RISHBALA SS- My Magic Man (Last part pg 13 dt 18/4) - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Awesome update so rk is half human

Curious to know what written on iron plate

Thank you varsha😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: dharsii

Awesome update Aishu..
RK is in dilemma..
He is half human and half genie..
she won't leave him..But he tries to avoid her..
No way escape from her...
Balraj found, some clue about genie..
Maybe it will use to ,Change his life..
Thanks for pm..
Update soon.

Thank you akka..will update last part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

short but nice update !!
rk is half human & half genie..
oh no..
now what balraj found.. and he suspects its of genie..
hahaha.. rk's expression..
loved it ;)

Thank you aan😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Superb update aishu😊 Is rk marry madhu or not? Poor boy he also loved her so much...

Thank you😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: abhiya2405

Suspence update...so rk is half genie:...madhu want him to become human...what did bitu find...so much suspence...update soon ..thank for pm

Thank you 😊its balraj not bittu..will update final part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: magicalmirage

Awesome update aishu.so rk is half genie and half human.he is afraid to fall in a relationship with Madhu yet he loves her. I wish there will be some way for them to unite.please.unite them.pleass update soon.thanks for pm

Thank you chechi..will update final part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: manna43

Awesome update.Rk fell in love .He is half Ginnie n half human.Madhu want to him became all human . Balraj get something about Ginnie will this help rk.

Thank you 😊yes it will change rk's life..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Hi friends here is the last part..sorry i rushed to an end..pls read & drop your reviews friends..pls ignore mistakes😊



My Magic Man



Part-4



"sir..whats written in it..??"madhu asked..
"that i told u na i didn't understand which language is this.."balraj..
"let me try.."rk..all looks him..
"being an archaeologist even i couldn't understand this then how can u..??balraj..
"sir..that his chacha was a big archaeologist.."madhu..
"so..??"balaj..
"let us give him a chance.."madhu..
"ok...i have no problem.."balraj gave the plate to rk..he too it & looks it..
"whats in that rk.."madhu..he went near madhu & whispers.."this is about me.."rk..
"what..??"madhu..
"hah..i think guru created this.."rk..
"ok..whats in it..?"madhu..
"did u get it..??"balraj..
"hah..its about genies.."rk..
"i know it..anything else..??"balraj..
"hah..its a story about a genie who half human.."rk..
"what story..??ok then can u pls translate it.."balraj..
"hm..250 years before there born a genie against the rule of genie's world..half human & half genie..he was abandoned by his world..& he got a chance to enter their world by serving a human..but.."he stopped..
"y u stopped..?continue.."balraj..
"but if he love a human it leads to his destruction.."rk looks madhu..
"then.."rk..
"then..?"balraj..
"if he turns to a human..he can lead a normal life..but.."rk..
"pls stop creating suspense..what tell it.."balraj..
"its risky..it may leads to that genie's complete destruction.."rk..
"thats all..??"balraj..
"hm.."rk..
"v got nothing important from this..this just a story...but this is antique so v can give this to museum.."balraj..
"but i got more from this.."madhu thought..

Next morning

"trishna..trishna.."sikky knocked at the door & trishna opened the door..
"what happend sikky..?"trish..
"trishna where is madhu..?"sikky..
"she is bathing.."trish..madhu comes out from the from the washroom..
"ha madhu.."sikky..
"what happend sikky..??"madhu went to there..
"madhu...rk is missing.."sikky..
"what..no..u look everywhere..?"madhu..
"ha..he nowhere.."sikky..she looks to her hand & found the ring is missing from her fingure..
"where it gone.."madhu start searching..
"what r u looking for madhu.."trish..
"my ring.."she start to mess up the room..
"madhu r u gone mad.."trishna went near her & tried to stop her..all others also came there..
"my ring..rishab.."she starts crying..
"he leaves me..he leaves me gone far away from me.."madhu cried..
"madhu what r u saying..whats the relation b/w rishab & that ring..?"trishna..
"that..rishab..rishab is a genie.."madhu..
"what..?"everyone..she told everything to them..
"oh my god..its unbelievable..rishab is a genie..so yeastorday he said his story.."dips..
"hah..but..i love him.."madhu..
"u r really mad madhu..its tough to love a human now a days & u loved a genie.."ria..
"if i get that ring back i can see him again..but where it gone..?"madhu.
"did u kept it some where...??"dips..
"no..i didn't remove it from my finger.."madhu..
"calm down v will find it.."dips..they start searching...
"madhu.."trishna called her...madhu ran to her..
"trish u got it..??"madhu..trish opened her palm & madhu saw broken blue stone..
"this..this is from my ring..that means rk.."madhu starts crying..
"madhu.."trish hugs patted on her back..
"i lost him..he wont come back again.."madhu cries..

"no..."madhu rise from the bed in shock..she start sweating..she looks at her hand & saw the ring..she sighed in relief & caressed the ring & rk appears..she saw he is smiling at her...
"ho...rk i saw a bad dream.."madhu told but he keeps smiling at her without telling anything..
"y r u smiling like this..??"madhu..he scooped her in his arms & start walking..
"rk..what u r doing..??"madhu..
"shh.."he palmed her mouth by keeping his index figure on her lips..he went out side with her..
"where v r going.."madhu..
"wait.."rk..he took her to secluded area & dismount her..
"y v came here..?"madhu..
"so u love me..??"rk..
"for asking this u brought me here..?"madhu..
"tell.."rk..
"hah..i love u.."madhu..
"how much..?"rk..
"uff..what happend to u..?"madhu..
"tell..how much u love me..?"rk..
"how much u expect more than that..."madhu..
"so r u ready..?"rk..
"for what..??"made..
"for taking risk.."rk..
"risk..??"madhu..
"hm.."rk..
"say it clearly.."madhu..
"there is one way for me to become a human.."rk..
"what..tell.."madhu asked fervently..
"i got this from the iron plate but there r two chances first one i will turn to a complete human second one u loss me for ever..."rk..
"whats the way..?"madhu..
"broke this ring.."rk..
"what but rk.."madhu..
"i am locked by this ring if it get destroyed may i will get free or..."rk..
"rk.."madhu..
"whats ur decision..?"rk..
"i cant lose u.."madhu..
"then..?"rk..
"i am ready..but if i loss u i will end my life..."madhu..rk looks her..he came near her & cupped her face...
"y u loving me this much..?"rk asked..
"becoz u r my life.."madhu hugs him..rk made fire using his power..
"throw this ring on this.."rk said..madhu removed the ring with trembling hand & throw it on fire..
"Rk.."madhu screamed & closed her eyes..


After 1 & half years


rk hears the cry of baby from inside the labour room..soon a nurse came out from the labor room..
"congrats u have a daughter.."she gave the little baby to his hand & kissed on her forehead..

After 3 year..

"jhiya have ur food.."madhu tries to feed her little 3 year old girl jhiya..
"no..eww..i dont like this.."jhiya rejected..
"then what u want..?"madhu..
" chocolates.."jhiya..
"no.."madhu"take this.."madhu..
"no..i dont want this.."she starts making voices..
"y u r troubling my baby..?"rk came there..
"i am trying to feed her..but look she is not taking anything.."madhu..
"i dont want..ma u know na i dont like non-veg..i dont want this chicken soup...eww.."jhiya..
"just like u.."madhu glares at him..
"dont worry baby..if u dont want to take this then no need..ur ma is mad at non-veg..she may kill me if she didn't get it.."he smirked..
"omg..so mama is a cannibal.."jihya giggled..
"u moron genie.."madhu..
"what..papa is a genie..??"jihya..madhu bite her tongue & hits on her forehead remembering what she had told..he smiles & took jhiya in his arms..
"ha..papa is a genie..ma is an angel & u r our little princess.."rk told & kissed on her forehead..madhu went to them & took jhiya from his hands..
"Thank you rk.."madhu..
"for what..??"rk..
"for giving me such a beautiful life.."madhu..he smiles..
"& thank you madhu for giving me a wonderful gift like ghiya.."rk told & kissed on madhu's forehead...

The most wonderful thing in this world family..Nothing is more beautiful than a peaceful & happy family life & they are enjoying it a lot with their little princess jhiya...



***END***


Thank all my friends,silent readers all for your great support & love...thank so much..

-Aiswarya-

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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Nice update Aishu..
Finally RK got idea to become a human..
That's dream..I thought, That's real...
Madhu madly love in with him..
Rishbala Married...
Cute baby ...
Happy End...
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Awesome ending aishu.rk became a human and they got Thier gift jiya.Happy ending.thanks for the story and pm.

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