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Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

This is a kind of reply that every writer would like to read.😛

You've beautifully summerised Hidimbi's life in three words.

Moreover, this part is something very vary special for me. I was sure that it will be left unnoticed by many. I can't express my joy reading someone noticed it. 😃 ☺️

Thanks a million for this amazing reply.⭐️

regards,

Jamy.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

u deserved it!

Thank you very much.😃
'Deserved' is a big word for the writer in me.

Indeed an lovely OS the way u write was too good 😳 yup beauty doesn't matters in love example Gandhari who loved her kids even though she never saw them except dury

Beautifully Written OS!👏..Thank u Amrita for reminding about Hidimba..no one has explored the BhimBa Relationship in a FF/OS so far..😳..And the OS is so Poetic..👏👏👏..Hidimba was a strong woman yet she has had to ake so many sacrifices in her life....glad this OS saw her reconnect with the Love of her Life - Bhim!😳😃😊..I Love the way u have captured the thoughts running on Hidimba's mind..👏👏👏..Loved reading it!😊

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

Thank you a lot Amrita.😊 you can call me Jamy like every other one does.

Actually I've always had a soft corner for her. But she was forgotten till I read your story. Finally she got her love at least in the story. I can't exactly imagine how she managed to live her whole life without him, that too when he was not so far away from her. Unless we live that life, we cannot feel as strong as she felt. Mahabharata is a riddle sometimes.

I've not read Mahabharata completely. The stories I heard describe her only as a Rakshasi. But my sense is not ready to accept that. You're right. She must've been a tribal lady only.

Originally posted by: luv_sakshi

Beautifully Written OS!👏..Thank u Amrita for reminding about Hidimba..no one has explored the BhimBa Relationship in a FF/OS so far..😳..And the OS is so Poetic..👏👏👏..Hidimba was a strong woman yet she has had to ake so many sacrifices in her life....glad this OS saw her reconnect with the Love of her Life - Bhim!😳😃😊..I Love the way u have captured the thoughts running on Hidimba's mind..👏👏👏..Loved reading it!😊

Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

very delicately and articulately written! 👏...

The words you write from heart are among the best compliments I could ever get.🤗

love the many comparisons, it so well dwells with the train of thought! ...

I've learned comparisons from your SoorYastic writings of DABHily.🤗

never judge a book by its cover!

I did not get this'! I'm bad at riddles after leaving DABHily.

she is so pure and dignified without fear she embraced her fate with all if's and but's and that too with all smiles ... she lived her life in a few moments and spent the rest of it in treasured memories with selfless desires! ... and when time came she let go of her husband, her son and even her grandson!

This is the part I love the most in your replies: how you describe the whole thing in your own words... As Hiral amma used to say, you fill the voids of what we write.⭐️

thank you Jamy for sharing your wonderful talent with all of us

Thank you for your wonderful writing which made me here today & discover my talents.. 🤗

and reminding us of Hidimbi / Hidimba and

why she deserves to be worshiped!🤗

This is new for me!

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter

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First of all, THANKS for choosing Hidimba ..

No mentions Sayanee!

another forgotten and ignored woman in epic ..

They forget only SOME women!😆

they call them "Rakshashi" ..

What can I say? Naa psand bahu jo bhi kare sab bekaar!

it suddenly reminded me Brits used to call us Blacky Native .. We often ca't bear the same insult we do to someone else

exactly!⭐️

2ndly, your language .. it is soothing, poetic, lyrical .. your narrative gives a vivid image of the happenings and guide us into the character's heart .. Brilliant

3rdly The depiction of nature .. It was so beautiful so apt that it took me to an enigmatic world of epic existence .. Hats Off

More comment after I am back to my place .. now in office so can't write a longer comment

Some words are better understood untold! I

U r giving me too much of credit... 😆

U deserve most of it yourself, for writing such a lovely piece... 👏

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

Indeed an lovely OS the way u write was too good 😳 yup beauty doesn't matters in love example Gandhari who loved her kids even though she never saw them except dury

Hidimba might not be an human but she is an living being who has heart!!