tale that has been mis-interpreted over and over again. She is one such fable that has so much to offer everytime it unfolds! I really can't understand why her name and her character is dragged to be filthed by the muck of abyss? Was it her fault that Kunti divided her among the Pandavas so that the brotherhood remains strong? Was is her fault that Hastinapur got divided? Was it her fault that she was dragged by her hair in court to be stripped publically? Was is it her fault that she stood up for what was just and right?

Men are allowed to marry multiple times; they are allowed to pick favorite among all their wives; they are allowed to have keeps in their chamber...all this is their right! But if a woman is to place her ivectives or questions over that she looses her cahracter? Why Draupadi cannot be counted among the ideal women of history? Only because she was vocal about her rights??

People sympathise with Karna; Duryodhan even! They praise the Pandavas and Subhadra...even Dusshashan gets his share of mercy then why should Draupadi beg for the respect that is her?? It pains me so much that she still is held guilty of a crime she never comitted.

Your first few scribbles to this very piece ran on a similar wavelength! And I honestly couldn't agree more. Its like you are peeking into this Yajnaseni's burnt soul and pouring out her molten and unsaid thoughts! I would love to read more on this: especially by you!

And please whenever you feel you palm itching with a narration; do send me a PM. It makes my day!

Awaiting imaptiently for the next installment!

Love,

Shivani

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Sorry for the delay in replying Gayathri..😭..bit held up with functions & am out of town..

Great piece of writing!👏..I loved the Intro!👏..The Shloka added to the effect of the narration that followed & the portion on Krishnaa was Soul Stirring!👏..You should continue with more!😳😃

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smartfotografi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Helo, i'm new member in india forum.

Dear ..dreamygatz.., when i read your preface, for me you choice words is very precise words to describe Yajnaseni character. Have i privilege too, to read your writing of Draupadi POV.

Thank you.

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

Great... Great... Great introduction.👏
I liked no wait I loved every line you wrote. Such a true and fine introduction to Yagyaseni.👏
Continue soon please.

Thank you so much!!!

really encouraging comments! 😳

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Sha-Ja-Fanatic
Cool!! 👏 It is beautifully written! Thanks for the pm.. Update soon..

thank u dear... will update soon ! 😳

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair
wow... u started it... great...
the slok in the beginning. .. blew my mind...
and thanks for the krishnaa part I had goosebumps reading it...

sp never addressed her as krishnaa.. they only mentioned it during her birth...

I couldnt control from starting! That is one slok which I really love! I love calling her Krishnaa (I envy you for your name) Thank you much for the encouragement! 🤗

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smartfotografi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

I'm eagerly wait it.. 😊

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xxserenaxx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

beautiful introduction 👏 luv the way u write wonderful dear 👍🏼 update soon 😊

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream
absolutely wonderful Gayathri...loved the way you started it. This is going to be fantastic, I am so looking forward to the next part

Thank u so much 🤗

I will be looking forward for ua response ❤️