Malik Rishbala version Deleted - Page 26

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Sorry for late comment.

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I read four parts together n i m speechless with the concept of this story.

Thank you my dear I'm very glad you like it

In start i thought why did not she protest for a single minute. But as soon as the layers of her story start to unfold it gave me goosebumps in whole body n tears in my eyes.

I'm so sorry dear for that

U already told this one is dark story but darkness could be this worst feeling i did not thought of it. I m not criticizing u or the concept but somewhere it is so hard to believe that we are living in human world which is turning cruel day by day living behind the humanity for any relation.
i'm sorry for that dear but this story's events mostly is taken from real stories so it is reality the cruel world we live in

I doubt balraj n preeto to be real parents of madhu coz they did not a single thread of affection which naturally comes to parents.

Sorry to say that there are many blood parents killed their own kids and tortured their own kids

Coz of their constant torture she was unable to say a word to her kidnappers coz her own so called has stolen her fighting spirit.

Yes I know one who was molested and abused sexualy from young age she was 4 years and she didn't fight for anything at all he was so weak she didn't fight at all

She auctioned on the highest rate. Another worst face of our society which set amount tags on living humans. But she dont have any hope from anyone n dont want anything.

Yes this is right

Only one thing in this story which made me curious how is that possible that malik got same nightmare which belonged to madhu.

Going to read more. I cant control.

You will know everything about Malik after finishing somya's story in shaa ALLAH

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Malik condition is astonishing me now more than the condition of madhu.

Yes he is getting worse and worse

How this could be possible that madhu is sleeping peacefully n malik got her nightmare.

He has nightmares but is it hers?

Is he doing some black magic on madhu to connect with her mind. My assumptions. Happy that madhu got a mother in new peaceful environment.

Coz her past has stolen so much from her.

Yes Padmini is the only mother she know

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Not only me padmini aunty too noticed madhu effect on malik. Strange he is loosing weight n sleep coz of sad past of madhu. I am very curious about this equation of madhu n malik.how this could be possible.

It is the essence of the story

Even he scold her to wear short dress even after buying her as a sex slave.

She is not sex slave for him anymore she is more than that

Padmini ji was so worried about his health n well being that even after getting insulted by him n almost chocked to death she do care for him.

She consider him as her son

Balraj killed his own son. Yes he is one who is killer coz he forced him to choose this path. Balraj ashamed every relation.

He is the worst creature

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After long a light n relieving update.

So after facing worst time ever madhu felt the essence of love too n this thing made malik angry n he discontinued the discussion. Something is cooking in his brain.

Or maybe his heart

Madhu sold by her parents n even after clearly getting warning she came back to them. This is called stupidity.

She doesn't know where to go or who to ask for help. she never went out her house till the day she was sold she knows no one in this world except her family

Its her good luck that her parents left the palace otherwise something more bad could happen. Could not truth inhumane brain of balraj.

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for part 8. Nice update.

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Poor padmini coz of her motherly instinct she was forced to take this step to separate madhu from malik. It shows how she do care for rk. She not only saying him son but she meant it too.

She cares for him the most she consider him as her son

Madhu start to believe padmini n follow her instructions. In all this what happened behind her she is unaware of it.

She is so kind and trusting people fast even after all what happened to her

In this update the caring n possessive side of rk came out. He is becoming mad behind madhu. He even start to weep in fear to lost her. Amazing. Really what is happening to him. He is really mysterious character.

Yes he is

I forgot to mention every time i have to spend five extra minutes on the banner coz the pics of rk in this banner is so catchy n attractive. Ultimately beautiful.

Thank you but I didn't design it I just added the story's title nothing more and I don't know the owner

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for part 9. Nice update.

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How soon events take turn that we are unable to understand whats going on. Sometime ago padmini aunty was pretending to leave palace coz malik dont want her there n all this turned out to be upto the limit with one fact that now he dont trust her.

After what she did to Somya and him he can't trust her around Somya anymore

She is relieved for madhu security but very much worried for malik condition.

Malik has no one but Somya has Malik to take care of her

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part 10. Sad update.

Sorry for that dear

It looks like destiny write fate of madhu with black ink.

Yes

As if earlier tortures were not enough she got one more betrayal from her so called love. Mukund is right here as we grow up our sons with the mentality that how many sexual relation they may made but they will get virgin wife. So he was expecting madhu to be same n his ego is hurt with the thought that someone had done with her before him. So she is like a use n throw thing for him now. With the revelation of her hard past its not impossible thing for him to think madhu as a profittable deal n all these things are done by the man who himself has two younger sisters. What a double standard we all are as a society.

Many men are like him. they do whatever they want but they want virgin wives it is double standard but there are many like this