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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

truly a masterpiece ...😊

everything is so beautifully explained in the form of words...👏

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panchaali

@panchaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

The final dice has fallen, now the pawns will fall one after other. I don't desire to live anymore, don't want to see its end.In war winners may create legends but in the realm of dead, nobody is victor but mere survivors, burdened with guilt look for peace in imaginary heaven. I created the hell for enemies; seven heavens can't please me more.

these are wonderful lines...whoever won or lost the war, Shakuni remains the ultimate winner...

I will be back, ages after ages through the same path you have opened for west.After sun rises and sets for billion times the spirit of my land will be back to haunt you again and again, to break your peace, impede your growth, destroy your men. Pages after pages of your history will see bloodbath caused by my land of desert.** You evoked Shakuni's hatred now you never be able to forget me, the curse of west wind will be your destiny.

Wow wonderful finding, this is so true most attacks on India comes from west...really may be still curse of the Shakuni remains in our land...Lords could not stop it...these lines also created fear in my mind..it feels true somehow, feels like far in the west one avenging man staring at our land of Bharatvarsh..his blood thirst never ends, no matter how much anarchy comes, how many men die, he craves for more of it...Oh Princess Gandhari why did you blindfolded your eyes??? only you could have have stopped this destruction may be...

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582445

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: vaikartana
Sayanee its excellent👏I always felt ur way of thinking is different and has always felt admiration for it.Everybody prefer to think from the winner's side.Those who are the villains as per the popular belief often don't get a chance to speak their minds U have did a wonderful job Do write more.Thanks for d pm

thanks for the lovely comment .. I guess I have a thing for the losing side in epic😭 .. most of the time we don't even know their side of stories or just don't wanna see them .. I will try to write more thanks

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luv_sakshi

@luv_sakshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Well written...made for great reading!👏👍🏼

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Srishti

@srishtisingh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

sayanee its so amazingly written that I was swayed by it. r u a writer? because its compact and superbly expressed. and the lines in story holds so true,especially the one abt war- that in in realm of dead nobody is victor!

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582445

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Dont forget your favorite devarji as well. 😉

what about Sasur jii but Sasumaa is too possessive 🤢

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582445

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: cute.manasi
truly a masterpiece ...😊
everything is so beautifully explained in the form of words...👏

thank you for your comment 😊

Originally posted by: luv_sakshi
Well written...made for great reading!👏👍🏼

thanks for reading n reviewing 😊

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Cotswolds

@Cotswolds

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: panchaali
.Oh Princess Gandhari why did you blindfolded your eyes??? only you could have have stopped this destruction may be...

Now is Gandhari the most hated lady or the honour still goes to Kunti ? 😆

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: SayaneeH.Lecter
As per writing I joined IF for writing FF .. but I don't write FF anymore .. was trying to write on Karna but Pati Shri is so complicated I come up with Mama Shri😆 .. will try to continue writing the os on Karna

Our Aarya is more complicated than Mama Shree!!!! 😲😲

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Now is Gandhari the most hated lady or the honour still goes to Kunti ? 😆

I respect Gandhari a lot, but yes she should not have covered her eyes...

and I hate only one character in MB passionately, no lady or man can take her place, give Kunti some credit boy, she earned hatred with her talents...😃

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