SS: Beauty and Her Beast (Chapter 3 pg 8)&replies to comments pg 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone!🤗
Before i start on my blabber, a short intro:
I'm Sanjana! It's super super nice to be on this forum! Believe it or not, I just recently started watching Madhubala (and am SO SO sad that it's over already)
I've known Drashti since Geet days (and have loved her even back then) and Vivian since PKYEK (and thought he was absolutely fantastic). So I'm not really sure why I held back on Madhubala? BAAAD decision on my part because now im absolutely obsessed with RishBala and the show is over 😭
I guess that's also kind of why I'm making this post/starting this SS! If there's one thing y'all should know it's that I LOVE writing😃. So writing on RishBala just seems appropriate 😆. The show is over but that doesn't mean we can't keep the chemistry alive😉
Anyways, enough of my bak bak, I'll just post up a short prologue and y'all can tell me what you think😳 Love you again!!! And super excited to meet everyone!!! <3

Sanjana
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Prologue

Isn't it funny how a single incident...one event...one moment in time is enough to change someone's entire life? We go through life thinking we have it all under control..that we are in charge of our own lives. In one moment..we have it all...luxury...family...freedom. And in the next? Everything is stripped away. In the end, we aren't the ones who laugh. Life has the last laugh. It always does.

Three knocks changed my life.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

That's all it took.

"Papa," I had thought as I jumped up from the sofa excitedly to the door. It was our first week in Mumbai. A new city...a new life. We had lived in Dehradun for as long as I could remember. If it hadn't been for my father's job transfer, we may have stayed there for the rest of my life. Mumbai was a good change.

It had been my dad's first day on the job. I was excited to ask him about his day. I rushed toward the door and flung it open, my questions ready to pour out of my mouth. But the moment I laid eyes on him, my words died on my lips.

"Papa...what...what is this?" What I saw in front of me made me stumble. My dad. Covered in dirt...eyes red from crying...shirt buttons ripped.. he smelled of sweat and pain. "Your mother had an accident. It was a hit and run. She's in the hospital. Critical condition. They don't know if she'll live. The doctors say...they say she has a head injury...they need to...do an operation. I don't have enough money for it... I...I've lost Madhu. It's all over."

And just like that, the world I knew came crashing down in front of my eyes. One moment...all it had taken was one moment...
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So what did you guys think? Is it any good?😳
Love you all and waiting to see what you think!!!😃

Love,

Sanjana

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Posted: 8 years ago
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first of all welcome to the MB land sanjana ... 🤗 now coming to a story .its really an interesting one ..plz keep writing ... looking forward to it .wanna see i mean read that how madhu and RK meet . and is this story is from madhu's POV ?? its lovely overall... since its your first time here . really wanna suggest some good writers to u so u can read their stories too .. one of the best writers in mb land are Lazy aka Bookworm , madhurish (dont know her real name) , evil angel , piya (but she has deleted all her work because of copywrite issues... anyways what i think is u will mostly love lazy .she is the BeST among all!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -LoveAnnie-

first of all welcome to the MB land sanjana ... 🤗 now coming to a story .its really an interesting one ..plz keep writing ... looking forward to it .wanna see i mean read that how madhu and RK meet . and is this story is from madhu's POV ?? its lovely overall... since its your first time here . really wanna suggest some good writers to u so u can read their stories too .. one of the best writers in mb land are Lazy aka Bookworm , madhurish (dont know her real name) , evil angel , piya (but she has deleted all her work because of copywrite issues... anyways what i think is u will mostly love lazy .she is the BeST among all!!!


Thank you so so much Annie! I'm really really excited to be a part of this forum! And YES I will definitely look into works from these authors! <3 I love reading FFs and have been going through a few on the forum! I guess that's kind of also how I was inspired! 😳
Love you <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sanjana once again welcome to the Forum.
Brilliant start, waiting to read more of the story. Hope the accident is not done by RK, waiting to read how Rishbala meet.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum Sanjana,
Congrats for your first story,
Interesting prologue,
curious to know how Rishbala are going to meet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum sanjana...hope you will enjoy here as I'm ...
Congrats for your story...
Interesting prologue...wanna read more
Waiting for it...
All the best Dr...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum sanjana..
Congrates for story.
Nice start.
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear
Superb start
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the Forum. I think I can understand your hesitation in watching Madhubala.

I have been hesitating in watching Vivian's and Drashti's new shows also. It is hard to watch your favorite in a new role.

But better late than never!

As much as I enjoyed their previous roles, both the actors got me hooked to Madhu and RK!

Now to your story ... very interesting title and I am enjoyed the prologue.

Good luck!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome back. Just love to read that you want to keep RK and Madhu's chemistry alive. It was never dead it is still alive in our hearts and mind. Glad that you decided to write a story about them. Thanks a lot. Anyways the start of your story is pretty good. Please continue my dear

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