RiShbala TS 'LoVe AboUnDs'||COMPLETED#13|| (14/04)

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V-love

@V-love

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#101

awesome just loved bits of it

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Awesome update,
first Rk misunderstood Madhu's behaviour but later he got to know why she is behaving like this,
Madhu met with an accident and lost her vision,
both sisters loves each other ,dipali is very supportive and Madhu wants dipali to be happy in her life,
with Rk around her Madhu is coming to her own form and enjoying her life,
loved holi part,
Dipali realized Rk loves Madhu and she is very happy for them,
Rk too realized he loves Madhu and he said the same in-front of every one,
loved Rk's love confession part to Madhu,
Madhu's surgery was successful now she can see,
Vihina is so cute,she is completely taken after Madhu,she is also mischievous like her mom,
lovely ending,
thanks for writing this story and also for the pm

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Amazing Ending

Dipali is nice to her sister Madhu

Madhu got back her eyesight

Madhu's daughter Vihina is a carbon copy of Madhu

Edited by .Tanmaya. - 8 years ago

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Tinku2015

@Tinku2015

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#104

😛v v nice update...thanks for the pm...

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Sweet story with beautiful ending.

Very nicely written simple story. It's nice to see dipali in positive light. But 1 complain though, just 1 madhu's replica? I was house filled with rishbala munchickens full of madhu's attitude.

However loved the part. Thank you for pm.

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Lovely update.Rk is in love with Madhu always but Deepali is so understanding here.Vihina is a replica of Madhu n she scared of this.She forgot her childhood.Sweet story with sweet Rk.

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#107

awesome update 😃

loved the love they have for each others 😃

p.s:

i also have a story request where rk have an ugly scar on his one side and adopted

and madhu is very beauty conscious and getting married to rk's handsome brother

but something happened and she married to rk... hate him don't consider him any thing

still fall for him loved him with his scar because of love find him more handsome then his brother

because beauty lays in the eyes of beholder

rk is also in love with her

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RM14

@RM14

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Rese😳

Unres

superb story and ending dear AA..👏

so emo and touchy story ..loved it and loved the progression ❤️

Rk loved her unconditionally and even after years ..he had not forget her ..instead her love make her see everything ..and she was able to take risk and now they are happy in their life..👏

Dips and Sultan good here but my emo for them 😆

Madhu got punished in a way as they think

and their daughter also doing same stuffs like mother Madhu😉

Oh Rk couldn't control 😉

and Madhu have to agree..☺️

thanks for this story Aaniya..😃

and thanks for pm dear

keep writing ..keep shinning.🤗

Edited by RM14 - 8 years ago