RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: -Clueless-
Lovely story.

thanks deae..
glad u like it..
thanks for reading :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: NainaMehra
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I love you so much

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
awesome ending dear
loved it

thanks deae..
glad u like it..
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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

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Zarine_94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Woow.. you updated, thank you, dear.

Fantastic update.

RK did the wrong thing by sending a photo, but he could not think that everything would turn out that way, one thing is known, Rk did not use Madhu for revenge, He really loved her.

For Madhu - this is a betrayal, but each person should give a chance to speak, if they talked, everything would be different.

The parents sometimes do not see on what are pushing their children, placing their respect in society and their pride above the happiness of their own child. The parents are the support of the child, they must show them the right way, and not push them to hell. The Sultan's family is hell for Madhu, they are such terrible people. Madhu wanted to kill herself from despair, but I'm glad that she was rescued and Rk took her to her, showered her with her love and married her.. RK is a real man.

True love must always win.

Madhu belongs only to RK and RK belongs only to Madhu.

Very beautiful story dear, thanks a lot.

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RM14

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Rese😳

Unres ..

Superb b'ful story AA..touchy ..emo and story of true love .❤️

The way you written it ..⭐️

Before Rk and Madhu could do marriage or would able to tell their parents ..everything messed up and they left alone ..though Sultan marry Madhu but he and his family were not right for her..cheap people 😡and she becam e almost lifeless ..although she tried many times to get things better..

Rk was wrong to did all this but he realized it too ..

and when Madhu's life was in danger ..he was the one to care for her and he loved her truly ..❤️

atlast finally Rishbala got married😃 and they won the chess of life giving checkmate to all sorrows..and prob👏

Rishbala moments ☺️

once again big thanks and big hugs to you dear for writing this story and dedicating this to me as my b'day gift ..will always cherish this gift ..❤️

thanks for pm 😃

loved the story and you my dear Aaniya.😳

Edited by RM14 - 7 years ago

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Risingsun626

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Thanks for pm. Read both parts together n roamed with different emotions. You made me cry literally when madhu cutted her wrist. I thought this is going to be a sad story. As afterwards rk condition was not good though. But bring the twist n made its happy ending but i am still in that mode of crying. This story is very painful n can say heart touching. Coz except its happy ending everything u wrote happened in real life. Friendship, attraction, love , betrayal , forcing of parents to get married with anyone n most of it never understanding in law houses with lots of rituals. What madhu faced is story of the girl next door n not everyone got her rk in their lives.

We cant blame anyone coz everyone is living a hopeless life in name of rituals n prestige in society. We all are taught to do compromise at every step n not to think to do what our heart wished. Madhu was doing the same by following order of family n by living a secretive life. Even after getting betrayal from rk again she choosed the same path on which she has been taught to walk from childhood. But its still gives shiver what would be the mind state of madu when she slit her wrist.how much lonely she must be feeling at that moment no one can guess it. What can be a critical point when she choose to close all doors of life from her. Actually this story is so much stressed that i am unable to over come from the condition of madhu.

I want to slap rk for his stupidity coz of that only madhu faced so much.

I dont want to talk about arthav coz he mould the issue from a tiny bit to a mountain n never regret it. He lived in his own world with full freedom to do whatever he want but restict his sister to even love anyone. He is a double faced person who had differences in saying n doing. Actually whole malik clan is same when it came to madhu. I dont want to raise the question but could not stop myself from asking. When malik come to know about madhu affair he got chest pain but even after watching his daughter on dead bed he is all fit n fine. Strange isn't it.

Enough of my blabbering. Sorry to eat so much space of yours n i am sorry if i hurt anyone's emotions by my comment on the behaviour of parents. Sorry in advance.

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

So wonderful...I am crying...Res

Unres

I just read from the start again...part 1...And I LOVED everything ...your writing ...especially part-1...their love how slowly...one step at a time...how it blossomed...how innocent Madhu...aww...I LOVED reading everything ...You're awesome..

And then as I was reading...I am telling you I didn't think this at all...even when everything was going to be destroyed ...when Rk came to meet Madhu before marriage...I thought everything is going to be okay...Rk would make her understand and take her away from the hell

You just SHOCKED me...in after couple of days...She got married...

I was crying reading all...so emotional

Ohhh Madhu...the circumstances, Rk's one wrong deed or what...but it costed Madhu's life...

I HATE ATHARVA ...I hate him tooo much

Madhu's parents...okay ...they were conservative...

But Atharva...he should've understood...or tried to understand his sister...

I know Rk!!!! He was in rage seeing Rk's shown photos...

But!! He should've talked to Madhu privately ...wanted to warn her about Rk..then warned her...He is young ...he had to understand his sister that anyway that Rk is far better than that old Sultan...

And Rk!!!! Why revenge! !!! Why did he think revenge ...that too like that!!!!! Why!!

Oh Madhu...

God!! this story is so good!!!!

So emotional

But loved reading it...

Poor Madhu...I can't say she should've given Rk chance also...she had so much in plate...she couldn't think rationally...Rk had broken her trust...

And Sultan's family...They are too MUCH...xii...they just wanted servant and daughter-in-law ...no ..not even little love for Madhu...

Even seeing her about to die..first thought was not...Oh my god, hope she is fine...but first thought was let her die??? Seriously??? Tooo much...

But thank god..they atleast even just for the sake of their reputation, they took her to hospital...

And Rk...whatever he did...however his irrational behaviour made the impact...He was there for her...I know he loved her top much..even was ready to fight till the end..didn't want her to marry...

But I even more loved the fact..he stood for her...took her home from that hell...didn't let her go to her parents place...her parents are Too much...Thank god she didn't go back there

And Radha aunt...wah!!!! The girl who had got married...she knew but she supported her son to make him take her in his house...and cared for her...more than her parents...love her so much

Seeing the photos ...that much reaction!!!!! That much!!! Disgraced, failed the upbringing and what not...in.which era were they living in...

Instead they should have been happy it was the same guy they were getting her married to...their daughter would be happy...

And loved the end...😳...happily ever after for Rishbala...

And yeah...the way Madhu said ...Will you accept me and Rk's return question WILL you accept me...wow!!!! I loved it ...beautiful scene...

Loved everything...Wonderful story...👏...You are great

So emotional ...made me cry so much

Thanks for pm...

Edited by kaustavi - 7 years ago