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Posted: 11 years ago
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It just struck me some words ,as the tears of Draupadi touched my heart.I always feel a lot of emotions while thinking about her,hence decided to make a short VM and some words depicting her plight based on this latest Subhadra and Arjun marriage..
I hope you all like it.Bouquets and brickbats all are welcome
Piu🤗




[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwF08eKQzT0&feature=youtu.be[/YOUTUBE]



I was all alone,

Since when you were gone...

Life was better ,Life was bitter..

A mix of both where co-existed together pleasure and pride..

With a penance which was for a lifetime , an oath to abide...

The world was beneath my feet in a flight of time..

Some shattered hopes , some fulfilled by a fate divine...

Bowed to destiny, I stood by pledges to adhere..

More than love , more than care..

Different relations got prepared...

Counting each day ,each night my eyes were drenched..

To smile was excruciating ; it did exist even if my heart wrenched..

In misery and in pain...

Acceptance of fate did make me learn to be vain...

But days now come to an end..

Where I silently argued with fate to make the rules bend...

Nothing much changed but a bud sprouted in my heart...

Sighs turned into patience every day we were apart...

But as the winds bring in your fragrance and the flowers do bloom...

Swaying with the winds spelling an end to the doom..

Don't know why I am in a lust..

To meet you just..

To find solace in your arms ,the feeling of loneliness which has overgrown..

Will die a slow death when I listen to your luscious tone...

Dreams of hope,dreams of love make my heart flutter..

Thousands of tales unheard ,I wish to utter..

But dreams are not reality and now this reality is a dream...

Tears of happiness in my eyes were ready to brim...

But face to face I stand with a mirror of a union that was mine...

But another one's heart is now tied to you ,with her hopes pined...

The only one question -Why me?

But I know the answer and will say -"Try me"

There is nothing more which I can do when you made me face my worst fears..

Again ,I bow down to destiny ,with my dry tears...

With grace and poise ,Do I welcome thy nubile bride...

Wishing you all that in the world can be...

What remains with me is my Silent pride...






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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is brilliant 👏 I've been craving for an OS of this type...lovely vm n just heart touching lines ⭐️
Please continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rushika

Wow this is brilliant 👏 I've been craving for an OS of this type...lovely vm n just heart touching lines ⭐️

Please continue soon..

Thanks so much for the appreciation.It was meant to be just one-shot purely so May be some more on some different scenario.Will definitely try something.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG,its really a fantastic one😛...

nice vm

and on reading that os,my heart has melted to the core and it made me to cry too.each and every line is very well written👏

please continue it SOON😳
Edited by shiningstar77 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful poem 👏...I am very sensitive about this Draupadi -Arjun-Subhadra issue. Thanks for such a beautiful poem.😊

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Originally posted by: shiningstar77

OMG,its really a fantastic one😛...

nice vm

and on reading that os,my heart has melted to the core and it made me to cry too.each and every line is very well written👏

please continue it SOON😳

Thank you so much for those wonderful words of appreciation..🤗Trust me I have tears in my eyes too whenever I read or watch this part of the EPIC. A pain in the heart is for sure. Though we may keep on arguing for our mind's satisfaction that she loved all the husbands equally ,but one can never do that.When won at the swayamvar ,she must have weaved millions of hopes around Arjun all to be shattered but accepted her fate with dignity and grace.What a strong willed woman.But at the end she is HUMAN too...
Well I can go on and on but as of now,this was meant to be One Shot so not going to be continued but I can hope ,I ill again come up with something that will touch my heart again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Thank you so much for those wonderful words of appreciation..🤗Trust me I have tears in my eyes too whenever I read or watch this part of the EPIC. A pain in the heart is for sure. Though we may keep on arguing for our mind's satisfaction that she loved all the husbands equally ,but one can never do that.When won at the swayamvar ,she must have weaved millions of hopes around Arjun all to be shattered but accepted her fate with dignity and grace.What a strong willed woman.But at the end she is HUMAN too...
Well I can go on and on but as of now,this was meant to be One Shot so not going to be continued but I can hope ,I ill again come up with something that will touch my heart again



ya,paanchali is such a brave woman,but i cant bear the pain she undergoes in this situation,

and i am waiting for ur next os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice vm.the song and scenes were gr8 together.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice poem piu..
👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritat

Beautiful poem 👏...I am very sensitive about this Draupadi -Arjun-Subhadra issue. Thanks for such a beautiful poem.😊


Thank you so much for those wonderful words of appreciation..🤗This entire issue has so many emotions to it...Somehow it always touches me

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