Rishbala SS 'ImPassiOned' ||COMPLETED@PG.71|| (30/11) - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
Too good update. Madhu's feeling and RK . Just love the catching and holding of both them. Madhu is real fun and RK trying his best to keep away from her . Good
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally unres... 😳
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally unres..page 23 and 24...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update well done loved it thanks for pm
madhu cqres for Rk n Rk can see that now
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome start and update dear Aaniya..⭐️
Part 1



So Rk is a goon..and Sultan's right hand..
He wants yo take revenge from Shamsher..😲
and Sultan loves Madhu..😆😡
Rk kidnapped Madhu coz of Sultan and now he has to take care of her ..as Sultan said..
Written superbly..totally diff Rk..and hey chatterbox Madhu..
Sikky is 🤣
Rk is irritated by her ques.🤣
Yet to read other parts..will try to read them soon.😳
Thanks for pm dear.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part2
Superb part ..loved it.👏
Sultan is indirectly helping Rk -Madhu to get together..😉

he he 😆after all he is sultan..🤣
and he wants Rk to take care of Madhu as she is his love..and Rk is fed up of her..😆
well Rk is too stricked and Madhu is so unique piece ..he is irritated by her behavior..😉

Madhu is enjoying with him it seems ..i mean she is not at all worried for what will happen now??😛

their scenes are just wow..❤️

Thanks for pm dear Aaniya.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3
again superb part ..loved it 👏
though late to comment 😳
but latest you know 😉

Madhu is amazing and Rk too btw ..😛
loved Madhu ❤️

Rk and Madhu are in Madhumahal ..


and Sutan made it for them..🤣

Madhu tries to escape but failed and feeling sorry for doing so..

and she didn't wanted to hurt him 😳
Rk fb says about him

and he also thought that someone is caring for him..

Rk is so irritated ..annoyed with her but she is chatterbox.😆

how she us arguing over dress 😆
She even warned him to not drink..⭐️

so sweet ..
you amazed with your different stories and changing it into FS to SS is great idea..😃

thanks for pm dear.

cont.soon.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

hurry. ...

me first...
dedicate...hmm...!!!
aajkal tumhare har story me ki dedicate...ya..note milta..
mere lia...feeling happy...and thank you.. 😳
My pleasure sap..


wow..what a couple... silence king and chatter box queen...

later sultan may become harmful..but now seeing him i laugh hard... 😆
Ya.. Later he can be cobra.. And now not at all harmful..

poor rk become sandwiched between them...

madhumahal... i also want to see..
Let first madhu see then u too can see, lol..

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and sultan planning to kept one bed in dinning hall..
go..boy...
later rishbala used it 😉
U naa.. Thinking naughty,😆


wow action...
madhu know there is no way for escape..
phir vi she try..
Better try then cry..😉.

madhu is guilt...
and rk is become soft...

happy for your first ss...
amazing update...

thank ypu so much..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish

Thank u so much for the dedication! I'm glad I hit the bulls eye once again...
now coming to the update... I'm in love with this Rk... so much... i like men who speaks less... i hate when they blabber like girls... men are made to listen not to lecture... (according to me)..
I Too agree.. If men do chatter chitter then what will woman do..😆... My pleasure..

first part... laugh worthy... i was laughing and rolfing... thanks to two crazies Sultan and Madhu... both the stupids were repeating the same questions and annoyed Rk... poor boy got sandwiched between them...
Hahahaa.. They were doing repeat telecast for rk to hear properly..

LOL!! he locked the swimming poor area so that this silly girl wont drown herself in the water... but man... you shouldn't have done that... instead u should pushed and let her float in the water after drinking the nasty chlorinated pool water... so that you can give her CPR or mouth to mouth respiration and all... this way u can feel her up and kiss her too nah?
Gosh..☺️.. Rk is not that smart, so let it be..☺️

hehe... this girl is not at all worried that she is kidnapped and her family would be worried.. she is so enjoying her time wth Rk... oh girl... she was unashamedly drooling at Rk... but who will not love to have a free feast?
When Rk is the kidnapper.. What else will she do..😉]

hahaha... again and again she is proving to Rk that she is silly, childish and stupid too... when he explicitly tells her not to try to escape... and she is only safe with him (so true) but still she tries to seek help from those rogues and put herself in trouble... thank goodness Rk enjoyed the fight after babysitting for too long and took her safely with him...
Something refreshing for rk, she got.. She always defy him..😆

loving this story... nicely written...
thanks for the pm... do update the next part soonish!

Thank ypu so much.. Yes.. Will try to update soonish..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vishuv



Lolz this Madhu is crazy... Lion and Tiger...thank god she didn't say LigerThen she could have fused both the species which even Scientists find it difficult to do hehe...
Who knows, she can even do that through her imaginayion..😉

Good Aani... You have kept up your word so unlike me. I am an utter waste in promises
And as usual the update was rocking... To your style!
Lol..!

After reading the whole update my first reaction was to scold our stupid heroine... Her escape plan is perfect but she failed to identify a person by his face. Face is the index of the mind and in most of the cases girls tend to have a primary instinct to find the fake one. I wish she could have done it. But I knew why you thought that scene...! Yes it's to make RK realize that there is someone who cares for him, cries for him, feel sad and guilty...!!
Yes.. Thats right.. Stories of love incomplete without heroine in trouble.. Lol

Unlike that fool Sultan. Man he said that he doesn't worry about him but worried about Madhu??!How rude? So Madhu overtook RK... And his priority is her!
Rk was never his responsibility or priority.. He is simply having him for his benefits

Rk prefers silence Lol!! But he himself is slowly coming out of his shell... Madhu is indeed a magic in his life. Hope she would cure his wounds with her love... And let that sultan get busy in building Madhu MahalI heard that it took 17 years to build Taj Mahal... Let this ullu sullu take the same time...then he will be grandpa to Rishbala's children and he can happily spoon feed them
Lol.. Then story would be incomplete with villian too😉

ROFL poor RK... Sandwitched between a chatter box and a stupid lover boy!! Haha whatever she says Sultan was repeating it like an idiot. He doesn't want Madhu to be unhappy but he himself is gonna make her... It's sure by now that she feels safe only with him, esp after that incident. I guess when the moment comes... Madhu leaving him and forced to go to Sultan RK will realize his love and fight for her... Just a random guess Hehe...
Okk.. Nice guess.. Must say😉

Super!! Sudha akka prediction is true... I always read her comments so I knew it when you replied that she had hit the bulls eye
Hahahaa.. Yes.. She did..


Wait wait... Sultan is going to arrange bed on dining table or near it??This guy became mad in love... Or should I say obsession
He is gonna make bed in the dinning table..🤣


Thanks for the PM dear... Good it's short story now!!

Thanks u so much souwmiya..!

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