SS: SWISS TRIP - A LIFE CHANGING

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys this is my very first story .. hope you like it ...
Swiss Trip - A Life Changing Trip


"YEHHH" " Yupieee!!!!" "Woah" all the 4 girls cheered in the bus. They were excited as the school was taking them to their favourite destination ---- Switzerland and Paris----- The City of love. There were total 30 students going from standard 11th .
" Madhu, Did u bring the extra bag to keep the things we will get from there?" asked Tia. "Definitely " said Madhu. The boys who were sitting on the last row were enjoying their discussion.
" Ria you look pretty amazing " said dipali . " How does it matter when the boys are only gonna look at Madhu " said Ria. Madhu was in a conversation with Tia when she heard that her name was said in the other discussion .
A boy came up to Dipali and said " Hi dips!!!!" and to this she got her biggest shock that RK the school hero said a hi to her.. she did not reply to him in that state ...Ria quickly shook dipali to bring her out of her dream land . but to her padlock RK had already left thinking she was not interested .Madhu was just watching this silently . They all came to the airport and boarded the flight . No1 slept,all were busy watching movies,telling stories and God knows what all.
Madhu And Dipali were in one room and Ria and tia in other . The checked in the hotel . Then on madhu's phone a message popped up .. she saw it was RK .
(red are madhu's replies and blue are RK's)
"Hi !!! I actually need your help " " Okay tell?" " I have a crush on Ria, can u please help me to propose her " . Madhu thought for a moment and said " NO!!!" "Why?" " Cause my brother has a crush on her and i would not like her to date anyone other than him. " " I think though not sure even Ria has a crush on my bro"Rk thought maybe Madhu has a secret crush on me thats why she said no . " Please" . As the teacher called for breakfast Madhu did not see her phone and went down.
There RK and his friends were teasing him with Ria whereas Ria wanted boys to have a crush on her but did not want to date them basically she is a play girl .

The day went on all well with sighting of rhine falls.
2 days went on like this with madhu and Rk chatting in the night . After Two days Madhu received a message from hER BROTHER .. that why did u tell them that i have crush on her .. and a fight broke out ... Madhu quickly messaged Rk " I hate you !!! How dare you create a fight between me and my brother " and stopped replying to him . It was three days since MADHU did not even look at him in the bus nor did she reply to him . after Ignorance for three days finally RK and talked for the first time face to face " Why are u not talking to me? " Madhu did not say anything to him and sat down on her seat and totally forgot him.
On the similar day Ria and Rk had a huge fight near the mouth Pilatus for not listening to each other and ria blasted Rk for shouting and play with his friends .RK also lost it and shouted at her .



hope you guys liked it.. if not u can definitely say it




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for your first story,
Nice start
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Congrats for your story
Nice start
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Congrats for story
Interesting concept
Does madhu really have cursh on rk Or was she telling truth
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Congrats for your first story..
nice start..
pls continue soon..
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Congrats on your first story
Nice concept, awesome start.
Continue soon waiting for the next update.
Could you please PM me
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very nice start do continue soon
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Congrats for ur first story
nice start
conti...

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