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Hey dearies M again present with new Ts on rishbala.





Rk, Madhu and Sultan are studying in the same class. Sultan is Madhu's boyfriend.Rk is a very innocent boy. He doesn't mix up easily with any of his classmates. But what can a teenager do about his heart? So like any other boy of his class, Rk too have a secret crush on Madhubala Malik. But he can't express his feelings because he is suffering from Peter pan syndrome in which a man's mind does not develop with his age. He is a man-child. But Rk is exceptional case because he is a topper of his class. Rk remains silent always. He speaks less. He has one habit of staring Madhu in his lonely time and seeing Madhu, he blushes profusely.


But he can't express his feelings. Reason, he is afraid... afraid of being caught in his staring session. Rk has a fear that if Madhu comes to know about this, she will beat him. But is Dil ka kya kare...ye Dil hi to hai. All he has that damn secret crush on Madhu since class 6th. Now they are in 12th class means their school days gonna end soon..and his staring session too..


3 Years ago, on Independence Day Rk was singing a deshbhakti song..and guess what...Madhu liked it so much since he heard her saying to her one of friend k she likes rk's voice. So Rk was happy. On the next day, he brought Natkhat and Gems packets for Madhu as he had seen Madhu eating them from time to time.But what he saw, it broke his heart because their school's Don/bad boy Sultan announced that Madhu is his girlfriend. Hearing this, when Rk saw towards Madhu, he found a blushing Madhu...



That day Rk had cried a lot...but he could not stop his eyes to stare at Madhu.


Now they R in 12th class. Madhu's boyfriend Sultan is fida over Madhu's blue eyes. Yups.. Madhu's eyes are blue.


One day, sulatan was singing Blue eyes by Yo yo honey Singh to Madhu. Rk who is a man-child, was going to canteen, had stopped hearing Blue eyes song since he had never listened this song before. Hell he even didn't know that these lines are a song.




Sultan to Madhu,


"Blue eyes hypnotize Teri, kardi ai mennu".

Rk who was hidden, hearing these lines, thought that Madhu's eyes are very dangerous. If he sees in her eyes, she will hypnotize him.




Next line of the song,

Sultan to Madhu,

"I swear choti dress mein bomb lagdi mennu."


Hearing this line, Rk got more afraid. He thought,"Madhu's school uniform is a miniskirt with a tight shirt, so she has turned into bomb after wearing school uniform."



Next line if the song,

Sultan to Madhu,

"Glossy lips, uff yeh tricks.
Baby lagdi hai killer."


Hidden Rk who likes Madhu's lips a lot. He thinks Madhu's lips are beautiful and he too stares them chup chup ke. So hearing this line, he got more and more afraid. He thought that Sultan is Madhu's Boyfriend so he knows about Madhu more..and due to her shining glossy lips, Madhu has become a killer. Thinking this, Rk began to sweat profusely.



Next line of the song,

Sultan to Madhu,

" Oh yeah..oh yeah..
Katal(kill) kare tera bomb figure."


As soon as hidden Rk heard these line, he said to himself," Madhu's mini dresses are not killer but Madhu herself is a killer due to her 0 size figure and Madhu is a big danger...Oh My God!!". All these thoughts were making Rk shiver. And the next thing was, he was on the floor. Yes he had become unconscious and fall down on the floor.


Hearing rk's falling sound, Madhu rushed to help him.


When school time was over, the news spread all around was...


"Sulatan and Madhu had a break up today."


Lol I was singing Blue eyes and this idea popped up in my mind. 😆
So tell me how it is.
Plz hit like and do comments.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Index.

Part 2


Part 3
Edited by pirl18 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note- I Googled about Peter pan syndrome as I don't know anything about this syndrome.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing... Okay so the last line was as f you read my mind... and yes I too was listing to the same song😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fab one pirl
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start pirl..
I was going to blast at for making sullu ullu as Madhu's bf but you made them break up last.. So I spared you 😆

Oh my Rk boy.. He is so cute.. My Peter pan ..
Have you watched Peter Pan movie pirl? It's one of my favorite..

My poor Rk got scared hearing sillu's song..
Sullu & Madhu's break up on this part..
Rk-Madhu's patch up on next part ❤️

Update soon dear..
Waiting for the next part..
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayushi23

amazing... Okay so the last line was as f you read my mind... and yes I too was listing to the same song😆



Thanks for reading:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou



Fab one pirl
Waiting for next update



Glad u liked liah:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Awesome start pirl..

I was going to blast at for making sullu ullu as Madhu's bf but you made them break up last.. So I spared you 😆

Oh my Rk boy.. He is so cute.. My Peter pan ..
Have you watched Peter Pan movie pirl? It's one of my favorite..

My poor Rk got scared hearing sillu's song..
Sullu & Madhu's break up on this part..
Rk-Madhu's patch up on next part ❤️

Update soon dear..
Waiting for the next part..
Thanks for the pm..



Thanks aishu.
I hv not watched this movie..is it related to a man-child?

Next part I hv not write till now. 😕
But will write soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow pirl it's awesome!!👏
Rk suffering from peter pan syndrome... Nice concept
Madhu have blue eyes.. Awww just like ma Abhay😳
God the way u explained the song...it was halirous🤣
Yipppeee...Madhu sultan broke up
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What???..stop reading this comment and update soon😡
cause m waiting impatiently

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