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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
back to back updates
Awesome update,
loved it
Madhu made it clear to Trishna and Rishi that she don't have any feelings for Rishi and even in future too she can't reciprocate his feelings and asked him to move on,
RM again met
continue soon
thanks for the update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Lovely update but my one question is what's wrong with Madhu? God it's she who blocked Rk & said him she don't want to be friends with him then when she later developed feelings for him & find him she insults him again as he didn't recognize her? She knew he is a flirt but still good at heart it wasn't fair of her to insult him before everyone how come he know she loves him? He might have thought she was hitting on him BUT the big but is I think Rk is acting I think he recognizes her but act as if he doesn't anyways I know Rishbala are gonna be together soon plz bring them together soon.. Thanks for the update I missed this story & plz update next part soon waiting eagerly & Happy Holi.. [/QUOTE
Glad u liked the update! 😆 Missed reading ur reviews to my story. And yes answering ur question, Madhu is totally wrong in reacting that way and blaming Rk for no reason. N somewhere she knows that too. But she had expected things to go different way, n was left heartbroken when they didn't, obviously not RK's fault. But that's the human tendency right? We usually blame others when we r sad in an attempt to lessen our grief n guilt. That's what she did although her heart knows that wasn't right. N we'll know soon whether RK was acting or not. N finally they'll surely end up together, bur not sure how soon. Thanks for ur comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: harini06

Happy Holi n welcome back prisha,
Nice update
its confusing whether Rk recognized or not,waiting for Rk's pov then only this confusions will gets cleared what his opinion on Madhu when he first chatted with her all that things,
Madhu felt disappointed when Rk didn't recognized her and she knows Rk is a big flirt she shouldn't have reacted like this with him infront of the other people,
guess she was hurt on rk not recognized her that's why behaved like this
continue soon
thanks for the update

So happy to read ur comment. Yes Madhu was wrong for insulting him in public but as u said, she was overwhelmed by the grief n pain of rejection n so overreacted. I know you keep requesting me frm RK's POV but sorry I can't bring myself to write it that way, atleast not now. I'll let the story progress through Madhu's POV fr non n then will surely give it ur way once I succeed in getting in his head😆 For now plz keep reading n reviewing the new parts. Tysm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: harini06

back to back updates
Awesome update,
loved it
Madhu made it clear to Trishna and Rishi that she don't have any feelings for Rishi and even in future too she can't reciprocate his feelings and asked him to move on,
RM again met
continue soon
thanks for the update

Glad u liked the update! Yeah Madhu did the right thing with being honest to Rishi. Somewhere the incident with Rk helped her to do things this way. I'll update soon. Keep reading.
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Edited by prishathebest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65

Chapter 8 Elevator band ho jaaye!


I can't believe he is standing in front of me right now. I looked at him completely stunned. He was staring back at me with equal shock. I noticed he looked different. His hair is all messed up, not at all gelled n groomed like I saw them last time. N his dark brown eyes r all red n puffy without the peculiar charming glint. He has grown a beard. That's new. I can't appreciate his sharp jawline behind that mess but I'm sure it's there. I looked down to find that his clothes r all disheveled. The top buttons of his shirt are undone n a well chiseled chest is peeking through it. I bet they lead to abs down there n wait, what is that reddish mark just above his collarbone. Is it a hick... Oh God! That's disgusting.

I turned away as my cheeks flushed with embarrassment. "What r u doing here?" I asked in an annoyed tone n looked back at him.

He took some time before answering me. "Not f**king u, of course!" He smirked.

My jaw dropped open at his reply.

"Hey did u f**k this chick too?" The girl behind him asked lazily. I had totally forgotten about her till then.

"She Wish!" He turned towards her rolling his eyes.

I could literally feel my blood boiling in my veins. "I would wish? Like that's ever gonna happen." I crossed my hands n looked behind him at the girl. Let me just burst his attitude bubble in front of his new ...whatever she is. "He approached me n I was the one to reject him! He thought he could woo me with his vapid flirting but I was too smart for my own good"

Rishabh gave me a bored expression n that infuriated me even more "Tell u what, do urself a favor n get away from this man. U can do much better than him".

Her eyes widens as she registers my warning. I really hope my advice gets in her head n she stops wasting her time on this loser. But surprisingly she reacted the other way. She laughed it out n got her hands wrapped around his neck clinging to him like she did before. "Well u wouldn't know how he is, as tonight he'll be sleeping with me not u. Jealous aren't you? Ur plan of getting me out of your way backfired right? Girl I had already fought with 15 girls in the club for him. N now he's all mine".

She giggled as he nuzzled behind her ear. "Forget her babe I wouldn't give her a second look when I have u with me tonight. Or actually," He paused n shifted a little to glance at me. "I would never give her a second look anyway".

My anger reached to it's highest peak. I wanted to punch him in the face and wipe off his stupid smirk. What does he think of himself? I pointed my finger as I began cursing him "Listen u pathetic, delusiona...ahh..." suddenly I was distracted by the strong smell coming from his mouth. "U stink!" I stepped back. "Oh r u, R U DRUNK?" Sure he was. I have never been this close to any drinks or drunks bt I was sure that the disgusting smell could be of nothing else but the alcohol. Oh, I felt like I couldn't breathe in there anymore.

He frowns seeing my repulsion n throws away the girl's hands off him. "Don't go all judgy on me again. I had a couple of shots but I'm not drunk"

I rolled my eyes n this angered him more. "Look, U maybe smart n have all that shit filled in ur head but that doesn't allow u to judge people all the time. U did this f**king shit with me both the times before n insulted me. I stayed quiet then, but I'm not going to take any crap from ur f**king mouth again!". He yelled glaring at me.

I should have given him a hard reply for talking to me this way. Or should have backed off seeing the magnitude of rage in his eyes. He looked dangerous. Hell he was dangerous! N he was dangerously close to me. Our bodies were still not touching but there was hardly any space left between us. His eyes held me captive n a shiver ran down my spine as I felt his breath on my lips. The air between us feels hot n as I take in the strong smell of liquor coming from his mouth, I find it sickening n at the same time... alluring! God I should just remind myself the little speech I made earlier about hormones going haywire n stuff. I should make an effort to back off. But my mind just got stuck to one thing. DID HE JUST SAY BOTH THE TIMES?

Our little moment was interrupted by the loud gargling sound from the third person present there. Damn! Why do I keep forgetting about her? She held her stomach n dropped on her knees ready to unload herself any minute.

"Shit! what is she doing!" I said clasping my hand to my mouth in horror, anticipating what was coming.

"She is going to barf it out all over, obviously" He snapped at me like I wouldn't know this.

Hell! this is literally a complete hell! "I know that genius. Help her out". I commanded.

N like the jerk he is, he threw his hands dismissively n moved away. "This is not what I bargained my night for. I'm not getting my hands dirty in that shit."

How rude was that! I gulped helplessly knowing well that its left to me to engage in this. I had no other choice "Ok I'll handle her but atleast press the alarm key. We have been stuck here for 15 mins n no help has arrived yet"

N he did that without arguing. I was holding that stranger girl who was getting more n more sick with every passing second. I just hope we r at least out of this small space before she... N to my relief, elevator started again n within seconds the door opened up. I quickly took her out n rushed her to the washroom in front. N we made it on the right time.

After what felt like hours she cleaned up herself with my aid n I supported her half conscious body as we walked out. Rishabh was standing in a corner, leaning on the wall with his eyes stuck on the phone in his hand. I should be pissed at him but honestly, I'm glad that he didn't left his...whatever to my responsibility n is still present here. "Here u go" I directed the girl to go n grab his collar. Jiska bojh voh hi sambhaale! "N now my job here is done. See u never again." I quickly turned to walk away as Rishabh caught the girl in one hand.

"Woah, woah, woah!" he held my hand to stop me. "U seriously r not leaving me with this, are u?"

"Her!" I corrected him. "N yes I m doing exactly that. U were the one who got her wasted, u were the one who brought her here for all the...wrong reasons n now u'll be the one to make sure she's safe n comforted"

He let go off my hand n cringed as his eyes shifted on the girl in his arms again. She was mumbling something n I bet she would be smelling all rotten. Serves him right! "Hey, I didn't get her this drunk, she was already wasted when I met her. N besides, u heard her earlier, she was the one who came on to me first. I was interested in the blonde one more." He said dreamily "l knew I shouldn't have picked her up"

I shot him a glaring look n he sighed. "Ok just tell me what should I do ?"

"Take her to ur room like u intended to. But let her rest until she wakes up" I said n he looked at me like I've suddenly grown up some horns or something.

"No, no, no". His eyes widened as he immediately dismissed my idea. "I don't do that. I don't have girls sleeping in my bed. I just entertain them till the actual business n that's it".

I stared at him in utter disbelief. Can this guy have any less decency?

He might have seen that displeased look on my face as he quikly thought of another idea "l'll do one thing, I'll ask my manager to get her a room in this f**king place n get her friends to know about her whereabouts. Yeah that's sounds right" He said n quickly called someone through his phone.

I'm not very impressed by his choice but still it's a good plan. At least he is making sure she ends up safe

We left her to her room n I must say, he made the best arrangements for the girl. Her friends will be reaching here soon n will take her.

"So? " Rishabh asked me once we submitted the room's key to the reception.

"So?" I questioned him back. "Any palns for tonight?" His eyes hinted mischief.

I rolled my eyes n began to walk towards the elevator. Can't believe just few mins before he was being so mean n rude n now he's back to his firty self. Sure he is still drunk!

He followed me, stepped inside n hit for the top floor. We were quiet fr a while "U r staying on the same floor?" He asked raising a brow.

"None of ur business" I answered with a straight face n pressed for the 4th floor. We indeed have the rooms on the same floor n I had panicked when he pressed that button. But I quickly composed myself n thought of misleading him. Couple of stairs won't kill me.

"Too bad. But I told u I usually like it at the top" He winked and I huffed with disgust.

"Come on don't be such a spoiled sport. After today's incident, u have to agree that we make a good team."

"What's ur problem?" I turned to talk to him n get this over with once n for all. "Why r u annoying me for no reason? U should be thanking me instead, for getting myself in that mess for u" I barked back. I was very tired n was in no mood to entertain his nonsense.

"I will" he smiled "Let me show u how thankful I am for ur favor." He leaned closer to me n I smacked his arm. "Kidding. Kidding" he laughed. "U r so fiesty n snappy. I like that". He remarked.

"N I don't like any of u" I retorted n got out of there as the doors opened. He said something in reply but I was already way far from him to catch it clearly. I handled 2 drunk people today n I can't imagine what the rest of my bday has in store for me. It is definitely going to be a long day!

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Another update. Ok so I won't be showing up before next week. Till then read, enjoy, review n stay happy.

Happy weekend

Edited by prishathebest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
Awesome update
loved it
their second meet also not an pleasant one,
Rk is honest and straight forwarded guy,
both staying in the same floor,what did he said when she walked out,
continue soon
thanks for the update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Awesome update dear..
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Awesome updates.
Loved them.
Rishbala meetings are not striking a right chord at present for them but I am sure everything is going to be fine soon.
Waiting to know what surprise Madhu's birthday is going to bring.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Awesome updates Prisha loved both the updates.. I loved how Madhu said that she can never reciprocate Rishi's feelings because she loves Rk I know it though she won't admit it wow!! Rishbala met again & my guess was right Rk acted that day as if he didn't remember her but then why did he do so? & I feel something bothering Rk by the way you described Rk's attire now tired puffy eyes & with grown beard does he also has feelings for Madhu? I feel so though I don't like Rk roaming around with some bi**hes like Madhu saw in the lift I like his honesty he was always honest about what he wanted but yaar I not at all like him doing like this he is Madhu's lol I not at all like woman near Rk except Madhu you know possessiveness for my babies 😉 Loved Rishbala's bantering in lift Rk is still naughty around Madhu ahem ahem they are staying in same floor ooohhh I'm imagining something something 😉 but I don't know what is gonna happen since Madhu is so stubborn but still she loves Rk so the situation is unpredictable anything can happen 😆 Would love to see more Rishbala moments.. Waiting for the next part.. It's gonna be tough to wait for 1 week I know I'm greedy but I love this story so much so plz update soon..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Awesome updates Prisha loved both the updates.. I loved how Madhu said that she can never reciprocate Rishi's feelings because she loves Rk I know it though she won't admit it wow!! Rishbala met again & my guess was right Rk acted that day as if he didn't remember her but then why did he do so? & I feel something bothering Rk by the way you described Rk's attire now tired puffy eyes & with grown beard does he also has feelings for Madhu? I feel so though I don't like Rk roaming around with some bi**hes like Madhu saw in the lift I like his honesty he was always honest about what he wanted but yaar I not at all like him doing like this he is Madhu's lol I not at all like woman near Rk except Madhu you know possessiveness for my babies 😉 Loved Rishbala's bantering in lift Rk is still naughty around Madhu ahem ahem they are staying in same floor ooohhh I'm imagining something something 😉 but I don't know what is gonna happen since Madhu is so stubborn but still she loves Rk so the situation is unpredictable anything can happen 😆 Would love to see more Rishbala moments.. Waiting for the next part.. It's gonna be tough to wait for 1 week I know I'm greedy but I love this story so much so plz update soon..

I love you😆. Ur comment has left me with the widest smile n believe me, I can't wait to get more such reviews from u. I'm tempted to update further asap. So happy that u r liking all these scenes n my version of Rishbala. Won't stall u fr long n I promise to show up with the next update in coming 2 days. Tysm❤️
Edited by prishathebest - 6 years ago

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