Rishbala SS ~ Dil Na Jaane.. Kyun..!! ~ (Teaser)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"This marriage is forced on me, you know that.. So, don't expect anything from me. And now you convince your family that you will not go with me at Mumbai." He said removing the garland from his neck.

"But.. I..? You know my papa's health..."

"See Madhubala.. I really not interested in your family matter. My dad asked me to visit his friend here, so I came here leaving all my works but what had happen with me? I end up marrying you.. And moreover my respected parents didn't bother to show any objections.. Huhh..! But now enough..! Iss shadi ka mere liye koi wajooth nahi hai. I love someone else. If you can't tell them, I'll tell them.." Saying this he was going to leave but stopped by her words, "No wait.. I will talk with my father, you please don't say anything."

"Then go ahead." He showed her the exit door.

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Madhu walked in her father's room and saw him sleeping. She walked to him and took sit near to him, "Papa..!" She called him, he slightly opened his eyes when she continued, "Papa, why did you ask him to marry me? I don't deserve him papa. So what.. He is your friend's son.. We aren't perfect match, our lifestyle is different. And..." She paused as a tear escape from her eyes, "You shouldn't ask him. He will not accept me ever because he..." She paused feeling no movement in his father's body. "Papa? Papa..!" Madhu shook him but he didn't move. "Papa..?"

******

"I am sorry.. He is no more." The doctor declared making everyone shocked.

"NO..!" Madhu exclaimed. "You are lying. My papa is perfectly fine. You check him again. No.. My papa can't leave me like this." She ran to him and shook his body asking, "Papa open your eyes. Please.."

Seeing her getting violent, RK reached to her and held her in his arms, "Madhu.. Calm down.. He.. He is no more.." Madhu cried vigorously.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start to story
Madhu married but the groom not wanting to stay married saying he was forced n she had to deny to go with him
Is rk the groom ?? I don't think so as he's comforting her when her father died not pushing her away unless he's feeling she's his responsibility now but I'm still doubting it
I think maybe he's just a friend for now
Looking forward to u continuing n story unfolding
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow.. Interesting..
Rk is married to madhu but love someone else.. I guess it to be dipali or ria..
Nice..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😛hi nice prologue...waiting for the story to unfold...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue,
waiting for the story to unfold,
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting starting
rk came to meet his father's frnd nd marry with his daughter madhu
rk is not ready to accept this marriage nd love someone else
but after madhu's father death may be madhu will also go with kundras
continue...nd update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was sad! How heartbreaking for a daughter. 😭

And now what will happen to her?? Dil na jaane!

Good luck with your story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start. Madhu got married to someone. That person loves someone else. And dsnt want to continue this relation. Mallik passed away. That's sad. Did madhu marry RK? Or someone else? Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the New Story.
Fantastic teaser, Rishbala are already married but RK is in love with somebody else and he is not going to take Madhu with him to Mumbai, poor Madhu lost her father and her dreams are shattered too.
Please continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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