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susan7

@susan7

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Such a fabulous story 👏 Its unique..the way you developed the story. 👍🏼 loved loved RK ❤️ The end was amazing...plz keep writing more on Rishbala

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Zoya2

@Zoya2

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Fabulous Story 👏 👏

nice to see you back Lazy

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Kuku...so happy to.see ur...pm..

Nd dat to.updt on Rishbala

It was a dark.theme..but loved it to.core..

rk was so sweet nd d one wit al the patience in world..

Sachmain ..kuku miss dat tarki Rk of ur lemonades nd also..no

Choice but seduction 🤣

Aisa Rk..ka ek story pleaae do rt again...

Okay commin to update..

Even i thought her rejection was due to may b she was raped..bt den her reason could b justified..

Awww gayu was so cute yet naughty

Alia bhatt dat thing cracked me...

I wanted more of mohan nd gayu part..

In all sweet emotional updt..

After readin dis felt like home..

Goin to read lemons...again..my favourite...

Hope to.see more of ur writing..

Nd thanks for pM..

Now a days I rarely come to IF..

Waitinh for more

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Welcome back honey🤗...I was so so so happy to your new story in my inbox

In the first paragraph, I thought, oh boy madhu is pregnant with rks baby and they are friends with benefits

Then I thought rks fiance is evil and asked madhu to go away

Then I thought Mohan and radha asked madhu to go away

Then I thought madhu is a transgender😲😲😆 but all my laughter died ,

When I read the part where madhu tell rk about her past...it was both shocking and hurting😭😭

But you made Gayathri soo cute...and last but not least, Alia Kundra?!!😆😆

I was really wishing you would write new OS...your OS are sooo good...plz write more OS bcoz that way you won't have to deal with writers block

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janu2006

@janu2006

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

awesome os

welcome back

thanks for pm

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Risingsun626

@Risingsun626

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Awesome concept. Yet it is unique n some where dark too, still it persists deep messages. It was not liv-in relationship nor proper wedding, just a bonding which start with trust, going through friendship n last with love. Madhu's mental trauma is due to guilt but rk n his family 's patience is worth to applaud big round. It is not easy to wait for someone upto a decade n bearing all questions n expectations from the society. I m sure ppl would come to rk for alliance n would raise question for his neglence. Rk's parents too tolerate so much but madhu made their wait valuable by giving best upbringing. Gayatri is a lovely child she became bridge for long lost relations n love.

I love the message behind the story. First raise your voice if anything is wrong. Second stand with your loved ones if you trust them. Awesome work.

Edited by Risingsun626 - 8 years ago

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Shreya

@Secret_Giggle

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Awesome OS

Glad to see that you are back

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Aravind Das A M

@aravindam100

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Omg Lazyyy U r baakkk🤗. Itz gud to see u Again. Hw r u??? Hop u r f9.

Sooo u came Bak with a Blasstt haaa. Superbb Storyy. I wondering till d end wat happnd to madhu. Poor soul had gone thru soo much in her life. Rk s soo understanding. But he was all alone n these yrss. Anyway a nice, very well written story wid Soo much f Love & Emotions👏.

Once again Welcom bak. Plzz do Write storiess lik dis yaarrr

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Happy to see you back and what a beautiful gift you have given for Eid.

In love with this story, read it more than 3 times from yesterday as if on loop.

RK is the bestest, he loves Madhu crazily and can never give her place to anyone else.

Poor Madhu feeling bad for her, he went through so much but she was in safe hands of Radha Kundra and Radha gave her education.

Gayatri went through hell and was tortured by her own father but finally she took a bold step and finished him off. She is working for girls and women's upliftment that's very commendable.

Baby Gayu is a sweetheart. She brought her parents closer and finally Madhu decided to marry RK.