Bheem-Draupadi-Partha OS~Of All the lies~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear all,
Hi and Umm For those who do not know me I am Piu..I have been watching MB and reading too for quite some time.Not forgetting to mention,I just am so emotionally attached to MB. Every time I watch and read about it ,my heart just chokes.I do not know why I want to write this ,but it's been there in my heart since quite some time.The Os would be from BheemSena's POV..To have loved and lost ,it makes his POV even more touching.
Hope it is received well.Do let me know if you want me to continue😳
Piu🤗






Sometimes Do I even wonder..

Can I change my life and turn the tides of time..

If I could only prevent my heart's unwilling surrender..

And wipe off all the thoughts of her sublime.

By those three words my life took a turn

Love blossomed in my heart brought lots of fun

People say that LOVE is the best word

and they made me fly like bird..

Wild in my heart ,the tenderness all masked..

I would have readily died for her even if she might have not asked...

Sometimes my love made me fly

Sometimes flamboyant ,sometimes shy

Of all the lies she said to

I love you was my favourite

For the man I could never be...

Still her smile ; brimmed my heart with glee.

I could never be the one she wanted..

The incapability had always left me haunted...

The man in whose memory she would yearn..

By those three words again my life took a turn

Fire was in my heart ;it sometimes seemed to burn...

People say that they are the best three words..

They were not for me :this thought to my mind never occurred

Because the heart knew but still my vision blurred...

More than love more than care...

Different relations got prepared...

Heart began to dance and enjoy

Life was beautiful as her eyes sparkled with joy

A kiss of love and a memory of delight...

At her mercy ..such is my plight...

In her eyes I wanted to find myself..

But Alas in Vain!!

The heart is somewhere shattered..

...again in deep pain

As my Life comes to an end eyes do drain

Echo of those words now echoes in my ears

Dreams got washed away by my tears

Sometimes my love made me mad

In her passion I was giddy but still the heart is glad

Because out of all the lies she said

I LOVE YOU...is still my favourite

There could be hundreds of words that could describe what I feel; mostly stupid though. But somehow I do still feel tongue -tied speaking about the women who could never be mine. United forever -yet so distant. The communion hasty , hesitant yet mutual. Life can definitely be surprising. With her in my life ;it was never the same again. With the image of Partha in her eyes ,she entered our lives but her eyes were like a mirror resplendent with fire of her heart. The woman to whom I belonged even before knowing it.






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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow will defo read

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is beautiful, my dear Piu. Do continue by all means,and I am sure it will be as good as your earlier story about Urmila and Lakshmana which, as you know, I loved.

Wishing you a very happy, healthy and peaceful 2014,

Shyamala

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Dear all,
Hi and Umm For those who do not know me I am Piu..I have been watching MB and reading too for quite some time.Not forgetting to mention,I just am so emotionally attached to MB. Every time I watch and read about it ,my heart just chokes.I do not know why I want to write this ,but it's been there in my heart since quite some time.The Os would be from BheemSena's POV..To have loved and lost ,it makes his POV even more touching.
Hope it is received well.Do let me know if you want me to continue😳
Piu🤗






Sometimes Do I even wonder..

Can I change my life and turn the tides of time..

If I could only prevent my heart's unwilling surrender..

And wipe off all the thoughts of her sublime.

By those three words my life took a turn

Love blossomed in my heart brought lots of fun

People say that LOVE is the best word

and they made me fly like bird..

Wild in my heart ,the tenderness all masked..

I would have readily died for her even if she might have not asked...

Sometimes my love made me fly

Sometimes flamboyant ,sometimes shy

Of all the lies she said to

I love you was my favourite

For the man I could never be...

Still her smile ; brimmed my heart with glee.

I could never be the one she wanted..

The incapability had always left me haunted...

The man in whose memory she would yearn..

By those three words again my life took a turn

Fire was in my heart ;it sometimes seemed to burn...

People say that they are the best three words..

They were not for me :this thought to my mind never occurred

Because the heart knew but still my vision blurred...

More than love more than care...

Different relations got prepared...

Heart began to dance and enjoy

Life was beautiful as her eyes sparkled with joy

A kiss of love and a memory of delight...

At her mercy ..such is my plight...

In her eyes I wanted to find myself..

But Alas in Vain!!

The heart is somewhere shattered..

...again in deep pain

As my Life comes to an end eyes do drain

Echo of those words now echoes in my ears

Dreams got washed away by my tears

Sometimes my love made me mad

In her passion I was giddy but still the heart is glad

Because out of all the lies she said

I LOVE YOU...is still my favourite

There could be hundreds of words that could describe what I feel; mostly stupid though. But somehow I do still feel tongue -tied speaking about the women who could never be mine. United forever -yet so distant. The communion hasty , hesitant yet mutual. Life can definitely be surprising. With her in my life ;it was never the same again. With the image of Partha in her eyes ,she entered our lives but her eyes were like a mirror resplendent with fire of her heart. The woman to whom I belonged even before knowing it.






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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW seEms aweosme please do continue
Will love to read about Bheem's POV
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wud really love to read it...plzz continue. ..wud love to c the other side of Bheem which was only for Draupadi :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes Wanna read from Bheem's POV
pls continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Wow! Piu you write amazing! Waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum work./...do continue...Want to see love of Bheem too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful...The agony is more palpable since, in fact it was Bhima who was always most affected by Draupadi's distress. It was Bhima who wanted to set Yudhishthira's hands on fire after Draupadi's humiliation. In Matsya, it was he who killed Keechak.


When Draupadi wanted the saugandhika flower, it was Bhima who volunteered to get it for her.

But I am not sure whether it was really unrequited love. We never really know whether Draupadi favoured Arjuna more than the others (except for Yudhishthira's damning verdict during their Swargarohan)

I would like to believe that Draupadi did not favour anyone over the other and she did love them all equally. When Jaydrath captures her and races away with her in his chariot, and the Pandavas follow them, Draupadi describes them very eloquently and emotionally.
Edited by varaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Piu 🤗...I office ...so will read it today night...

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