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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Rach congrats on the new story.
Sounds interesting and intriguing too, Madhu is already married but ran away from it, she is starting a new life in Mumbai, who is the stranger in the train with her.
Curious to know continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank u ananya.I will try to start the story asap

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: RijaMalik
awesome prolauge.
why madhu wipe off all the traces of her being madhubala

Thank u.will update asap

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Interesting start.
too many questions.
eager to read more.

Thank u.Will update soon.please read my mysterious fan

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Clara20
Superb prolouge...
Whom madhu is married and who is the guy in train..waiting for update

Thank u.will update soon.please read my mysterious fan

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
hey rach.. Congo on this new story.. Catchy start.. I think this man is rk.. may be madhu got married when she was child.. Waiting for upcoming updates.. All the best rach..!

Thank u aani.please give support for this story also by your valuable comments.

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Rishkara

@Rishkara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

very interesting prologue dear.nice concept.

very well narrated .continue soon

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: leena45678
very interesting prologue dear.nice concept.
very well narrated .continue soon

Thank you dear.keep reading.will update asap

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Married To A Child

Part1

"I am also going to Mumbai.is this your first journey to Mumbai?"man

"yes,"madhu

"u look a little nervous"man

"no it's just..."madhu

"don't lie.it's clear from your face.btw I am sikkandher Bhatia"he extended hand

"I am sk"she held his hand and shook.

"sk?"sikky

"sania kusuva"madhu

"u r from ujjain, right?"sikky

"how do u know"madhu

"well I saw you boarding.your father accompanied u"

Yeah "madhu

"I am a native of Mumbai.my mother owns a land at dhadrawada.so I came here often to take care"sikky

"you are thier only son"madhu

"hmm...actually she is my stepmother and I have a brother too.he likes to stay away from all these business.I told Mom to sell thus.but she is very fond of this land as its her late husbands land."sikky

"oh that's sad"madhu

"u have any siblings "sikky

"no I am only daughter to my babuji"Madhu

"that is y he and his men followed u to railway station,he is very protective na"sikky

"why that much men follows u,is your father a don"sikky

"not don but he is like a king of our village"madhu said

"oh like Chennai express"sikky

"yes,but here I am not going to fall for u"madhu

"Ok..ok"sikky laughed

"well your highness may I ask y r u going to mumbai from your kingdom"sikky asked sarcastically

"for joining college"madhu

"y? U don't have any colleges at MP?"sikky

"I will get admissions at any college,but Mumbai is my dream and want to enjoy my life atleast for three years"madhu

"three years?after that u r going to be hanged by your father?"sikky

"hanging?Yeah it's true in another sense"madhu

"what?"sikky

"nothing...u know about very well na?can u help me?"Madhu

"ofcourse where u want to go"

She gave him the address."ok I will drop u, my car is at railway station"Sikky

"ok thank u.good night"madhu.they went to sleep.madhu thought,"how could I trust a random guy.I have to do that, I am going to face so many strangers"she touched her bag and confirmed that the gun is safe.

Train reached Mumbai."hey sania I will drop u."sikky dropped her."sania take my card.if u want any help call me.Consider me as a friend bye"sikky

Madhu thought"he is agentleman"

She looked at the card "sikkandher Bhatia,kundra industries,Mumbai.

Madhu went to hostel and got her admission."your room is105"said mattren

She went to her room.she saw a girl sitting on the bed and crying.

"hey y r u crying?"Madhu

"I am feeling sad to be away from my family"the girl wept

"r u homesick"Madhu smirked.

"yeah I miss my parents"

"hey look it's our privilege that our parents are not with us.v can do anything funny na,just chill"madhu

.girl looked at her and wiped her tears."really"

"yep"madhu

"then I can booze,dance with any guys"girl

"yes"madhu.the girl relaxed."I am ruhi jugalwalia from pune"ruhi

"I am sk,sania kusuva from MP"

"friends?"they hugged

"I am vac chemistry"madhu

"me too "ruhi

"wow classmates too"ruhi jumped in joy

They helped eachother to set thier belongings.

"our college will start onday after tomorrow,what about an outing?"madhu

"yeah,I am ready, but we don't know this place "ruhi

"no problem"madhu called sikky

"yes sikkandher Bhatia speaking"sikky

"I am sania kusuva"u remember?"

"yes your highness,"sikky

"can u tell me a good pub here"madhu

"wanna booze han?poison iv. You want me to accompany u?"sikky

"no it's ok. I have my classmate with me "madhu

"ok then Carry on "sikky

"thank u bye"madhu

"sania you made a friend here?"ruhi

"yes I met him at train "madhu

"you r so fast"ruhi

"oh no he is just a friend,he is not my type"madhu

"then who is your type?"ruhi

"hmm...actually I want someone for a timepass, just three years of college life"

I need a PATTAKKA

So guys we will meet our pattakka next episode.please read and comment.

Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

I thought that was rk but alas it is sikky

So is rk sikky's bro ??

Superb update

So they are going to pub i think madhu and rk will meet there

Edited by v.p.joshi - 8 years ago

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rachana

@magicalmirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
I thought that was rk but alas it is sikky
So is rk sikky's bro ??
Superb update
So they are going to pub i think madhu and rk will meet there

Thank u dear.will update soon

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