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Supervampire thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story Di
this is also start with M
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Supervampire

Congrats for new story Di

this is also start with M

Thank you dear.will update soon.m for magicalmiragešŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ur title reminds me of Twilight midnight sun.. Novel.. I love the novel.. Will read & comment on ur stories after exam okk..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Midnight Sun

Part1

"who are they priest,our midnight sun,who is going rescue from us."village chief
"I am getting a vague vision,I will ask my guru and will inform u chief"priest
The parents who lost their child were crying.the villagers looked at them with pity.
"the witch is taking a newborn each year.she took thier soul to strengthen hers."villagrr
"how could we stop her"villager
"alina is very powerful,her castle on the hill top is spell bound and no one could ever step in there."chief
"lets pray to God to help us out her claws"chief


Morning

Someone knocked at chiefs door."who is that at this early hours?"he opened the door.
"we r from far away village.we got expelled from there.can u give us s shelter in this village."man
Chief welcomed them to the house."but y do they expelled u?"
"our village chiefs son wanted to marry our daughter.but she is only 17 and that boy is a jerk.so I didn't accept the proposal and they expelled us from the village"man
"ok. You can stay at this village. Btw I am bittu"chief
"I am shamsher, she is my wife padmini and my daughter madhubala"shamsher
"I will give u land for agriculture and a house near yo it.but it is near to the forest and don't try yo go to the hill in the forest."bittu
"ok"bittuji "Shamsher

Alinas castle

"hey prince,what are you doing?."mukund
"mukund I told u thousand times not to call me prince but rishab"
"who ever dare to call queen alinas son by name"mukund
"Yes you can mukund"rishab
"I am just practising today's lessons"rishab chanted some spells and a red rose appeared on his hand,he gave it to mukund."it's not for me rishab,it's for your fiance dipali"m
"don't talk about her,u know I am not interested in her."rishab
"oh you are talking about the visions u have,don't rishab, queen says that it's just your illusions"mukund
"hi rishab,"dipali went to the room.
"wow...were do you get this flower from?"dios
"rishab made this"mukund
"what did u call him?he is the next king of witches ."dips
"sorry princess"mukund left the room
"she moved towards him and played with his shirts button.he swatt away her hand
"don't dare to touch me dips"
"y not I am your would be wife and only I have the right to touch u"dipali
"you are only my fiance,not my wife."rishab
"I will be your wife,when u complete your studies"dips
"we will think about it later now I am going for a horse ride"rishab
"may I accompany you"dips
"no, thanks"rishab
"rishab..."dips called
He left without looking back.

Madhu looked around the New house.its a small one but she liked it.she went out of the house and looked at the forest.she felt s strange pull towards it,
"madhu what r u doing?"shamsher.
"this forest looks beautiful papa"madhu
"no it's scary and don't ever go there"shamsher
"yes papa"madhu

Rishab and mukund was riding the horse.
"hey rishab,there is a village outside this forest"mukund
"I know mukund"rishab
"one of the servant said that many beautiful girls are there in the village,and they used to bath I'm the river flowing near to the forest.let's go and spend good times"mukund wincked.
"no mukund I am not coming,I am going back"rishab
"please rishab only once,for me"mukund pleaded.
They went to the river bank.they saw some girls bathing on the other side.
"lets peep through that trees"mukund
"mukund do whatever u likes,but I am not interested.I will wait for you here"rishab
Mukund climbed up the tree to get a clear view,bit unlucky the branch broke and he fell into the water. The girls saw him and they shouted.
"y r u girls shouting"madhu
They pointed at mukund.madhu and few girls swam near him and caught him, drag him to the bank.madhu slapped mukund
"r u not ashamed to do it"madhu
Mukund called out"rishab help me..."
"oh...there is another one too"madhu
"don't let him go. I will catch him."madhu swim to the other side of the river.she saw rishab sitting on the horse.
"you jerk...don't you ashamed to peek like this."madhu
"excuse me,who r u? I don't understand what u mean?"rishab
"get down and talk"madhu said rudely
Rishab get down and looked at her."I asked r u not ashamed?"
"I havent done myself to be ashamed.but you should feel that"rishab
"what do u mean"madhu
"look at yourselves,"rishab
She looked herself and realised that she is fully drenched making her every curves visible.even her n*****s were peeking through her narrow blouse.she crossed her hands to conceal her curves.
"go back and wear something to hide your..."he signalled at her b****t.
Madhu turned back and swam back to river bank"he escaped"madhu
"what we have to do with him?"a girl
"we will beat him, girls surrounded him and beat mukund.when they were done,mukund swam back
"rishab u cheat,"mukund
"what u expect me to do. Come and beaten up by that girls"rishab
"you could use the magic"mukund
"no I won't mukund,you got the punishment for your mistake.I think you deserved it"rishab
"rishab u done any magic to break that branch?"mukund
Rishab wincked and mount up the horse,ride away before mukund could reach
"rishab I will kill u"mukund
"come on get me if u can"rishab


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rishab is Alina's son and engaged to Dipali
Rishab taught a lesson to Mukund so that he does not do that again.
Rishab's mind will be plagued by Madhu's thoughts now.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
Rishab is Alina's son...
I didn't expect ...
Dips is his would be.
Mukund is nice boy..
He was beaten by girls...
Rk & madhu are fight.Madhu understood him wrongly.
Thanks for pm
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.But that Deepali rk's fiance .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update Dr...
Ohh ...there was someone insisting to marry madhu but she and her parents left the place...
Rishabh is Alina's son and is a fiancee to dipali...ohhh God
Seems rishabh is not interested in their world...
Now when he saw madhu he will be thinking only by her...
Thanks for the PM Dr
Update soon
All the best...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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gr8 update Di
Rishabh is witch Alina's son nd engaged with Dipali
he is not interested in Dipali but she is always behave like chipku
mukund is rishabh frnd
rishabh taught a good lesson to mukund
he will never do it again
thanx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update,
Rishab is Alina's son and dipali is his fiance but he is not interested in her,
Madhu and her parents left there village and came to bittuji for help he gave shelter to them,
Rishbala met,
Rk performed a magic and taught a good lesson to Mukund he deserved it,
thanks for the pm

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