RISHBALA SS-Chennai Express Love (discontinued)

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi friends...

here is my new story..

This story is inspired from bollywood king & queen sharukh khan & deepika padukone's movie chennai express...once they came on MB for promothing this film & ofcourse i know you all like this film which is rich in comedy,action,romance..

but this not the actual version of that movie..i made some changes on plot..i only want to continue this story after knowing your respond...if anyone dont want me to continue this story i will stop writing this..so giving a small prologue...

thanks..

Aiswarya..

character sketch

Rishab kundra

Rishab kundra (26)is the son of radha kundra & mohan kundra...he loss his parents when he was only 10..after his parents death look after by his dadi meera & dada harshavardan..

Madhubala chowdary

Madhubala chowdary (22)is the daughter of balraj chowdary & padmini..she loss her mother when she was only 6..her father is a famous don in komban gramam in tamil nadu..

CHENNAI EXPRESS LOVE

prologue

"rishu...wake up beta..."meera called..

"dadi let me sleep.."he lazily moved to other side..

"no.."meera drags the bedsheet from him..

"dadi..."he sat on the bed..

"today is your dada's birthday.."meera.

"what...hah..oh shit..i forgot about..his 100 b'day na.."rk..meera nodded..

"v want to celebrate this nani..wait have plan...i will make dada suprized.."rk...he took shower & goes to harshavardan's room..he saw his dada lying on the bed..he runs to him & hugs his dada tightly..

"happy birthday dada.."rk..but his dada did'nt opened his..

"dada...lazy man wake up..today is your b'day.."rk..his dada still continued his position..

"dada..dada.."he called again by shooking his dada..

"dadi...plz come..look dada..."he called..meera comes & saw no movement in harsha vardan..

"rishu..call dr. beta.."meera..rk nodded & dialed dr's. number..

after sometime

dr. checked him & says "sorry he is no more.."rk gets shocked..meera wept..

after 1 week..

"rishu your dada always used to say that after his death immerce his aches in ganges & rameshvaram...i will immerse half part in ganga u want to immerse the othere part in rameshvaram.."meera..he nodded & hugs meera...rk went his room & lay on bed..he gets a call & pick it..

"hello dude..."

"hey sikky,sultan.."rk.

"how r u..?"sullu.

"i am fine..but the situation here is.."rk.

"mm..v know.."sullu.

"dudu..do u comming with us to goa..v can enjoy this vacation.."sullu.

"no sultan..i want to go to rameshvaram tomarrow..for immersing my dada's ashes.."rk.

"oh crap...just leave it..& come with us.."sikky.

"no sikky..i promised to dadi.."rk.

"u & your promise...just come with us v can immerse it anywhere in goa..just come man.."sikky..finally he agreed..

next morning

"bye dadi.."rk.

"bye rishu..take care beta.."meera.

in chennai express

rk's phone rang & he took the phone..

"hey dude where r u..."sikky..

"i am on the way..u wait in kalyan junction station.."he cuts the call..rk reached the place & meet his friends..

"sikky,sullu how r u..?"he hugged him.

"fine..come lets go.."sultan..

"wait..oh no shit...i forgot to take the ashes..wait i will come now.."he runs & entered the train again & take the ashes & when he about to know he saw a beautiful girl running to board it..he gave his hand to her & she holds his hand..

so how was this..i know this prologue is same as the movie but comming parts are little bit different from the movie...if u want me to continue this i will continue or else i will stop this story from here itself..

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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aishu awesome start.

Congrats on the new story.

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM

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sapana

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Posted: 8 years ago

congrats aishu for new story. .
superb start. .
early waiting for update. ..
thanks for pm. .

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vishti4eva

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Posted: 8 years ago

Anything on rishabala is welcome loved the start pls do continue

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harini

@harini06

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Posted: 8 years ago

Congrats for the new story,
Awesome start,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start.congrats on your story.please continue

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 8 years ago

There girl..
Would love to read this as rishbala versin..
I loved the movie ofcoourse..
Count mmy comment as ike plz cause my like is not working.. As pages are notloading fully..

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: janani04
Super

Thank you janani..

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi friends this part contains some tamil dialogues..i am not expert in tamil but this is only a try..if any error is there plz forgive me..

Chennai Express Love

part-1

she hold his hand & he drag her inside..they have an eyelock..

"Thanks.."girl.

"oh its ok.."rk..he tries to getout but stops sees another man running to board the train..he drags him also inside..the girl gets shocked..he again tried to go but he sees 2 more men r comming..he helps them to get inside & tries to go but the train had already leaves the station..

"oh damn.."rk says & get inside the train...he saw the girl sitting in a seat & sits opposite to her...he keep looking at her but she looks away..

"madhu ivan thana..?"one of the man..

(madhu is it he..?)

she looks him without answering..they turns to rk & asks him..

"nee thana..?"man.

(is it u ..?)

rk looks them without understanding anything...

"ongitaa thaa..nee thana.."man.

(i am asking to u..is it u..?)

They took his bag from his hand as they saw he is playing with it without giving them answer..

"hey its my bag.."rk.

"ippo sollu..athu nee thana.."man.

(now tell..is it u..?")

rk understood they r asking something to him but what..?he thought "may they r asking is this bag was mine or not.."

"yes..yes of course..its mine.."rk tells to them by nodding his head positively...madhu hits on her head & nodded to him no..

They glares at him & gave back his bag..he though "y these fattly people glaring at me..anyways this girl is looking like a gem surrounded by 3 garbages..."he looks her & smiles..

he saw his cell is ringing & pick the call..

"hey dude where u r..v r waiting.."sikky.

"i missed the station...u wait in next station..& dont worry about i got a nice company..her eyes..wow..looking like 2 stars..her lips..i have no words depict it.."rk.

"wait..wait..first look she wears chappel or not.."sikky.

"no problem...she dont know hindi.. "rk.

"so u r enjoying your journey han.."sikky..

"plz dont disturb us...i want to love her for some time.."he cuts the call..he starts singing parodies of hindi songs by looking at her..

"i have chappel in my foot.."madhu tells to him..he looks her astonished..

"u...u..u..hindi.."rk.

"not only hindi..i know all indian languages.."madhu.

"oh its nice.."he looks away..The trains stops at next station & he tries to go but the 3 men blocked his..

"hey plz move...i want to go.."rk..they shows him sickles..rk's eyes welled up..they signalled him to sit...he went back to his seat & sits there silently..

"nan konjam padukkanam.."madhu.

(i want to lie for sometime..)

The 3 men nodded & goes from there...she looks him..

"cam i ask u onething..what the hell is happening around me.."rk.

"its simple u r comming to our village.."madhu.

"what..oh..for what..y u r taking me with u..ok first tell who r u..?"rk.

"i will explain everythiny..u want to hear it calmly...firstly selfintroduction i am madhubala balraj chowdary..daughter of balraj chowdary.."madhu.

"hai i am rishab kundra..everyone call me rk.."he extended his and shook his hand with her..

"now coming to the point my father is a big don in komban gramam.."madhu..

"what...doo...doo..don..?"rk.

"hah...my appa(pappa) have a friend shamseer malik..he have one son abhay malik..he fixed my marriage with him but i dont want to get married now..so i prowled from my house after leaving a letter i am going with my boyfriend.."madhu.

"then what happend..did he betrayed u..?"rk.

"who..?"madhu.

"your bf u told me now.."rk.

"oh i dont have any bf..i thought when i had written like that they did'nt follow me..but for my bad luck he ordered to his goons to find both of us.."madhu.

"so now u r in distress hah..."rk.

"hah..but the actual problem is not for me...for u.."madhu.

"for me but..but what i do.."rk.

"bit before they asked u something na.."madhu.

"yes..actually i did'nt understand what they asked..."rk.

"i know it..they asked whether u r my bf or not..u nodded..your fate.."madhu.

"what..so i told them i am that person.."he stood from his seat..she nodded..

"oh god..damn.."he hits his head on the wall..

"this all becoz of u.."he shouted.

"aaha...now all default is on my head...i tried to escape from them but u helped them na...then now u r blaming me.."she shouted..

"ok..ok..now can u tell me plz how can v escape from this situation.."rk..

"there is one way..but u want to obey what all i said..ok.."madhu.

"ok.."rk.

"when v reach my village my papa will come & ask me some questions..i will give answers to it & then looks u..u want to nod your head then.."madhu..

"like this na.."he dangeled his head continually...

"oh enough.."madhu..he stopped..the train reached the place & one of the man drags the chain & the train stopped...rk & madhu get off from the train...he saw huge amount of people walking towards them..

"madhu...these people...?"rk.

"they all r my appa's goons.."madhu..he gulped saliva..then reached nears madhu's father balraj chowdary..he glares at rk..he looks away..he asked her something in tamil & she replaied...he looks rk..madhu looks him and told to nod..he nodded..at the very next moment his neck was covered with sickles...rk rolled his head without moving..balraj signalled them to leave him..the leaves him..he took long breathe in relief...

"come lets go to my home..."madhu called..

"no..no..i wont come...i want to go back to my home.."rk..

"dont behave like a child...u r a man na..if u deny the sickles touched your neck will cut it.."madhu..he groped his neck & thought "i will be ugly by looking without head.."

"come.."madhu again called..

"hah.."rk.

on the way.

"madhu what u told to your papa.."rk.

"i just said some lies.."madhu.

"what..?"rk.

"firstly i said me & u r in deep love..so v eloped & get married..then told u r from north india so dont know tamil.."madhu.

"its true na.."rk.

"hah..then my third lie..its the greatest lie.."madhu.

"whats that..?"rk.

"i told him i am 2 months pregnant with your child.."madhu.

"what..pregnant..oh..how he believed it.."rk.

"actually i gone from here before 4 months...i stayed in my friend's house..but they come to know that i am in mumbai..so i go from there but they saw me near railway station..so i think to get inside the train to save myself..but u fool..u spoiled everything..."madhu.

"so thats the matter...chee..what everyone think about me..i want this for cheating my dadi.."rk..they reached madhu's house..

"is this your house..?"rk.

"yes.."madhu..he looks around & thought "india's half of the population is here.."

"what r u looking...?''madhu.

"no i just..very small family.."rk..the women in the family came & hugs her..her paati(dadi)cups her face & asked.."ethukkamma ippidiyellam panra..?"

(why u do all these..?)

madhu hugs her & wipes her tears..she sees rk & looks balraj..he told it is madhu's husband..she looks madhu..she nodded...paati signalled rk to come..he slowly stepped towards her as he dont know y she is calling...rk reach near her & takes her blessings..

"oo perenna..?"paati.

(what is your name)

he looks madhu..

"she is asking your name.."madhu.

"oh..rishab kundra.."rk...at that time they hears the sound of a jeep & one of the man tells abhay malik is comming...they all looks at the direction..

plz give like & drop your reviews friends..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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sapana

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Posted: 8 years ago

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wow ...superb start. .aishu. .
love it. .
little different from Chennai express movie...
rk didn't know Tamil. ..
just like in movie..madhu also lied ..but also add one more lied ..she is pregnant. ..lolz
thanks for pm
update soon

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