Rishbala FS 'Tum Hi Ho' ||COMPLETED#PG.34||(15/03) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi


Res
res
Congo for new story
Different concept
Rk wants his father's love but he is money minded
I hate dips n sullh


Thanks dear.. Yeah.. Rk & mohan are distant..
Hope u will like the story..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL


Omg! New story.So RK wud b a singer here orlaunch his own music company and madhu too as a singer.Thank god!Its nothing like aashiqui 2.
Loved it.Awesome.


Thanks angel.. Right, rk may launch his music company.. But he is not singer..
And nothing like ashiqui2..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43


Originally posted by: madhumeandyou


interestins n different kind of start. hope rk finds his way to come out into light and teach that money minded mohan n sullu ullu k bacha a gud lesson. i hope u dnt make it a tragic one like aashiqui2. do update soon


Thanks mer.. Rk need someone to pull him out of his shell.. And once he did that.. He would be Rk.. :)
No, dear.. Nothing like ashiqui2..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44


Originally posted by: dharsii



Res
Unres..
Nice start Aani.
Congrates for new one..
Rk is singer..Wow.
Rk is in loneliess and full of darkness in his life..
He wants his father's love..But he didn't understand him..
Feel bad for him..
Dips is too bad..
Madhu is The one who heels his pain and wounds..
She is light of his life..
I like their bonding..
Her words are so valuable..
Waiting for update..
update soon..


Thanks piu..
Yeah.. Rk had a tragic childhood & mohan made it more difficult for him..
He craved for father's love..
Glad u like the part..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45


Originally posted by: aishu007



Res..
unres..
wow aan congrats for this new story
musical love story..i love music very much..
poor rk lost his mother when he was only 10
and that deepali go to hell dips...
madhu is such a nice girl ..

& the way he nursed him..loved it..
as u told that this story is inspired from film aashiqui 2 i have a request plz dont kill rishab or madhu at last & plz give a happy ending to this story dont give a heart broking ending dear aan..
nicely written..you are an amazing writer...!
plz continue soon..
Thanks for the PM..


Thanks ash baby..
So glad u like the start.. But dipali did the right thing by leaving him for madhu.. Lolz..
Be rest assured dear, only musical theme & madhu's soft nature is inspired from the movie.. Rest all is different..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Thanks dear :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47


Originally posted by: harini_


Congrats for new story,
Superb part,
poor Rk feeling bad for him,,
his father blamed him for his mother's death,
he not only lost his mother but he lost his father too,
Dipali left him becoz he is not successful person and chosen Sultan,
Mohan loves Sultan more than Rk,
Madhu is a singer,she works in pub as a part time job,
loving Madhu and loved what Madhu said,
loved the last part hope he quits drinking,
hope he fights for living and become more successful,
thanks for the pm


Thanks dear..
Rk had a bad childhood, and the reason is his father, he pushed him into darkness..
Madhu words's affect him..
He will try to reform himself..
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48


Originally posted by: madhurish


Res...
Sorry Aaniya.. I already have gigolo's love, your special thread for me and also Mer's thread to unres... But still i haven't done anything... I m really busy with my project work.. So extremely sorry...

I will unres all my post real soon... Forgive me for taking time...

Thanks & congratulations for your new story..

Excited to read...

Res... Willl edit later!


Sudha, thankyou...
And please dont be sorry..u can have all tthe time u want.. ;)


Unres..
Super start...
Lol... I tried to imagine madhu in all the singing scenes.. But i failed.. I could only see shraddha kappor.. Lol! But u know what? In Rk's place i imagined Rk only.. Haha... Sont know why? May be while watching Aasiqui 2 and at the bar scene i was only focusing om shraddha.. Lol

*hi-five* I totally agree with u.. Even while writing i can only picturized shradha type girl, not madhu.. I try to put her in shradha's shoes but couldnot..
But with Rk i can write only Rk.. Guess, we either we are top focused on rk else on shradha.. Lolz

I hate Mohan.. Why he is treating his own son like that?his deceased wife even wont forgive him if she is watching what he is doing to their son. And Rk is getting hurt..
Right.. He used to love his wife dearly, but he took no time to move on with another woman for money

First thing she died in a accident.. She slipped and rolled down the stairs and die along with the baby she was carrying.. No way Rk to be blamed.. Its just her ill fate...
Exactly, he assume that rk was playing with her, and somehow he did mischief.


Well mohan can showed his anger on his little boy for a while.. But eventually he shld have understood and treated rk well...
Ya, but then their difference went on growing.. And he never initiate any convo..

See what lose is for him? He married again forgetting his first wife and got another son to love.. But what abt Rk? He lost both his parents... I pity and sympathize for him..
Right.. He got another family.. But Rk could never get another mom dad.. :(

Okay.. No worries Rk.. Now u got ur soulmate.. She will not only heal ur external wounds but also internal wounds... She will cure u with her love...
Hehehee.. Who else is there.. Dipali already dumped him..lol..

Aww... The songs.. My favorite.. And u have written the bar scene so well.. I loved it...

Thanks for this new story...
U said its not like Aasiqui 2.. So i m hoping will give us a happy ending...

Thankyou.. Glad u like the parts.. Ashiqui's all songs are beautiful..
Be rest assured, no tragic ending..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49


Originally posted by: vasavi_sri



Congrats for the new story
Rk lost his mother and at the same day
The love of his father his married again
But Rk was all alone when his father was
With meera and sultan
More Rk was in a depressed state feeling
Alone and deepali who he thought Will
Bring light to his life pushed him more
Into darkness
Madhu's words r like a medicine to his
Wounded heart feeling with hope and confidence


Thanks dear..
Yeah, he has lost his self esteemed by being left out..
Hopefully madhu will build him again
Thankyou :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Jyoraj



Congrats for the new story.
RK is in pain and Madhu inspite of difficult life is hopeful.
Beautiful songs from Ashiqui and hope the similarity ends there. No tragic ending please.
Nicely witten.


Thanks dear..
Both will affect each other's life in their own ways..
And yeah.. The similarity ends here only.. Lolz..
Thankyou :)

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