RishBala FS: Walk With Winsomeness (Completed - 2/08 - P:16)

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Congrats!

Interesting concept on age gap.

Do continue soon and pm me.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Congrats!
Interesting concept on age gap.
Do continue soon and pm me.

Thanks dear!

Will PM for sure!

Hope the story to be interesting as the concept!

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Keepdreaming

@Keepdreaming

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+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

sweet teaser
would love to read
if possible please pm

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming
sweet teaser
would love to read
if possible please pm

Thank you!

Will for sure PM you when I post the 1st part!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Sneak-Peak 2

As the day before she was facing the wall while he was watching the ceiling as they were on their bed.
He cleared his throat to gain her attention and she stiffened realising he didn't sleep yet as she was about to turn to face him.
"We will leave to my work place on Saturday!"
"Hmmm" she hummed as she turned to face him in the dark and she can see that he is already watching her moves after adjusting to the view.
"Are you regretting marring me?" he asked her.

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- How in this world a saree can be put in the traditional cloth while it's the first in the list to turn a saint into something that he did not intend to become? -

As his hands were resting on the head rest of the sofa, he slide it a little and brought it to her back and told her that this is showing a lot, then pulled her towards him by her hip "Since I woke up this morning I wanted to do this!" as he snakes his hand over her waist pulling her towards him as she closed her eyes with the sudden feeling of his hand there.
"Now! Tell me! How is a saree no showing off?" he asked her.
"I... I..." she couldn't utter even a word as she felt his index finger circling her belly button without his knowledge.

*** Devi Maa(God)! Please help me! I think I'm getting heart-attack! ***

Feeling her heart beat like a thunder, she prayed her favourite goddess.

(Please no quotes, only replies! Sorry! Couldn't send PMs)

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Interesting sneak peak my curiocity to read the story is increasing day by day

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Maithu interesting sneak peak.

Waiting for the update, give one soon.

So Rishbala are already married and they are staying in a different city or what because of his work.

Shall be waiting to read more of it.

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Again an interesting sneak peak..

When will you update..?

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Interesting sneak peak my curiosity to read the story is increasing day by day

Thanks a lot dear!

Will try to update soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Maithu interesting sneak peak.
Waiting for the update, give one soon.
So Rishbala are already married and they are staying in a different city or what because of his work.
Shall be waiting to read more of it.

Thanks biddy!

Sure yaar!

Will try to give one soon!

The thing about the city is in the 2nd part!