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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

(What is Kamdevs day puja and I actually thought of posting this before to taruna- we just had a scene with one couple ,if we have such scenes with others then impact of both will go down so lets have this ,since you wrote a big one on Y and D ,I am continuing,its my request after YD can we wait for sometime before some other couple pleeseee.And its ok tarunaa everyone makes mistakes..I love writing no matter what or which couple,"except one"I will write On ans S also but pleese finish one and then wait and then go to next one-My suggestion😊.One request-No abrupt endings for this,I still think in last one much was left...😆)

"What are you doing don't pleese ,Dont touch my feet"-Drau

"Its not stoping,if I dont it will keep on bleeding,forget the doctor,besides you also touched my feet yesterday"-Y "Well I did not ONLY touch your feet..."-D.Yudi got somewhat irritated and said in cross tone."There thats it ,done" he stood up to leave...

"What was wrong with you in the morning,your brothers have been discussing that you need rest,"-D laughed

Yudi ...(I do not know how to conntinue,)

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K.Puja Biswas

@Pikachu_007

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Yudi said "nothing "saying this he was about to go away but suddenly he heard Ouch word cause she can not walk .In sudden Yudi take her in his arm and she was

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

[OMG!! I actually figured the same Kamdevday🤣]

"Why did you try walking?Anything you want to say?"-Y

"First you tell me why is your head sweating,and this this why are you looking here and there Samraat?"-D said and noticed him actually trembling.

Dwarpal shouted-"Samraat !! The doctor has come,should I send him??!!"

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K.Puja Biswas

@Pikachu_007

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Y:"hai une andhar bego"Dwarpal:Vasudev Krishna bhi hai Kya une bhi ander begu?Y:"abshays.Both kanha and doc enter doc says thanks to Yudi coz for his shawl patte bleeding was stopped he gives medicine and was About to live but Y stopped him and ordered him to go to A.Aftet that K ask Y and P is Tha KDD today? the couple were shocked

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

[OMG Kdd😆😆-Can't stop myself from writing Now]

Y-"How does it matter Krishna?" Y irritated.}D-"You did not answer my questions?" "What questions ?"-K

Y looked down and down once giving side glance at K then not looking at any one,while Drau had a steady gaze.Then K said ...

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K.Puja Biswas

@Pikachu_007

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

P:Sakha what you mean?K:You know what I am meaning.All palace people are gossiping about You ,Jyesth and Parth,Shubhadre.Aaap Dono ne toh meri pukaar bhi nahi suni .Aab saab toh godh pe utao aur biwi ka sath romance karo game khel rahe hai.Yand P was hell shock

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

,K-"Sakhi I also have question.What had happened to you in the morning Jyesht?"Y-shocked but still looked down.D--"Govind I will ask your question also to him but now go from here I need to talk to him"

"And for your information,The palace is gossiping about you both since yesterday night...I think"-K

D gave a glance at Y and saw that he was feeling extremely uncomfortable,"Govind I think you should go"-D

[@Puja pleese convert your language to english dear😊,I have also made that mistake many times😆.Guys pleeese don't consider me to be partial and YD fan,I amfine with BD,ND AND SD tooo,I tried to change topics but unfortunately or rather fotunately whatever it comes back to this😉]

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AnuMP

@AnuMP

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Panchali got annoyed with Yudhishtir for stammering and stuttering and said 'That's it, I am not talking to you for another week. That is my pran!'

'Now Govind let's go and see what's happening with the other Aryaputrs'

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KHUSHI-99

@KHUSHI-99

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

So they both went to see Sahadev was:Looking sad as he already got the poorvabhas of jyesht and Drau's fight.

Nakul:Dressing and Bheem:eating laddoos,Arjun was talking to Nakul ,Subhadra was there trying to walk with a support."What happen D?Why are you here go to your room you got hurt right??"-Bheem D irritadely said,"I am coming from there only,"Suddenly a dwarpal came and said something on hearing which D forgot all her anger,the 4 brothers looked worried,all of them rushed towards...

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