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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome
Continue soon
Please post other stories too
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mind-blowing update...
Sooo I think after dapinita story...
Out RK nd That Raichand I think it's gonna Abhay r Brothers...
Nd may be twin...
Madhu is in new born vampire situation...
I think it's gonna be Raichand entry in next part...
Looking forward to know...
Continue soon...
Can't wait for next part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear..👏
Loved it,
Eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon...
Thanks for the pm...:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow my dear princess what a update... so there is lit of things waiting in this story... Now coming to my confusions...
What the witch mean by may be that too looking at my rk

So my rk is a hybrid and he is hiding it from all????? How come trishna also dont know this

So rk is both a werewolf and a vampire????? Hmm so does he have 2 mates????? If so who is the other one..

So is abhay Rk's brother and look a like ??? O god two hotties in one ff... i would love it😳.. so raichands and kundras are enemies waiting to know more... rk got angry as he heard abhays name or he is afraid that the vampire will take madhu away or its something else.😡😡


Other doubt, is madhu a hybrid??? First into vampire then into werewolf... and her two mates are Rk and abhay... rk know this and so he is angry...😡


If rk is a hybrid then there is high change of abhay also being hybrid?


Or rk and abhay are son's of a hybrid couple so as rk is just werewolf and abhay is just vampire???... so many confusions...😕😕😕


Ohh ashton you are always same such a trouble is running and you felt madhus voice like velvet👏 good job ashton. Romantic romeo.

After hearing about raichands ashton is so angry that he even forgot to give madhu a slow cycle wala ride...


After coming from run he went to madhu. When she asked for ashton he just hugged her tight throwing away Rk's warning😳 good going my love.. you even revealed Rk also like this romatic moments... 😆then he made her smile and happy when asked for rk he said to make her insist to make her more happy and touched her😲😲..
Naughty ashton.. madhu questions rk about he enjoying it and he blushed😳 if am there i would have kissed him hard. ... blushing Rk is always a treat for eyes😉


Madhu is vomiting blood🥱 now what he will do ?? Call raichands for help...

What happen to madhus family and that abhay who kidnapped her???

Continue soon waiting for the episode



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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb update dear...Twist after twist in ur every update😕 but i liked to read thriller stories...
I guess rk is a hybrid and if rk is a hybrid then he will have two mates😭 No...that shouldn't be happened...
Madhu is transforming into vampire...I loved rishbala and ashton scenes...Waiting for ur next update dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Continue soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
gr8 parts
cont.soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
waiting for the update
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi guys
Thanks for all your support and love
I am really sorry,I thought I posted the update here and when I read harinis message I realized my mistake



So here is the update..enjoy...



Part 14




Rks POV

I scooped her fragile body in my arms.she was devastated by all the blood loss and the Transition state is really hurtful.she gripped her hand on my shirt and throw up all over me again.her eyes found Mine and I could see the apologetic look in her now red eyes which is flashing back and forth into red and brown.i dashed into the dungeon and climbed down the steps as fast as I can while my mate was screaming and squirming in my arms out of pain.
"Rk...I am gonna ...die ..p...please...help ...me " she stammered and screamed again.i saw her fangs coming out of her gums piercing the flesh.she screamed again and the blood flow out of her mouth.I heard my beta and gamma following me frantically.
"call the pack doctor " I yelled to my beta before placing her on the matress ,the place were we keep the newly transitioned wolves.
She wiggled on the bed like a moth in fire and I knew she is feeling the burning in her whole body.doon I heard the footsteps and from the scent I knew that it was the pack doctor.he hurried to madhu and started to check her pulse .then he looked at me worriedly.
"Alpha...its getting weak and her heart is gonna stop soon...we have to get her bitten exactly at the point he heart stops " he said to me.
"How much time we have " Trish asked feverishly
"Twenty minutes " doctor said with worry laced in his voice. Madhus scream brought back our attention to her .she vomited again and the blood covered the floor and the mattress.i had seen enough Gore to be familarise with the horror,but,when it comes to my mate I frltmy stomach flipping and I am nauseating.
"Bhai...what we will do ? " Trish's words pulled back me .
"Do it rishab "I heard Ashton in my mind.l can't see her slip from our hand because of your uncertainty. Ashton growled at me
"Ashton...I can't...you know the danager...I haven't done it for a long time...I Don't know how to control it " I said desperately to Ashton
"No..rishab..it's not the time to think about the consequences...its the time to act.we will face it whatever the outcome is.but,I want our mate to be safe " he said
"I need time to think " I said to him
"We are out of time rishab...do it " he shouted
I pushed him back to my mind as I was not convinced about the thing he asked me to do.i heard the footsteps and the scent made me to growl.Soon Alina and Neil reached the door.
"Oh my God " Alina came near madhu and looked at her wide eyed
"Rishab " she looked at me with pity.
"I can contact him if you want ..I am sure hr won't disclose this to anyone..he is still my friend .I know ab.. Neil's words were cut by my growl
"No... I glared at him
"Afterall he is your br.. Neil's words cut when I pushed him into the wall squeezing his throat . I leaned to his face.
"Don't dare to utter a words or else I will pullout your tongue and feed it to your mom's dogs " I said.
"Alpha...its nearing " the doctor said and left Neil he fell on the floor gasping
"Alpha...I will call the raichands sahil said
"No... I growled at him
"Wehave to do something...do you want to lose your mate..the one you should be loyal to.the one made by goddess for you to love and protect the whole life...how could you do it...forget about the rivalry and leave your stubbornness " trish shouted to me with tear filled eyes.
I looked back at madhu who was screaming and squirming with pain.she was gasping for air in between.i could feel her heart beat getting slower and slower. I touched her legs and it felt ice cold.her bodu is giving up her human traits .she will become a full fledged vampire in few minutes only if she is bitten by a vampire to complete the transition.
"Rishab...do it " I heard Ashton pleading in my mind and the beast trying to take over.i sighed And looked at doctor.
"Alpha,five more minutes " he said.
I looked at my beta "arrange the blood ...we will require few pints and some clothes for her to change...don't come near her for few days.. and ... I stopped looking at all of them .they were keenly looking at me as if I gone mad .I sighed again " shackle me for five days " I said brushing my hand through my hair.
"what ?? " Trish looked at me wide eyed " we need a vampire " she tried to reminds me as if I had forget it.
"Do as I said and get out for now...secure the door and wait for ten minutes...and shackle me " I said
"Okay " they all nodded and exited bewildered.
I turn back to her and seated beside her . I counted her heart beat and it was getting feeble by eachsecond.i closed my eyes and searched inside me for the power .I felt the stirring and the pain in my gums.soon the fangs came out piercing the guns and I felt the shit of power in me...the vampire power I was sure that my eyes are red and the black veins on my face are prominent. A feral sound escaped my mouth.i looked at my mate and I leaned to her now limped body.i traced Mt hands on her neck.i felt the feeble pulse .it faltered and ended within seconds.i bot her on the neck at the same time and waited for the venom to ger into her system.oncr I felt it bind her system I took out my fangs and lick sealed the wound.she will take some time to wake up.i looked at her limp body and then my eyes trailed to her chest. Her dress was clinging to her body like another skin And her ni**les were visible through it.i licked my lips and leaned to it.i ripped the dress making her mounts visible to me.i started sucking it .
I can't control my vampire side because I am not used to it. The vampire power suppress my conscience and act irrationally when ever I allow it to take over and here I am sucking and licking my unconscious mate .I tried to control it but I failed miserably.
I heard Trish gasping and looking me awe struck.
"Bhai.. she called me.i went to the cell door and hissed at her.


Trish's POV

I looked at my brother awe struck..I never saw SU a feral side of him..he was doing something intimate to madhu and when I called him he went to the cell door in a flash and hissed at me.i saw his fangs and red eyes .I now realized the story of dipanita was not some fiction but reality.hr tried to hold the cell door and wanted to reach me. But the door was strong enough to resist a supernatural.he snarled at me again.
"Sahil...blood " I said
Sahil passed me a blood bag and I placed it near the cell door and moved back.i saw him sniff and looked at the blood bag.he licked his fangs and picked up the back.ripped it open and gulped it in a minute.he looked at me again and I passed another bag.he drank it greedily.i felt disgusted with his actions but after all he is my brother who loves me so much.his eyes changed back into black for a few seconds and he yelled at me in straining voice
"Trish...cbain me please "
Next second his eyes turned.back to red and he hissed at me
He turned back to madhu and started to caress her bossom.
"Sahil we need a silver chain " I said
"But...trish "sahil said
"We need to do it.. don't you see he can't control his vampire " I said .sahil nodded worriedly and left to come back with the silver chains .sahil ,jay,one of a warrior and Neil slowly opened the cell door not to attract his attention.they moved to the four sides of him and he realized it .he jumped to the warrior to attack him but they caught him with those silver chains .he cried out abd smell of burning flesh peirced my nostrils.he tried to pry out of.it but hissed in pain whenever he touched it.soon sahil bind his hands with the silver chains and they dragged him to the nearest cell. They chained him to the wall .he hissed at them showing his fangs.
"Sorry...alpha " sahil said
"I need my mate...I want to mark and mate her...she is mine..I need her " he snaled at us.
"no Bhai...you are not in your right mind " I said
"Leave...brong my mate " he shouted.
I couldn't bear it anymore and I ran back to my room.jay followed me and held my wrist.i turned to him and hugged him placing my head on his chest .I sobbed and he gently caressed my back
"Bhai...he is a hybrid " I hicupped.
"Yes.,...we didn't Know " jay said "not even you...gehide it from everyone " he said
"I can't see him like this...a feral beast " I said
"He might not be used with this side of him.he suppressed it for a long time that's y it'd so wild.he knew it that's y he asked us to chain him...he can control it with in few days " he said consoling me.i parted from him and looked at him.
"When will madhu wake up ? I asked
"Soon...she might need blood ..we go there and wait for her to wake up " he said
I nodded and we went to the cell to face another horror.

Madhus POV
I felt I fell into an Oblivion of darkness , floating in the darkness.i saw a crack of light through the darkness my body float to the light to grab it .then I heard some distant whispers .I tried to concentrate on it but my attention slip from it back to the light. Then the muffled voice got cWhy she is not waking up ,doc ? someone asked a girlish voice
"her heart is beating slowly ..she is alive right? " I heard a manly voice
I tried to open my eyes with strain but I failed miserably.
"I think she is waking up. ...what if she asked for rk ? " and that was the cue for me to remind everything and my eyes flung open.i sat up in the bed in a jerk.
"where...is ..he..? " I asked .my throat felt like a sand paper .I felt it is burning and I wanted something to drink and then a mouthwatering scent hit me .my fangs pierced out of my gums and I could hear the beat of the hearts.the flow of something delicious make me lung at the nearest person .I tried to bite on their neck ,on instinct.i don't Know how I knew about it but,I was sure that the thing was enough to quench my thirst.someone rip me away from my food and I hissed at them
"calm down madhu they said and tossed a pack of liquid to me .I caught it in the air and ripped it open , gulping Down in a second.i wiped my mouth and looked for more .soon they provide me few more pints of the velvety liquid.i gulped it all down in a minute.i snarled for more.Soon everyone left me closing the cell door.
"Givd it " I screamed at them
"That's enough for now madhu ... sahil said
"sahil...i am thirsty " I pl6eaded
"Sorry Luna...you should try to control your hunger . he said and disappeared .I walked back and forth in the cell and then mates scent hit my nostrils.
"Rk... I yelled and heard his growl from the nearest cell.i tried to break through but the cell door didn't budge .it was probably made for supernatural.
"Madhu...I want you..I need to mate with you ..madhu... rk cried out.
"Rk... I gasped at his words.he had never talked like this..even ashton was not this much open .what happened to him and what he was saying.
"What happened to you rk ? I asked him
"I need to mate and mark you madhu..you are mine ...I want you.. he said
"Rk...I called him worriedly
I heard sahil tossing something in to his cell .he became silent for few seconds
"rk...what are you doing ? " I asked
"I am having blood,babe "he said
"What??...you ?? " I asked
"Yeah...i am a hybrid ...three in one " he said
"Hybrid ?? " I asked
"Yes " he growled " I am gonna break this cell and make you mine "he said but soon his sound turned into whispers and eventually faded away.
"Rk... I called out .
The doctor came to my cell " sorry Luna...he is a little aggressive we have to sedate him " he said
" let him out " I said
"No...he is not in control now and he might regret his actions once he came back to his conscious he said
I nodded at him
"I am so happy that you are adjusting to your new situation . You were supposed to be in a crazy state for blood " he said
The word itself had my mouth watered but I controlled myself .



It's the fourth day since I Changed and rk was still not in control.i shifted from the dungeon to my room.i sometimes felt the intense thirst but I controlled it .I tried to take humanly food to control my appetite.eventhough it doesn't felt appealing like blood,it was somewhat satiable.
I went to the bathroom to get freshen up .I heard a sound from my room and thought it might be the servant bringing me food.i took my time and dressed in a salwar .I came out wiping my wet hair. I was stunned and my hands stop the movement .
Rk was sitting on my bed and looking at me with his red eyes .I could see his fangs from his slightly opened mouth.he sniffed and in a flash he reached me embracing me to his body.he sniffed on my neck and licked there.i felt the tingles from the spot to my core and a moan escaped from my mouth.
"Rk.. I pushed him back and cupped his face.
He took my hand from his face and kissed on it .he started kissing each finger tips and then he proceeded up to my face and kissed my cheek and face.he left my hand and pressed me closer by holding on my waist .his kisses went close to my mouth and pressed his lips on the angle of my mouth.his lips moved to my lips and pecked on it.his hands traced up and caressed the valley of my bossom .I felt goosebumps on my whole body.he then grabbed one of my bossom squeezing it.that was the cue for me to jerk away from him , shoving him away from him.
He tilted his neck and looked at me bewildered .
"mate...what happened...I want to mate " he said " want to mark you mine "
"Rk..you can but,now you are not yourself ...so please go... I said
"No... he snarled
" rk..please " I pleaded
His red eyes turned deeper with anger dripping his face. In a flash he pulled me along with him and I found myself on bed squirming under him .he pressed his weight on me so that I can't escape from him.i try to scream for help but he closed my mouth with his mouth ,roughly kissing me.i felt my lip bleeding and he sucked the blood from it groaning
He parted from my lip and peppered kisses over my jaws to my neck
"Rk.. please " I pleaded again
He looked into my eyes " give in madhu...let me take you "
"No .. I said
"Submit to me...I am the one in control...submit " he said
"No... I said trying to escape from his hold.
He snarled angrily and ripped my suit exposing my bra covered bossom.i try to pryhis hand but he held my hands in his right hand and ripped my bra exposing my bossom .he dipped his mouth and bit on my left bre*st.he assaulted it violently.i felt my resolve breaking and some power inside me awakened.i pushed him away from me forcefully.he fell from the bed off guard .I stood up in a flash at looked at him angrily.he stood up staring at me .I saw his eyes flashing from red to black. He tried to touch me .I moved back and slapped him .he flew backward hitting on the wall making a crack .he fell down and stood up from there.his eyes changed back to black .he looked at my disheveled from and my exposed body .I covered it using a bed sheet
"Madhu...i...I...sorry.. he said
"Rk...y did you...you were a beast ,a true monster " I spotted
"I...I ..can't control...i..goddess ... he brushed his hair frustrated
I heard few foot steps running towards us
"Madhu...rk came here " sahil rushed to the room along with trishna and then they saw him and me . They realized the situation and looked at rk , standing there in guilt
"Bhai...Trish called and try to reach him . In a flash he left the room .
"Rk... I called him but he didn't stop.
Trishna came near me.
"I am sorry madhu...I felt he became normal when I talked with him this morning ...but I don't Know how his vampire side took over again...I released him and didn't anticipated him to act irrationally she apologized
"Its okay...you didn't Know " I said her
"Please forgive him too " she pleaded
I didn't respond because it made a wound In my heart and I was not sure how I will forgive him.



Thank you

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update dear...Rk is a hybrid and he helped madhu to change into a vampire...Rk couldn't control his vampire and he badly wanted to mark his mate madhu...
When will rk change into his werewolf...I hope madhu will understand rk's situation...Now all of them knows that rk is a hybrid...What will happen to him?
Please update soon dear...

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