RISHBALA FF: Wrong number, part 15 updated on feb - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

yes dear.. like ending it in summary form.. or cutting it short.. i am going to do the same with sinful nights.. as i have lost interest in writing.. but dont wanna leave it unfinished..

but for u my friend... u have so far written 3 chappy.. way to go my dear.. dont give up so soon !




what? u are going to end sinfulnights... no no dear please... its such a super concept.. please.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Awesome update
Rk and Trishnas chatting was nice
But he is keeping some distance from her
And I am surprised to read rk loves Madhu
And that's a good news
Thier taunting and mocking around was.cute
Waiting for next
Please update asap
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Nice one.
Last part was fun.
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Varsha15778383

Nice update

So madhu is rk's princess and he love her
Trishna and RK conversation was good and lovely
Dd? Actually it was a perfect name for rk (darling dampak and daring devil).
Waiting for their meeting through phone
Thanks for pm



THANKYOU dear, darling dampak is starting of a tamil song..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--



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part-3

amazing chappy..
starting with Trishna getting call from her brother.. rk..
they have difference between them.. but their heart is bonded..
she is being away from home cause of some safety reason which rk knows !
rk too miss his sis & he loves his sis very much..
aww...so sweet..

and then a new revelation !
rk likes madhu too.
.calling her his sweetheart..
her sweet voice makes him happy..

so beautiful..
loved it..
thanks for pm !

and the missed call may be is from madhu in precap !
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THANKYOU dear, yes Rk likes madhu..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: linlin1911

Hi ..

Wonderful update..
Loved the full of DD part ... So to liked madhu, what about madhu?
What happened in Australia yaar? Break the suspense plz .
And plz connect the number also .. From part one you are trying to connect in precap but it failed .. So at least in next chapter plz connect the call ...
Don't forget the Australia flashback...
He he he ...
Thanks for the update n pm..
Waiting for next update



THANKYOU dear, keep reading
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
PART 4:

DELHI UNIVERSITY HOSTEL:
Next day morning Madhu and friends go to college they have only two class scheduled its Friday. The class was going cool with usual masti of the gang. Madhu was busy in taking notes when she saw poen coming with register in hand.. she immediately asked ria and trishna
M: do we have any national holidays apporching
T: always expecting holidays but no holiday in nearby, why u ask
M: pointing towards peon, i guess some holiday with a smile
Seeing the peon all three gets excited thinking about holidays... and madhu gave hi5 to both and planning what to do on holiday... but all her excitement vanished when the prof. Readout the content.."YOUR SEMESTER TIMETABLE IS ON NOTICE BOARD TAKE A NOTE OF IT AND ALSO SCHEDULE ON FINAL GROUP PROJECT NAMES WILL BE DECIDED BY PROF. 5MEMBERS IN EACH GROUP," the teacher finished reading it out all three are looking at prof. As she is speaking in french..
R: yaar just now semester got over na? Y it has to come this soon.
T: its not just now its 4months before we finished our semester
The class gets over all come out but madhu is fuming in anger as dipali tasha names came with them as a group for project. On top of that madhu is head of the group all responsibility falls on her head... she knows both chudail will not cooperate in the project.. Trishna and Ria goes to collect timetable for exams... the exam is scheduled after 3weeks..

After the class all 3 reach hostel... after a short nap.. all sit together to plan for exam and project.. T: we dont have much time our exams are near so we have to pack our masti and be serious in studies
R: we have to start studying but can we start on Monday and enjoy this weekend
M: yes this weekend we will enjoy we start studying from Monday... on top of it the project for final semester also we have to start.
T: yeah madz, its going to be hectic, so what plan for tomorrow
R: trish u said you are going to meet maa tomorrow
T: yes ria but now i dont know how to meet her.
M: Even i have to meet bhai before exams later i wont get time madhu calls mukund but get to know he is going to luckow today night so plan to meet him gets cancelled. NO DEAR BHAI IS LEAVING TO LUCKNOW dada called him it seems
All become upset as no plan is working out... atlast madhu looks at annie with a idea
M: trish its long time me and ria meet maa why can't we go their tomorrow spend weekend with maa and comeback on Sunday evening all three gets happy trish called radha to inform about their plan radha also is happy to meet them.

In the evening trish gets a call from someone so she goes away to speak but both devil seez this .. they already seeing trishs excitement from past fewdays whenever she gets a call something about this call... so madz and ria plans to hear what it is about so they hide behind pillar and listen to her conversation..

T: hi, how are you, why dint you call me yesterday i was waiting for your call
Man: hi darling, am 5n how are you and your friends... i was little busy in work yesterday.
T: That two devils are getting doubt on my behaviour, why cant i tell them
Man: you very well know what is the issue... we will tell everyone when right time comes.
T: when you are returning to delhi, am going to miss you
Man: i will return by Monday morning. I will also miss u, i cant call u this weekend so dont get worried... whats your plan for weekend.
T: we are going to meet dadi and will return by Sunday evening.
Man: ok dear, i have to go bye love you and take care
T: LOVE YOU TOO, TAKECARE BYE..

M and R: love you
Trish turns back surprised to hear both the devils. she looked at them shocked madhu and ria gave a glare and turns back to go..

Trish after few minutes enters the room to see both mummers to eachother.On seeing Trish ria stands up from bed pulls a chair in front of bed...
Trish know's what that meant call for enquiry commission she sit on the chair with her face looking the floor
M: who is that you are speaking to? How you know him, From when this is going on
R: love do you love him? Why did you hide it from us?
T: madz ria, woh that is ... after taking a deep breath she continued YES AM IN LOVE, I KNOW HIM FOR PAST FEW YEARS HE PROPOSED ME 5 MONTHS BACK AND I ACCEPTED... BUT I CANT SAY WHO HE IS NOW she finished and looked at each other... the enquiry commission was going on for past 30min trish answered everything but dint reveal who he is..
M: ok we accept and respect your decision but no more outing without informing us

Trish knows its madhus concern and care on her so she hugs her and cried with happiness atleast she got someone to support her love.. trish went to washroom to wash her face when she closed the door. Both devils took her phone and click the call log and took the last number in hurry before she comes out.. after having dinner both madhu and ria went out saying some reason and trish to pack her bags to leave for her house tomorrow...
R: so madz whats the planwe have to know whether he is correct for our trish or not, i have a plan follow me

KUNDRA STUDIO(6.30pm):
RK'S day went as usual nothing different but today he had a busy schedule SHOOTING, and he also gone for story discussion on that Mehra new film near university and just now returned to his cabin. His day was totally hectic... but today fully unknowingly he carried a small smile on his face...

Once he enters his cabin he connects his phone with earplugs and plays yesterday's recording relaxing himself..

Bittuji knocks on his cabin to discuss about some new projects but even after few minutes he dint get any response so he enters the cabin worried for Rk but what he saw is a shock for him.. Rk relaxing on chair with earplugs and a huge smile on his face bittuji knows what it is he silently goes near him and pulls the plugs out.
B: Again lost in your dewane world my dear friend that you cant even hear someone knocking the door. Rk smiles embarrassed being caught. so what next now you are in delhi did you plan to meet her Suddenly Rk gets upset thinking of uncertainty of mission.
Bittuji: dont worry chief, our mens are on mission we will get to know soon
Rk: Am not worried about it right now. bittuji was shocked will be an under statement he even thought for a minute his hearing capacity is lostBut what and how she will react when she gets to know about me? I really like her a lot am seeing her for past 2 and half years.
B: why don't you say about it to her, may be
Rk: Do you think she will accept me with my truth, she is a flower bud but iam?
Bi: chief nothing will happen to us, i dont know whether she will accept or not but you can hide it from her until we find solution for our problem and mission is completed
Rk: bittuji... do you want me to lie to her cheat her, what if the mission is a failure? I cant break her trust i can never
B: can you live without her chief Rk jerks up from his chair pushing it a little back with the force rk's eyes starts to fill up
Rk: No i cant, i can never even dream a life without her. But i cant snatch her smile and happiness from her... we are counting our days bittuji dont forget it, the mission is a do or die matter for us
B: ok let us leave it to destiny, Rk looks at him confused if you both are meant to be she will herself come to you... if in anyways she comes to you promise me you should not avoid her
Rk looks at bittuji ok promise
After that both leaves to Kundra Outhouse... straight away Rk leaves to his gym to takeout his helplessness...

PART 5 CONTINUED BELOW...


Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 5:
Madhu and ria went to nearby Pco and enter private cabin to speak... once inside madhu explained her plan to ria.. Ria gave her full support and dialed the number she got from trish phone and the first ring goes but she cuts the call with fear... she again makes a call the phone rings for few seconds she signed madhu no one is picking..

KUNDRA OUTHOUSE(7.40pm):

RK is keep on exerciseing for past 30min, he stops and gets a towel to wipe himself when he saw his phone ringing. When he was about to pickup the call gets cut.. his already bad temper suits high, he was checking who called him its from an unknown number
He is confused who will call him from unknown number at this time? He again gets a call from same number he first thought to reject but somewhere he want to know who it is so he attend the call after few rings.

RK: Hello... no words came from other side..

Rk:HELLO HELLO IF YOU CANT SPEAK WHY DO U CALL

Madz gives a angry glare to her ria standing next to her who handover phone to madhu hearing rude angry voice

RK'S POV:

M: hello ...

i heared the melodies voice of a girl from other side that immediately suied away my temper and fracuation.. am i dreaming it to her voice, i shrugged it away and continued the call

MADHU: hi may i know who is this am speaking to?
Its totally insane someone calling him and asking who he is to RK how dare they would it must be some prank call. So he raised his voice to show who they r dealing with.

RK: its you who called first , have you forgot manners or you dont know manners of introducing yourself while you make a call.

I waiting to hear answer from otherside either to make sure its me dreaming her voice or to hear someone else voice

M: no its just i lost my manners yesterday in market.. and talking of manners you too dont know how to speak to a lady in scaristic tone

Again the same voice do voice also resemble someone else that too my SWEETHEART'S? But how dare someone speak like this to Me

RK: ohh am really sorry about that but i don't have your manners, u should find it somewhere else... and r u a lady i dint recognise.. (sacritically) and if your bhak bhak is over am cutting the call.

Each second his temper raises the way someone is answering him back... at the sametime her voice smooth it... orelse he would have lost his control and yelled..

MADHU: ok ok dont cut the call, am aliya

RK: aliya? U mean aliya bhatt, but i dint give any call appointment..

MADHU: no no am just aliya. May i know Your name?

RK: i wont say my name to just aliya without surname

MADHU: hello am a malik.
I know madhus surname is malik so i want to know who is this anyone related to her? Or someone randomly saying her surname.. 80% i know its my princess but i want to conform it. I just need a small clue.

Rk: are u sure if u want u can change i dont mind.

madhu: no why will i change, i said na am aliya malik now u say ur name mr.mannerful

RK: Am did she know who am i,

MADHU: what happened mr.. now you forgot your name(she giggles) do i need anymore clue to guess who it is... nothing more i need than her giggling to regognise its my princess.

RK:now am sure its my dewane, am in a playful mood so i thought to play with her a little.. how can i miss the chance... No miss.mannerless, i dint, its that you are so eager and curious to know my name

madhu: hello Mr.

RK: Randeep singh

madhu: what? Ohh mr.Randeep singh

RK:yes, now can i ask how you got this number or why u called

[COLOR=RED]MADHU: for today its enough am done i will call u later


RK: Later? When? will u call me tomorrow? What time? I got excited to speak to her daily

MADHU: what? Y u are sounding excited and wont you be busy i heared you are a actor

I don't want to spoil the chance to speak to her with my over excitement. I got hold of my feelings

RK: No,its just that i wont get a random call from a girl daily without knowing who i am or telling i will call tomorrow. And yes you heared right am a busyactor but not for you.

M: first of all am not a girl am a young lady.. then dont fly high, you are not Rk.. busy actor. Funny
what she meant by am not RK, maybe she really dont know who she is speaking to...
ok ok now am leaving

RK: atleast you can wish me goodnight na

M: hmm gudnight and bye MR.MANNERFUL

RK: gudnight miss.malik,

They cut the call and left to hostel.

precap: madhu in kundra Mansion,

Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Awesome updates,
what's the mission they are talking about,Rk can't able to imagine his life w/o her at a time he don't want to be with her,what is stopping him,
thinking that no. is Trishna's bf Madhu called a wrong no. that no. is Rk's,
Rk recognized her voice,
Madhu in kundra mansion waiting for the update,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm


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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Nice update...
Who's trishna's bf..

Madhu called Rk thinking he is trishna's bf..
Rk found out that it is madhu..
Why he is thinking madhu won't accept him after hearing his past..

Waiting eagerly for his past..
Update soon..
Thanks for the pm dear..

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